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Brown-eagle

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I'm in awe at the people thinking that chapter 3 will be the chapter that turns or evens the playing field. Hutch is going to suffer more and more but from here on out it will become a Public Humiliation right in his face. No more Vivian pretending to hide her slutty ways.

There is some dialogue in this chapter 2 that suggests that Vivian still "somewhat" cares for Hutch by trying to hide her affairs, telling him that she Loves him any chance she gets and begging Cristian many times to have Hutch think that all he is suffering is nothing but a "Noble Sacrifice"

This next chapter I believe will be the point that really breaks Hutch down. Vivian will not hide her slutty ways from Hutch anymore. There are teasers for a party at Cristians house where we see many people gather i believe that's where Hutch public humiliation will commence.

However there is also a dialogue of hope for Hutch. Cristian made it clear that Hutch is the best when it comes down to numbers. I believe Hutch can bring Cristians Empire down from behind the scenes however he will need Cristians niece to pull that off....unless Cristian niece also betrays Hutch??
 

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I have a somewhat similar take on what I think the author was trying to accomplish with Rain and Sunshine that I will post shortly.
Interested in what you will say. But what is said here is in tune with my opinion from earlier that we have here a sort of "liberal", alternative solution presented (alternative to submission to Christian) which establishes and propagates a legitimizing narrative in that the wife rightfully demands an open lifestyle in order to get her sexual needs met and the husband has to follow because he couldn't otherwise satisfy her. In the end in my opinion it justifies Vivian as being a desperate and unsatisfied housewife who has to follow her sexual needs.
 

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SC stories I have a question is there a pic of Addison with her arms around Hutch from the back in what looks like an apartment. I swear I saw that somewhere.
 

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Continuity error. Viv has her wedding ring on in the morning after Sunshine and Rain "help her out." She left the ring on her nightstand, so unless it can teleport, it shouldn't be there. Not complaining, just pointing out a funny little inconsistency that made me chuckle.
 

Athyyra

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While I agree with you, this isn't going to happen. I think Hutch is the one person that doesn't physically survive this story. I don't want it to be that way, but that's what's going to happen. 100% of NTR games ends with the husband in worse condition once everything is said and done and this will be no exception. I think Hutch takes his own life and even darker still, I think he does it after a fight between Vivian and himself and she comes back to their house and he's dead in the house and then she calls Christian and tells him that Hutch is dead and she goes right back to his bed again.
Even though that may be what happens here, I can't help but pull for Hutch. I dig netorase, and I'm not suggesting that that's what this story is, but man....I really dislike Vivian. I mean, to some degree when she was with the couple I thought well maybe she'll figure this out WITH Hutch, but after the hotel, I just lost all hope for anything good coming out of her behavior. I really hate to think that Hutch is the loser (or worse) in the end, but it pisses me off that she's basically the uber driving him there. SC Stories has put together one helluva game, vn, kinetic novel, whatever you wanna call it. One of the top of the genre in my opinion. That said, I'm still pulling for Hutch to turn the tables on her sorry ass. I mean, she's basically letting everyone make the excuses for her infidelity for her. She makes assumptions on what Christian implied to give herself a pass, she did the same w/ the couple, and let's face it, she pretty much did the same w/ the client. All the while she's coming off w/ "I don't want this". However, her actions don't confirm that.
 

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The Sunshine scenes show some history into Vivian,, and how she thinks of Hutch.. interesting
I have to agree.
The conversation between the two women was almost the best part of chapter two.
The scene at the beginning where she kissed Christian on his cheek in front of Hutch was the best part imo.
Afterwards it went downhill for me, I was not even interested or turned on from any sex scene in this chapter.
I always trust my lower bodypart, so something was off this time.:ROFLMAO:
 
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Wow, still couldn't continue. She whispers she loves him walking away, and then fucks the shitstain. If she really loved her husband, she would have kicked the guy in the nuts and then beat him within an inch of his life. Love, my ass. She loves money, her lifestyle, and her self. She might have a mild affection for her husband, but love, no. Love doesn't do that.
 

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Interested in what you will say. But what is said here is in tune with my opinion from earlier that we have here a sort of "liberal", alternative solution presented (alternative to submission to Christian) which establishes and propagates a legitimizing narrative in that the wife rightfully demands an open lifestyle in order to get her sexual needs met and the husband has to follow because he couldn't otherwise satisfy her. In the end in my opinion it justifies Vivian as being a desperate and unsatisfied housewife who has to follow her sexual needs.
If only for lack of creativity - consider; she could still get those same sexual needs met after chucking Christian aside. There's no shortage of hung stuntcocks in the world.
Even though that may be what happens here, I can't help but pull for Hutch. I dig netorase, and I'm not suggesting that that's what this story is, but man....I really dislike Vivian. I mean, to some degree when she was with the couple I thought well maybe she'll figure this out WITH Hutch, but after the hotel, I just lost all hope for anything good coming out of her behavior. I really hate to think that Hutch is the loser (or worse) in the end, but it pisses me off that she's basically the uber driving him there. SC Stories has put together one helluva game, vn, kinetic novel, whatever you wanna call it. One of the top of the genre in my opinion. That said, I'm still pulling for Hutch to turn the tables on her sorry ass. I mean, she's basically letting everyone make the excuses for her infidelity for her. She makes assumptions on what Christian implied to give herself a pass, she did the same w/ the couple, and let's face it, she pretty much did the same w/ the client. All the while she's coming off w/ "I don't want this". However, her actions don't confirm that.
I pull for Hutch, but not out of spite for Vivian, what I'd really like to see is Christian get his come-uppance.

You say "Hutch turn the tables on her sorry ass". Why not turn the tables on Christian? This all began with him. Yes, Vivian could have resisted, she deserves a lot of the blame, but again, I'm confused by so many comments attacking solely Vivian and completely ignoring Christian. The guy needs to meet an end in a dark alley. Like George Carlin said, if you can't beat them, arrange to have them beaten. :whistle:
 

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Thank goodness someone finally said it. A few people have been spewing their hatred for hours. Okay, we get it — you're mad at the pixel woman. We get it. Get over your hatred and move on. This hate thing has reached a point where it's bothering the people who actually like the game.
This is nothing. You should read comments in other game threads. It's typical behaviour of "I want a virgin who's a natural born slut/whore". These people play corruption games where they cheer for female characters to fuck every human, animal and insect and then rant about how they are cumpdumps. It's funny how male characters who fuck every female character blood related, young or old without any morality are considered to be saints.
 
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the scene that should have had a choice in my mind is the scene with the old fucker who rapes Viv. should have had the choice for her to knee him in the balls and throw the contract in Christian's face along with having her press charges against him for trying to pimp her out. along with the blackmail Christian would be in hot water. yeah i hate Christian. as much of a bitch as Viv has become, truth is i find her hot as hell. just not her personality anymore. she is basically becoming another version of Anne from TACOS. oh well.
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And also, please... Vivian is nothing like TACOS' Anne.
 

Athyyra

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Why not turn the tables on Christian? This all began with him. Yes, Vivian could have resisted, she deserves a lot of the blame, but again, I'm confused by so many comments attacking solely Vivian and completely ignoring Christian. The guy needs to meet an end in a dark alley. Like George Carlin said, if you can't beat them, arrange to have them beaten. :whistle:
Yeah I won't disagree w/ you there, I would get a lot of satisfaction from seeing Hutch tank his business and flip the script on both of them. I guess for me, the fact that she keeps professing "love" for Hutch but continues to display anything but love is just pissing me off at her too.
 

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If only for lack of creativity - consider; she could still get those same sexual needs met after chucking Christian aside. There's no shortage of hung stuntcocks in the world.

I pull for Hutch, but not out of spite for Vivian, what I'd really like to see is Christian get his come-uppance.

You say "Hutch turn the tables on her sorry ass". Why not turn the tables on Christian? This all began with him. Yes, Vivian could have resisted, she deserves a lot of the blame, but again, I'm confused by so many comments attacking solely Vivian and completely ignoring Christian. The guy needs to meet an end in a dark alley. Like George Carlin said, if you can't beat them, arrange to have them beaten. :whistle:
You should consider that those who cheer for Hutch and won't attack Christian is because they relate to them. How many guys use manipulation tactics like Christian to fuck girls? 99%
 

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Does anybody else think she is going to try to play both sides. Keep Christian rough bad boy sex and at the same time keep the Hutch safe side. The whole have your cake and eat it too scenario. Cause we know she doesn't want Hutch to be with anyone. She is still going to want to hold onto him her fallback plan. She believes that he will never leave her because he said he wouldn't.
might be a possibility, for that we have to wait for chapter 3. wont be like what packard1928 theory about hutch and vivian making a plan together. if it was hutch or vivian alone making a plan. that might be a possibility.

Where to begin........

Firstly, for those of us who where actually alive and at the right age (like me).. the 8675309 phone number was a good throw back, i always wonder what happened to Jenny.

Secondly it was a good touch that Christian ended up with the sloppy seconds instead of Hutch (which should never happen). Too bad Vivian didn't rub that in, although i doubt Christian would care.

Thirdly,
There are stupid sluts,
then there are really stupid sluts,
and then there are unbelievably stupid sluts
and then there are I can't believe they know how to breathe incredibly stupid sluts,
and then there is Vivian.

And we are meant to believe she is an educator of some sort? Only if she earned her qualifications on her back.

This is one truly bipolar woman, for beyond any shadow of a doubt is a self-center selfish narcissist, as I always said. And not wanting Hutch to enjoy his side of the open relationship, fucken she needs a good bitch slap to put her in her place.

A 25 year relationship, never gave her anal cherry to Hutch, didn't even give it to Christian, but gave it to some random dude she knew for barely an hour, really? The porn logic is too damn high!

Yeah, yeah, she is a reformed wild girl who is coming out with a new sexual renaissance in her middle ages, only taking it to the extreme.

Now knowing how easily she was played by Christian, and that Hutch's job was never on the line (all those who doubted me... I told ya so!!), she has no regret or remorse. But we do still see her crocodile tears flowing.

There were some good points in this chapter, but unfortunately there were more ridiculous points. I get it, it's a porn game and it needs to move the story forward.
Oh no! my ride share left, what should I do? call another one, get a lift form sunshine, nooooo I know... I'll get one from Marcel and let him blackmail me. *facepalm*

So many other points I would like to make regarding the "possession" crap talk, but I'll leave it for another day.

One good thing though Hutch stuck to his guns and refused to show or say any signs of affection. I also loved the nightmare, it should become reality, hopefully.
high possibility that it wont be happening if the story is to get dark for hutch. but i do love hutch and addison getting together and re-enacting the dream sequence. there a leaps of faith taken by SC Stories in this chapter, maybe so that the dev can make a comeback in chapter 3 for hutch. that would be an interesting read.

I think the second half of this chapter completely ruined the main female character and my interest in her went from a 100 to 10, may as well rename the boss since the roleplay here is no longer needed, he was written as a douche in the first place but I didn't expect him to be into sloppy seconds, what a nose dive this game took in just one release.

A newly introduced character gets to enter her backdoor and some other random dude uses her like a cheap prostitute, may as well introduce gang bangs and porn acting in the next chapter like all other cheap plot porn games do.
gang bangs and porn... might be possible if vivian is getting paid more for being a prostitute. maybe by the end of chapter 4 or 5 she get a big client base thats she doesn't need christian or hutch for financial support. or make an OF celebrity. never know. we know there is definitely going to be something with marcel as the seeds have been sown.

There is plenty of positive elements and still a sound and exciting groundwork and ideas to build upon.
would like to know about the positive elements. care to elaborate?
Do you guys still think Hutch is cigarette man after this update?
I don't think so...I see it as we now see Christian for what He is... an asshole and Master manipulator. Yes.. she does fall down the rabbit hole but the scene in the Hotel.... She was pushed so to speak. That dude knew he was to get sex from her. Christian already set it up. That is why I think Hutch will rise from the ashes ....
For me she looked shocked not scared.
packard1928 Adhdclassic think it was made clear in the restaurant conversation or some other that the cigarette man was vivian's lover from her wild/whoring days. i may be remembering it wrong as i only did one read and not gonna do a deep dive like i did for chapter 1.

I think she pretty much admits it:
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we all know that vivian is fickle, two faced, bipolar and the list goes on... so who know other than the dev is she is just saying it like she says i love you to hutch( which she clearly doesn't mean it ... just lip service ;) )

she is basically becoming another version of Anne from TACOS. oh well.
think she will end up like anne or worse.
 
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I quickly read some comments and I got the good impression that DEV does a good job in this entertainment that involves the people who watch it rooting for this or that character. Impressive because it is very GOOD!
DEV has this quality of keeping the pace without "rushing" or "wondering if I'll please" but remaining faithful to its creation. For this chapter 2 and already having a chapter 3 almost complete, it has infrastructure, a script and storyboard.
And it also undermines DEV's narrative that needs the resource to stay "standing and continue the work". And not that it is wrong to charge for. But it should not focus only on.
Some expressed a drop in expectations in this chapter 2. Yes, the first one made a very big impression, but this two still deserves a lot of credit. It has continuity and creates many alternatives for the third.
 

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We will know more about Vivian in the early moments of 3 chapter when she gets home and faces Hutch. Either she tells Hutch she is moving to Christians or they are in on a plan together. I am curious if we do see more setups from Christian if Vivian is pimped out again... Not sure if that would be part of 3.
 
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