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I love Vivian's inner dialog. And I want something different from a story as well written but typical for the genre. I want an explosive destructive end. All the stories I have been following have characters doing the most immoral wrong headed things and yet all the dilemma's they run into seem anti-climate considering the profound mental and physical damage they caused themselves or others. I want a violent resolution or a profoundly life altering situation for our protagonist. Frankly she needs to end up in a whored-out lifestyle, owned and/or passed around and/or Hutch needs some sort of powerfull revenge to shake the story up. That would makes it different. Maybe even neo-noir like. Then Vivian's inner dialog would get really fascinating rather then just pro-forma-"I do the wrong things",why do I do the wrong things?", "I wont do the wrong thing again" and then "I can't help myself" and she does it -whatever- again. She just digs the hole deeper not in a journey self discovery but of self destruction for herself or those around her.
Good points overall. The destructive end you envision is another wrong thing. Porn is all about satisfying certain people's need to see wrong things, destructive things. I guess we can't fault porn for that.

Like OJ, Husband could have stormed into that bedroom after shooting the lock off the door and shot them both. We see in rl how that turned out for OJ. Sure he displayed a satisfying passion for us, but it was still wrong. He did get away with it, but even then the cost for him was large. The thing is, even OJ knew that if he had lost his wife's love, there is nothing at all he could do about it, except forget her. Not satisfying, kill her.

The solution for Wife doing wrong things is not that she should sink into doing worse things. One good solution for her would be to turn the the wrong thing into a right thing, like work out a long term viable loving relationship with Boss. Or she could do whatever it takes to reconcile with Husband. Both of which we see as acceptable and even common irl. Not that either of those are very likely in this story, I think. I don't really see a good ending likely for either Husband or Wife sad to say.

The different thing that porn could give us here would be a decent believable good ending where the wrong stuff actually ends and good things ensue. So different. But then, porn would not be satisfying its function for those who need to see wrong things.

Too bad love stories are for girls. There is even an entire literary genre devoted to that, the Romance Novel. A woman's fantasy. What we have here is a man's fantasy. And n'er the twain shall meet. Except, somehow, men and women do manage to live together and make babies irl. Maybe some of us are less inclined to fantasy than others. Real sex with a really loved partner can be sufficient.
 
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I love Vivian's inner dialog. And I want something different from a story as well written but typical for the genre.
In this post, I would like to focus on the fact that many people in this forum, as well as in real life, judge pornography as something negative, devoid of artistic value and morally deprecable, as if other genres of fiction were superior simply because we studied them in school and if the teacher had caught us with a pornographic comic book, we would have been branded as depraved and suspended from lessons.
But do you really believe that your parents never had sex and broke the rules of moral common sense?

How do you think each of us is alive and able to write here?

Do you believe you were brought home by the stork? Or do you believe that mom and dad found you in their garden under a cabbage?

I'm not mad at you, zernex... I'm talking in general, in fact, I'll quote other people to better clarify the topic I'm talking about.
interesting topic especially for a porn story.
The story is interesting... . PERIOD!!! Why did you feel the need to add porn to your sentence? (Sorry, I'm not saying this to attack you, you're free to write whatever you want, but it's relevant to the topic I'm talking about).
... As if sex stories weren't interesting in all literary genres... Homer's poems... Shakespeare's plays... The history of English kings and queens in the 1700/800s... The story of Catherine of Russia... And in all the great fairy tales: Cinderella, Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs... (but do you know if Snow White had sex with all seven dwarfs?)... well, it's a mystery that I've always wondered about since I was a child.:unsure:

Not all porn movies are the same.The logic of porn exists in every person, man, woman, teenager...
Sex is a natural need and is the greatest pleasure for every living being.
Western porn cinema has become really poor... THERE IS NO LOGIC IN PORN MOVIES :cool:
Using the term “porn logic” is just an oxymoron.

In porn logic the story has disappeared and only sex without love remains.... specially in western porn like the shit produced by "legal porno" label.

But in Japan, adult cinema is treated as an art form and very talented actors and directors work in it... OK, the scripts are often compartmentalized and, to save money, the actresses have the same type of scriptwriter in their catalog who has already worked with other actors and actresses.
But there are rare exceptions.
.. and the actors and actresses don't pretend to fuck, they really do it... this means that the hardcore genre is the most realistic genre that we, the audience, can see on a screen or in a live theatrical performance.
Yes there are also live theatrical performance.

But hardcore is a genre that talks about reality and there are no special effects in the sex scene
HARDCORE IS A FORM OF ART!
Sex is the greatest pleasure that living beings can experience in life... and if it weren't so enjoyable, our planet would be a lifeless, joyless desert in an instant.

the realism in the NTR turned me off.
NTR is realism... All daylight romantic stories are full of jealousy for the LI so they are NTR
What is the most romantic film in the history of cinema? GHOST
Screenshot 2025-08-14 at 14.22.23.jpg
Do you remember how Sam, Molly's boyfriend, ultimately advises Molly to start a new life with another man...
Okay, he is a ghost, but it is an NTR story.
inside all the best romantic stories there is a bit of NTR
There is no love without jealousy in real life...
We are all jealous of our wives if we love them, but feeling love is not a selfish act... feeling true love for a woman is making her happy by indulging her personality... Love for a woman is not forcing her to dress the way you want, locking her up at home and raping her whenever you want, then going fucking with other women while she has to stay locked up!

I guarantee that if you lock your wife up, she will find a way to fuck other men and you will never know... only these men are the real cuckolds!

DEV made a story not just a porn game.
You are absolutely right... but for SCS sex scenes are the most important and the whole screenplay turns around the sex scenes because sex is the greatest pleasure that any creature can experience in life... and if it weren't so pleasurable, our planet would be a barren desert without life or joy. (and without F95 forum):cry:

This author is doing an excellent job of making humanity, which seems to be becoming progressively more moralistic and conformist, understand that having sex is the primary mission of every human being and that there is nothing dirty about sex.
And just to make a joke, just give yourself a good enema before doing anal. And everything is clean ;)

Sex is life!

This game is the perfect example of how to write a great story.
True no argument there,
The story is about relationships between people, and sex is a part of those relationships, just as it is in real life...
No PORN AT ALL... relationships include sex, which is very different from Western porn.

As you can see i found an argument 'cos this is great story.... PERIOD!!!
All this talk about "porn" is just a way of belittling the value of this amazing story/screenplay.

Just my 2 cents
 
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Can someone explain why MHB has an page? Looks like the description was converted to another language and converted back or some AI rewrite.
I knew the big shots in Hollywood would notice you. Congratulations.(y)
 

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Did SC stories say next chapter will come out in October or November ? Anyone know ?
He wrote this in the CH2 closing screen Screenshot 2025-08-14 at 19.39.13.jpg

But there is no rush...
for me is good also to get the CH3 in the winter holidays (Christmas or the new year)

And in any case when the game will be perfect for him! (her?)
 

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In this post, I would like to focus on the fact that many people in this forum, as well as in real life, judge pornography as something negative, devoid of artistic value and morally deprecable, as if other genres of fiction were superior simply because we studied them in school and if the teacher had caught us with a pornographic comic book, we would have been branded as depraved and suspended from lessons.
But do you really believe that your parents never had sex and broke the rules of moral common sense?

How do you think each of us is alive and able to write here?

Do you believe you were brought home by the stork? Or do you believe that mom and dad found you in their garden under a cabbage?

I'm not mad at you, zernex... I'm talking in general, in fact, I'll quote other people to better clarify the topic I'm talking about.

The story is interesting... . PERIOD!!! Why did you feel the need to add porn to your sentence? (Sorry, I'm not saying this to attack you, you're free to write whatever you want, but it's relevant to the topic I'm talking about).
... As if sex stories weren't interesting in all literary genres... Homer's poems... Shakespeare's plays... The history of English kings and queens in the 1700/800s... The story of Catherine of Russia... And in all the great fairy tales: Cinderella, Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs... (but do you know if Snow White had sex with all seven dwarfs?)... well, it's a mystery that I've always wondered about since I was a child.:unsure:

Not all porn movies are the same.The logic of porn exists in every person, man, woman, teenager...
Sex is a natural need and is the greatest pleasure for every living being.
Western porn cinema has become really poor... THERE IS NO LOGIC IN PORN MOVIES :cool:
Using the term “porn logic” is just an oxymoron.

In porn logic the story has disappeared and only sex without love remains.... specially in western porn like the shit produced by "legal porno" label.

But in Japan, adult cinema is treated as an art form and very talented actors and directors work in it... OK, the scripts are often compartmentalized and, to save money, the actresses have the same type of scriptwriter in their catalog who has already worked with other actors and actresses.
But there are rare exceptions.
.. and the actors and actresses don't pretend to fuck, they really do it... this means that the hardcore genre is the most realistic genre that we, the audience, can see on a screen or in a live theatrical performance.
Yes there are also live theatrical performance.

But hardcore is a genre that talks about reality and there are no special effects in the sex scene
HARDCORE IS A FORM OF ART!
Sex is the greatest pleasure that living beings can experience in life... and if it weren't so enjoyable, our planet would be a lifeless, joyless desert in an instant.


NTR is realism... All daylight romantic stories are full of jealousy for the LI so they are NTR
What is the most romantic film in the history of cinema? GHOST
View attachment 5144140
Do you remember how Sam, Molly's boyfriend, ultimately advises Molly to start a new life with another man...
Okay, he is a ghost, but it is an NTR story.
inside all the best romantic stories there is a bit of NTR
There is no love without jealousy in real life...
We are all jealous of our wives if we love them, but feeling love is not a selfish act... feeling true love for a woman is making her happy by indulging her personality... Love for a woman is not forcing her to dress the way you want, locking her up at home and raping her whenever you want, then going fucking with other women while she has to stay locked up!

I guarantee that if you lock your wife up, she will find a way to fuck other men and you will never know... only these men are the real cuckolds!


You are absolutely right... but for SCS sex scenes are the most important and the whole screenplay turns around the sex scenes because sex is the greatest pleasure that any creature can experience in life... and if it weren't so pleasurable, our planet would be a barren desert without life or joy. (and without F95 forum):cry:

This author is doing an excellent job of making humanity, which seems to be becoming progressively more moralistic and conformist, understand that having sex is the primary mission of every human being and that there is nothing dirty about sex.
And just to make a joke, just give yourself a good enema before doing anal. And everything is clean ;)

Sex is life!

This game is the perfect example of how to write a great story.

The story is about relationships between people, and sex is a part of those relationships, just as it is in real life...
No PORN AT ALL... relationships include sex, which is very different from Western porn.

As you can see i found an argument 'cos this is great story.... PERIOD!!!
All this talk about "porn" is just a way of belittling the value of this amazing story/screenplay.

Just my 2 cents
Imagine being obsessed with NTR that you start searching for it in every aspect of fiction, media, your life and other people's lives.
 

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That's cool but it ain't your job. Take a break and enjoy this drug. View attachment 5145208
Lotta things ain't my job, but they do make things generally more enjoyable for me. Like that is the first time this week that some lady gave me a treat like that. last week it was a deep dish mince meat pie, so deep. Besides, keeping the hate down to a dull roar makes my reading here so much more enjoyable. Oh, yes, it has been much much worse.
 
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He was wearing a t-shirt on that day. At least when he arrived back from wherever he was.
At the strip-club he wears a tie with which he has not been seen before.
I finished chapter 2 and I didn't see Hutch at strip club ? Or any other strip club at all ? Am I missed something ?

Since both chapter 1 and 2 do not have any choices, I don't know how I missed it if there was a strip club scene ?
 

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I finished chapter 2 and I didn't see Hutch at strip club ? Or any other strip club at all ? Am I missed something ?

Since both chapter 1 and 2 do not have any choices, I don't know how I missed it if there was a strip club scene ?
I was referring to a preview pic which will happen during Chapter3 where the story is focused on Huutch.
 

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Yes, because I'm the one who's analyzing every word, a scene and spamming the thread. :FacePalm:
Thanks to be so interested in my opinions on this story an reading every word of my posts...
The reality is that you are talking about me... but my posts are only related to this game

Im talking about real romantic love... while you about hatred and drugged cakes

Thank again for your interest in me(y)
 
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Thanks to be so interested in my opinions on this story an reading every word of my posts...
The reality is that you are talking about me... but my posts are only related to this game

Im talking about real romantic love... while you about hatred and drugged cakes

Thank again for your interest in me(y)
What I think is that you need help Stanford.
What I know is that I cannot help you, so I will not try. Is that ok?
 
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