Thank you for giving us the game and the great story!
I has already answered that is he is not to give any details of such information cause will damage the effect and impact of the story.
Choices with different outcomes are definitely better and honestly i tend to skip VN or just rush the play with the skip button.
Well , my only comment is: please do not rush things. You have made a impressive game from the start and I think you should really take all the time you need to review next part and adjust dialogues so that the keep immersive and balanced to the right spot (not too vanilla , not too much slutness from Vivian, and a lot of psychological tension). Good luck!
I'm into all sorts of games. Do I develop an opinion over time about a game? Yes. Sometimes though, no matter my opinion, it's nice to read/play through a game where the author tells me a story and I just enjoy the story for what the author wanted me to see.
I would have peed my pants if he said fuck quieter. Knock on the door if you are going to fuck my wife you could have the courtesy to keep it down I need some sleep.SC Stories
Perhaps when the game is fully completed, done and dusted, then maybe... you could add some alternate "What if" epilogues to expand the game world.
I would mind some what if moments like...
"What if Hutch grabbed the knife in the Kitchen?" or
"What if Hutch stepped out of the toilet and joined in for a threeway?" or
"What if Hutch accepted the anal offer?" or
"What if Hutch shouted at them to fuck more quieter in the bedroom?"
So many possibilities from this version alone!
This would require a complete rewrite of Hutch's character and the whole story. He's too much of a pushover and way too passive to do any of those things, but if he wasn't then the story wouldn't work at all.SC Stories
Perhaps when the game is fully completed, done and dusted, then maybe... you could add some alternate "What if" epilogues to expand the game world.
I would mind some what if moments like...
"What if Hutch grabbed the knife in the Kitchen?" or
"What if Hutch stepped out of the toilet and joined in for a threeway?" or
"What if Hutch accepted the anal offer?" or
"What if Hutch shouted at them to fuck more quieter in the bedroom?"
So many possibilities from this version alone!
Curiosity answer: There are very very few adult games that are actually worth playing (at least for picky people like me), but that doesn't take away from what your game has accomplished. I get sick of poorly written walls of text, your approach of "show, don't tell" (as much as possible) is a fresh breath of air. Quite enjoy the cinematic shots as well.
Indeed, my thoughts exactly. At times, it felt as if I was watching an actual movie unfold before my eyes - in addition to the gameplay/narrative itself. The cinematic shots were appropriately timed as well to make the reader feel more immersed in the overarching narrative.
Indeed. While choice-based gameplay and different routes might encourage replayability at times, having a singular path can make the narrative more focused in a sense and not deviate too much/distract the player with too many unnecessary characters/sub-routes/etc which can sometimes disrupt the flow of the AVN. That is where oftentimes the applicability of a kinetic novel might be more beneficial to consider - i.e., given how a dev wants to structure the overall flow of their narrative.
I too, loved that scene myself. I got excited when I heard about Christian's proposition to Hutch about Vivian being his bunk-mate for the night
Very sexy scene overall and the fact they were going at it all night, and well into the early morning hours as well No You are absolutely right. One of the main reasons I connected with MHB right away apart from the fantastic renders, realistic dialogues, visual storytelling and you have an intriguing and noble attitude towards potential patrons is that this thing actually stood true to its name. A fucking visual NOVEL. Games like ORS that have interesting writing and great artwork get on my nerves so much because it feels like there is no fucking story. there is something for everybody. like how is it different from fan service. as a developer whats the story that you wanted to say? Anyway when you wrote you dont like too many choices and always play with a walkthrough. BOOM. Fell in love with you at that moment. ILY
I agree this needs some explaining, which we will hopefully get in the next update when we will apparently have further insight into the wifes mindset. It cant just simply be "I love my husband so to keep him happy I am just gonna go fuck his boss". With the warnings from Hutch before the dinner and his hesitation when she is about to go into the bedroom for round 2 through to 20, she can not think this is all for him.
You've seen them for six days and managed to uncover a marriage fraud!
Bravo!Well Vivian thought Hutch was drunk and who said she wasn't betraying Hutch before?! We caught Vivian lying before and after the dinner.
We know only what we witnessed these 6 days, no more no less but some of you are damn profilers with the abillity to read face expressions and putting every word that has been said on the gold scale.
this vn has varied reactions from different readers. its just them voicing their views but only one opinion matters at the end of the day ( the dev's ).
