VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[LUCIANO2020]

It's in the image folder "d02s09 dinner" - flashback05.

Thank you

 

[X|Mortis]

After analysing the personality of Vivian i have a theoretical dialoge from the hide scenes at the backyard. Sorry for my english and sorry for not having great skills as a writer .

Christian : hier is the backyard
Vivian. is nice house
Christian : stop behind her and whsipering in her ear : the dress suit fantastic on you , just perct.
Vivian bites her lips. Didnt say a word
Christian : well lets beginn with what we are here now. touching her waist. And smelling her neck
Vivian : what are you doing? Are you out of your mind!???
Christian: Not what are you doing ? You are here now just because i said to you and i say also to your husband not to bring you.
Christian so whos wish you are hier following your husbands or mine. You are wearing the dress i bought you.
For who do you want to look so atractive . Chrstian speaking very convincent and very strongly while grabing her hand and got her close ti him. Who do you want to reject?
Vivian : didnt say a word and as she wanted to say something.
Christian says : We are adult and you knew that a simple dinner is not going to give me back my 2 Loses Clients where almost a million of dollars are invested.
Are you being serious .
Vivian : close her eyes thinking how naive she was .Thinking that he really underestimate the words from her husband when he warned her .( Flashback in bed with her husbands words)
As suddenly she feels christian pulling her skirt up and kising her neck she could avoid to moan.
She realize is too late to go back and react and she was so aroused about the happening she surrender her lust.
As Chrsitian saying the words to her whispering : I can feel you like it .
Vivian find herself suddenly at the table and feeling how Chrsitian did his way.
The explotion of the heat of the moment was so intense that christian order her to go on her knees then he didnt want to come but in her mouth. At that moment Christian finished in she didnt swallowed all. But Chrstian says I see how you enjoy this. The Dragon feels satisfy for now . Now lets continue with the dinner. Lets go .

I hope you like it

Thanks for the scene recreation man

Yeah, I've always wondered what conversations Vivian/Chris were having while Hutch was given homework from Chris to work on.

The words/phrases that Chris said to Vivian to get her to submit easily...Man that would have been nice to see.

Maybe in a future update, the dev will play a flashback of the backyard/dinner visit scene so we can see the actual dialogue that occurred between Vivian/Chris That would be cool

 

[wt859]

Blacksamba I read your review of the VN and I have a question. You compared the relationships to medieval power dynamics (droit de cuissage), but I don't think that comparison entirely works, due to Christian not having a 'right' to Vivian, and the motivations of the characters being deeper than that. You also said the characters, their stakes, motivations, and context are believable, so how can the unfolding of events not be believable? That's like saying all the ingredients for this cake are good, but the actual cake just falls apart. I may need more insight into your thoughts because I feel your review is missing some key information to support your claim. I'm not against your review, I'm just curious.

 

[Robb123456]

Blacksamba I read your review of the VN and I have a question. You compared the relationships to medieval power dynamics (droit de cuissage), but I don't think that comparison entirely works, due to Christian not having a 'right' to Vivian, and the motivations of the characters being deeper than that. You also said the characters, their stakes, motivations, and context are believable, so how can the unfolding of events not be believable? That's like saying all the ingredients for this cake are good, but the actual cake just falls apart. I may need more insight into your thoughts because I feel your review is missing some key information to support your claim. I'm not against your review, I'm just curious.

For the " droit de cuissage" part, i have to say it's a tenacious legend, which has no no historical foundation whatsoever.

The right of cuissage, also called right of jambage and sometimes right of deflowering, is a lively legend according to which a lord would have had the right to have sexual relations with the wife of a vassal or a serf on the first night of his wedding (Jus primae noctis, abbreviated Prima nocta 1).

This "right" reserving defloration to a lord would have been a variation of the right of quittage or formariage, which really existed, which obliged a serf wishing to marry his daughter outside the fief of his lord to pay the said lord three sous in exchange for his symbolic authorization of the marriage2.

Overall, this practice - although it may have been occasionally implemented by certain powerful people abusing their power, the feudal lords having strong rights over the serfs - never actually had any legal existence in Europe, and was mainly brandished after the French Revolution to discredit the feudal regime.

For the rest, the unfolding of events not being believable, i agree but i think it's personnal matter if you get over it or not. After all, this is a porn game.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

This is a KN not a biography or autobiography. When did Dev tell his story has anything to do with reality?
Exactly,...never! So whoever compares this to reality I recommend them to get dressed, step aside and take a breath of reality outside, or watch porn with real persons but don't expect a real story behind it!
He wants to entertain and to achieve this he did a marvelous work by trying to capture our thoughts with his pictures instead of heavy dialogues.

 

[JoeBlogs]

Wouldn't it be interesting if the reason the business lost the 2 clients, was because Christian fucked the respective owners' wives, resulting in said owners finding out and ending their business.
Then the whole cause of the issue would have been Christian's fault to start with!

 

[Adhdclassic]

This is going to be a hard year between this and My italian slut wife, its going to be hard not to look at these AVNs till after summer. So I will be reading alot of you comments.

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

Wouldn't it be interesting if the reason the business lost the 2 clients, was because Christian fucked the respective owners' wives, resulting in said owners finding out and ending their business.
Then the whole cause of the issue would have been Christian's fault to start with!

It would make the story even more bitter and it's very likely that it will play out like this.
I have the feeling that the dev uses this kind of scenario as a bad surprise at the end.
Then Vivian would have prostituted/whored herself for nothing.

 

[wt859]

For the " droit de cuissage" part, i have to say it's a tenacious legend, which has no no historical foundation whatsoever.

The right of cuissage, also called right of jambage and sometimes right of deflowering, is a lively legend according to which a lord would have had the right to have sexual relations with the wife of a vassal or a serf on the first night of his wedding (Jus primae noctis, abbreviated Prima nocta 1).

This "right" reserving defloration to a lord would have been a variation of the right of quittage or formariage, which really existed, which obliged a serf wishing to marry his daughter outside the fief of his lord to pay the said lord three sous in exchange for his symbolic authorization of the marriage2.

Overall, this practice - although it may have been occasionally implemented by certain powerful people abusing their power, the feudal lords having strong rights over the serfs - never actually had any legal existence in Europe, and was mainly brandished after the French Revolution to discredit the feudal regime.

For the rest, the unfolding of events not being believable, i agree but i think it's personnal matter if you get over it or not. After all, this is a porn game.

I'm just confused as to how the reviewer said the characters, motivations, and context are all believable, but the unfolding events aren't. Those two statements contradict each other. Your information about the "droit de cuissage" was interesting nonetheless.

 

[hooter]

How often are the updates?

 

[wt859]

Wouldn't it be interesting if the reason the business lost the 2 clients, was because Christian fucked the respective owners' wives, resulting in said owners finding out and ending their business.
Then the whole cause of the issue would have been Christian's fault to start with!

That would actually be a surprising twist, but I think it would make Christian too much of a "mastermind" villain, rather than an opportunistic boss who saw vulnerability in a marriage.

 

[wt859]

How often are the updates?

Dev estimates he'll release every 4 months

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

Robb123456 said:
"The right of cuissage, also called right of jambage and sometimes right of deflowering, is a lively legend according to which a lord would have had the right to have sexual relations with the wife of a vassal or a serf on the first night of his wedding"

This would make a good game.
One ugly bastard that has sex with all the virgins in his land ownership.

 

[sslovoe]

i like this part more
hoop he make part for this boys and make open action with them too

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

That would actually be a surprising twist, but I think it would make Christian too much of a "mastermind" villain, rather than an opportunistic boss who saw vulnerability in a marriage.

Maybe he is just some lucky sob who goes with the flow and uses failures as advantages.
People like him exist and they don't need to be overly smart.

 

[Adhdclassic]

In the end the best ending I can think of Christian gets arrested Hutch has Addison as his woman and Vivian wants to prove her love to Hutch she becomes Submissive to hutch and Addison. He used her sexual acts connections to start his own business. But due to her action and the ridicule her son had to endure strained their relationship.

 

[SideshowBobNo.2]

Vivian wants to prove her love to Hutch she becomes Submissive to hutch and Addison. He used her sexual acts connections to start his own business.

"He used her sexual acts connections to start his own business"
Alright...Hutch starts a brothel with Vivian as the main attraction. "the hottest MILF in town"

 

[SC Stories]

So after yet another play through, I noticed something that struck me as odd because of all the detail in in the game that most others leave out, and to be honest its a bit petty for me to even say, but Vivian's makeup and most importantly her lip stick, it is always perfect, LOL, I mean before dinner, perfect, after the tryst on the porch, perfect, after all them gagging noises from the bedroom, perfect, after the suck and fuck in the kitchen, perfect, after the second round of escapades in the bedroom till the morning, perfect, but she hit that shower and the lip stick is gone and makeup running down her face....

Me and the wife go at it for 15 minutes and her makeup is a mess, LOL

In a perfect world I'd be able to show the wear and tear on Vivian. Unfortunately there are logistical limitations to what I can render using off the shelf products. If I were more skilled, had a production team helping me, and/or more time to give, then maybe I could but I can't. Glad you're enjoy the story, though. The friendly debates here are entertaining. A couple of you have made some scary accurate predictions (of course, I'm not saying who). I'm doing all I can to get the next installment done while maintaining the same quality as the first.

 

[LUISIL]

In a perfect world I'd be able to show the wear and tear on Vivian. Unfortunately there are logistical limitations to what I can render using off the shelf products. If I were more skilled, had a production team helping me, and/or more time to give, then maybe I could but I can't. Glad you're enjoy the story, though. The friendly debates here are entertaining. A couple of you have made some scary accurate predictions (of course, I'm not saying who). I'm doing all I can to get the next installment done while maintaining the same quality as the first.

Hey Man...don't get discouraged on some INSIGNIFICANTS details. Keep Focus, your product is currently the best in this site.It hurts that we must wait 4 FOUR CUATRO QUATRO QUATRE! months, but your effort will make it worth the Wait.

 

[X|Mortis]

i like this part more
hoop he make part for this boys and make open action with them too
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