VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[Fantasy41974]

I just added a poll, open for 10days. I'm pretty sure I already know the answer but I wanted to see if the responses would heavily favor one. I'm not saying I will necessarily follow the poll, but will use it to help me plan.

I have a scene that was always part of the original plan but cut it because it was gratuitous, and maybe even slightly detrimental to the emotional tug of war of the main characters. But it's a great scene, well designed and I kind of want to keep it in. It would mean more production time as well. This scene would be in Chapter 3.

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P.S. No release date yet but it won't be Christmas. I know you guys are frustrated but this is one of the two main reasons I don't accept money. I can't/won't be held to public pressure. Thank you for understanding.

Thank you for the update.

 

[TonyMurray]

So do you play as the boss and the wife but not the husband? If so, I am down for it. I rarely like games where the MC is cucked.

You don't play as anyone, really. You watch a movie. Zero choices. The MC is the shameless, spineless, worthless cuck but you don't control anything.

Thanks, well one less game to take up space in my collection.

Technically there isn't an "MC". I would personally call the wife the MC based on screen time, importance, and even game title, but dev has pointed out a few times that there isn't an actual MC. The three main characters are all renamable via the opening script of the game, so you don't even need URM to rename yourself as the boss who gets to fuck the wife, you can just self-insert as Christian using the game mechanism!

You see the betrayal from the POV of the husband on a couple of occasions, and the next update is slated to focus on him more than the previous two have. There isn't a true POV where you're "inside the head" of one of the characters though, there aren't any internal thoughts or anything like that, you just hear those as "under the breath" type comments.

 

[adrocks7156]

I just added a poll, open for 10days. I'm pretty sure I already know the answer but I wanted to see if the responses would heavily favor one. I'm not saying I will necessarily follow the poll, but will use it to help me plan.

I have a scene that was always part of the original plan but cut it because it was gratuitous, and maybe even slightly detrimental to the emotional tug of war of the main characters. But it's a great scene, well designed and I kind of want to keep it in. It would mean more production time as well. This scene would be in Chapter 3.

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P.S. No release date yet but it won't be Christmas. I know you guys are frustrated but this is one of the two main reasons I don't accept money. I can't/won't be held to public pressure. Thank you for understanding.

This will be so great SC Stories , looking forward to it. Hope it’s an existing character rather than a stranger

 

[onetwo92]

Damn I was looking forward to playing Chapter 3 before the end of the year, oh well lets kick of 2026 with a bang!

 

[oshikuru]

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To speculate a little bit. I have two theories about this. Either Vivian goes to Christian when she and Hutch had something planed, like a dinner or anniversary or sorts. Could also be something planed with her son, like a visit perhaps. But instead she cancels and goes to Christian because she is horny.
The second one is a one night stand with someone random. Strictly sex because of physical attraction.

Either way I'm probably way of base, but it would show that Viv is becoming more and more desensitized to cheating. Meaning she's becoming ok with it. In theory if the one night stand happens that would also in a way cuck Christian and we know he likes being the "top dog". It would hurt his ego. And it would be interesting to see how he reacts as this is a lot different than sending Viv to fuck someone by him. This is her doing it on her own without his say so.

 

[TonyMurray]

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To speculate a little bit. I have two theories about this. Either Vivian goes to Christian when she and Hutch had something planed, like a dinner or anniversary or sorts. Could also be something planed with her son, like a visit perhaps. But instead she cancels and goes to Christian because she is horny.
The second one is a one night stand with someone random. Strictly sex because of physical attraction.

Either way I'm probably way of base, but it would show that Viv is becoming more and more desensitized to cheating. Meaning she's becoming ok with it. In theory if the one night stand happens that would also in a way cuck Christian and we know he likes being the "top dog". It would hurt his ego. And it would be interesting to see how he reacts as this is a lot different than sending Viv to fuck someone by him. This is her doing it on her own without his say so.

Admittedly, I kind of thought it might be the mechanic, but there's so little information given, it's impossible to do anything but speculate, and most of that speculation will of course be wildly off base. I really didn't know how to vote, because a little difference to what (and who) the scene involves could make a big difference in terms of whether I personally would prefer to include it or not. Essentially, if it progresses the story because it helps to evolve Vivian's character, for instance, then it's probably good to include, but if it's literally just gratification and the story would be no different without it, then I say avoid it.

 

[MIGames]

I know that almost everybody voted for spicy... and I also like it to - for example, the introduction of anal was a great idea and i hope it continuous to appear, but I would prefer that the story flow focus on the emotional struggles of Vivian and the main narrative is based on her continuous reluctancy. This is, beyond the amazing graphics, what sets the story apart.

The only thing I truly dislike is the possibility of having Vivian with a lot of sexual partners - seems like a break of character. I would prefer that she stays on a limited number of partners, or if the she has more the reason is not for the sake of adding sex scenes. Christian, the student, eventually her son (this would be very spicy) and not much more seems enough to deliver the story trough.

The notion that she goes out to prey as it happened in episode 2 (and even if that event was great) makes the story odd cause it kind of goes againts the idea of her moral doubt and reluctancy.

Two notes. One is her facial expressions trough the sex acts. They are fundamental and make them all the more sensual. For example, in the anal scene, I think a little more facial expressions and reactions from her would have been perfect. Another note is sound, the addition of sound in the sexual acts would be amazing.

Finally a technical question, is it very complicated to add an auto button?

In any case, I can't stop to praise the amazing job and the outstanding results. Hope you can keep on working on this series, its fenomenal and really hope you can give us all a late Christmas gift. Thanks! SC Stories

 

[bamachine]

Technically there isn't an "MC". I would personally call the wife the MC based on screen time, importance, and even game title, but dev has pointed out a few times that there isn't an actual MC. The three main characters are all renamable via the opening script of the game, so you don't even need URM to rename yourself as the boss who gets to fuck the wife, you can just self-insert as Christian using the game mechanism!

You see the betrayal from the POV of the husband on a couple of occasions, and the next update is slated to focus on him more than the previous two have. There isn't a true POV where you're "inside the head" of one of the characters though, there aren't any internal thoughts or anything like that, you just hear those as "under the breath" type comments.

OK, in that case I might give it a shot, renaming the boss after myself.

 

[TonyMurray]

OK, in that case I might give it a shot, renaming the boss after myself.

I know you like to do that, so it could be a good one for you. It just depends on how much you also rely on choices (as this is a kinetic novel) and being able to specifically get the POV of the antagonist you name as yourself. I don't think you get either of those in favour of said antagonist in many games though.

 

[Rozhok]

I just added a poll, open for 10days. I'm pretty sure I already know the answer but I wanted to see if the responses would heavily favor one. I'm not saying I will necessarily follow the poll, but will use it to help me plan.

I have a scene that was always part of the original plan but cut it because it was gratuitous, and maybe even slightly detrimental to the emotional tug of war of the main characters. But it's a great scene, well designed and I kind of want to keep it in. It would mean more production time as well. This scene would be in Chapter 3.

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P.S. No release date yet but it won't be Christmas. I know you guys are frustrated but this is one of the two main reasons I don't accept money. I can't/won't be held to public pressure. Thank you for understanding.

Good to hear from you from time to time. Voted in the poll, I prefer not compromising the story for sexy scenes, but I'll accept whatever decision you make in the end.

 

[Manshino]

OK, in that case I might give it a shot, renaming the boss after myself.

It's the first thing I did

 

[noahsombrero]

The latest release was in June, which means it’s been about six months — and that’s a long time. Everyone is waiting for the story and for the upcoming chapters as well. If each chapter will take this long, the excitement will fade. The gap shouldn’t exceed five months at most for each release — that’s my advice. More chapters can be created; the story is intriguing, but don’t let the waiting period become too long. And this is without any pressure on you it’s just that we’ve been waiting for six months, and that’s a lot.

SC dev time is still shorter than many. BaD is running 1.5 years now. People know to expect that so they don't fuss too much about it. Here's an idea SC. Say expect it next June. If you get it done early, people will rejoice. If not, we won't be complaining the whole time. Many games here have been abandoned. Usually that means the game did not generate much interest. Not the case with MHB, people are emotionally invested in this one. What happens next?

The poll: if the add on is Wife fucking the mechanic or something that reinforces people who are aching, dying to call Wife a whore, don't do it at least not during the development of the main game. That would please some and put others off. Better to keep us wrangling about it in terms of the interest your story generates, unless you really do see her as a whore.

 

[Guszti242]

TonyMurray!
Little star, calm down. I'm fucking sick of your smartass. Why have you been following the salad for 3-4 months? Well, I'll show you what he wrote from the beginning.

 

[TonyMurray]

TonyMurray!
Little star, calm down. I'm fucking sick of your smartass. Why have you been following the salad for 3-4 months? Well, I'll show you what he wrote from the beginning.

Er, what? I get that English may not be your first language, but you could at least make some sense...

 

[noahsombrero]

TonyMurray!
Little star, calm down. I'm fucking sick of your smartass. Why have you been following the salad for 3-4 months? Well, I'll show you what he wrote from the beginning.

Never mind. We all saw that. The point might be that SC did not show the all night Boss/Wife fuck because it was not the important part of the story. The thing that SC consistently wants to show, so far, is the emotions involved. Husband sitting outside the bedroom door listening to his Wife moaning in pleasure, and how he reacts to that. Wife's confusion between what she does with Boss and what she really feels for Husband, etc. Those are the story SC wants to tell.

 

[noahsombrero]

Er, what? I get that English may not be your first language, but you could at least make some sense...

Little star. Probably an appropriate idiom in Hungarian. Salad. He probably meant word salad.

The truth is though, that you do really seem to want to be a sort of expert. A professor of porn, maybe. Not that I disagree with much of what you say.

I don't agree with Guzti that the first episode was so very good and the second so very bad, but you know, we all have our expectations. And defending them has a long history in this forum.

 

[Guszti242]

Noahsombrero
You may be right. But why put it up for a vote when it has nothing to do with the main story. I write it, then I add it, not put it up for a vote. The film producers or the writers put their work up for a vote, not. You get what you made, you don't take it away, you don't add it, and you don't put it up for a vote.

 

[noahsombrero]

Noahsombrero
You may be right. But why put it up for a vote when it has nothing to do with the main story.

Because he knows that most of his audience is simply here for the juicy bits and really care nothing about the emotions he shows, mostly misinterpret or ignore them anyway. So SC wants to know how many of us actually get what he is trying to do and appreciate that.

 

[Filipis]

I just added a poll, open for 10days. I'm pretty sure I already know the answer but I wanted to see if the responses would heavily favor one. I'm not saying I will necessarily follow the poll, but will use it to help me plan.

I have a scene that was always part of the original plan but cut it because it was gratuitous, and maybe even slightly detrimental to the emotional tug of war of the main characters. But it's a great scene, well designed and I kind of want to keep it in. It would mean more production time as well. This scene would be in Chapter 3.

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P.S. No release date yet but it won't be Christmas. I know you guys are frustrated but this is one of the two main reasons I don't accept money. I can't/won't be held to public pressure. Thank you for understanding.

Sounds to me that the scene in question will undoubtedly showcase the "whore" in Vivian once and for all - the one she buried when she decided to marry Hutch and start a family - and eliminate any doubt she "settled" for Hutch and regrets her life's choices.

 

[MIGames]

SC dev time is still shorter than many. BaD is running 1.5 years now. People know to expect that so they don't fuss too much about it. Here's an idea SC. Say expect it next June. If you get it done early, people will rejoice. If not, we won't be complaining the whole time. Many games here have been abandoned. Usually that means the game did not generate much interest. Not the case with MHB, people are emotionally invested in this one. What happens next?

The poll: if the add on is Wife fucking the mechanic or something that reinforces people who are aching, dying to call Wife a whore, don't do it at least not during the development of the main game. That would please some and put others off. Better to keep us wrangling about it in terms of the interest your story generates, unless you really do see her as a whore.

I'm not sure if i can agree with your first paragraph, althought I understand and respect your standing. As a personal note about this I would say that there are 2 things in this universe here that can make a creator great. One and obviously, its the quality of its art. As I see it, SC Stories as it and his story is amazing both visually and narratively. Another is their commitement (and I write this with the outmost respect for the life and options and conditions of each one, which off course comes first before any of our wishes and anxieties about a game) to stick to a timeline of deliver that also takes into account all those who follow and support and believe. A great balance on both is fundamental and shows that its possible to maintain a top quality work while being able to be sensible to all those out there that cherish the work. Cause I see many creators out there that, being financially supported by their followers (which, let me EMPHASIZE, it's not the case here, only INCREASES my respect and consideration for SC Stories - may the heavens of gaming keep you in good health for ages and ages to come...) simply don't care for their fans, many ignore them or plainly trick them and spend their time making promises and announcements that are simply a lie. So, even if I tend to respect the calendar set by the creator as the fundamental rulebook to follow, i also truly think that the efforts the creator makes to keep that timeline up to date, can make him stand out in a very crowded universe as this one is.