Robb123456

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Ok. I have to say i'm a little bit disappointed.

-Not so much sex scenes, so th porn aspect of it is not great. I have to say the middle scene is good but the é others no so much.
- The evoluion of Vivian is a bit much but it had to happen i guess. for the game to advance, Vivian needs to be slutified but by the same movement, she gets a lot less interesting. I understand SC stories comment about Vivian not being that interesting. The rape scene and Viv's reaction to it only happens in ntr porn.
- The only interest for me now is Hutch's reaction. It is clear now the respect will disappear.Hence, the scene we know of the 0.6.

I just hope Hutch won't be just a cuck. Because if it is it would be very disappointing.
 

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I wish I could be more articulate, but Holy Fuck Batman! So much to unpack, so much foreshadowing (or not), so well written. Wow. Surprising (or not). Cliched? Meh, not really - yes, certain themes have been around, but again the difference is in how the Dev develops and presents it. Jeezus, well done once again. Subjective opinions will abound, and some people cannot wait to crap on things, yet easily one of the all-time adult VNs and it's not even finished.
 
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Ok. I have to say i'm a little bit disappointed.

-Not so much sex scenes, so th porn aspect of it is not great. I have to say the middle scene is good but the é others no so much.
- The evoluion of Vivian is a bit much but it had to happen i guess. for the game to advance, Vivian needs to be slutified but by the same movement, she gets a lot less interesting. I understand SC stories comment about Vivian not being that interesting. The rape scene and Viv's reaction to it only happens in ntr porn.
- The only interest for me now is Hutch's reaction. It is clear now the respect will disappear.Hence, the scene we know of the 0.6.

I just hope Hutch won't be just a cuck. Because if it is it would be very disappointing.
completely agree
 

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Ok. I have to say i'm a little bit disappointed.

-Not so much sex scenes, so th porn aspect of it is not great. I have to say the middle scene is good but the é others no so much.
- The evoluion of Vivian is a bit much but it had to happen i guess. for the game to advance, Vivian needs to be slutified but by the same movement, she gets a lot less interesting. I understand SC stories comment about Vivian not being that interesting. The rape scene and Viv's reaction to it only happens in ntr porn.
- The only interest for me now is Hutch's reaction. It is clear now the respect will disappear.Hence, the scene we know of the 0.6.

I just hope Hutch won't be just a cuck. Because if it is it would be very disappointing.
Hutch is done.He doesn`t matter anymore at this point.I don`t think SC can do anything to be relevant because he downplayed him in this 2 chapters too much.
 

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Don't sleep on Hutch/Addison going forward. Addision is Christian's Brother's daughter. The tangled webs and retributions that can be weaved...
 
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Ok. I have to say i'm a little bit disappointed.

-Not so much sex scenes, so th porn aspect of it is not great. I have to say the middle scene is good but the é others no so much.
- The evoluion of Vivian is a bit much but it had to happen i guess. for the game to advance, Vivian needs to be slutified but by the same movement, she gets a lot less interesting. I understand SC stories comment about Vivian not being that interesting. The rape scene and Viv's reaction to it only happens in ntr porn.
- The only interest for me now is Hutch's reaction. It is clear now the respect will disappear.Hence, the scene we know of the 0.6.

I just hope Hutch won't be just a cuck. Because if it is it would be very disappointing.
I agree totally, her evolution is far to fast , she cried every time after her betrayal but just go further. And now, i dont think she even love her husband anymore, she just pretend to love him.

And like you i really hope for a great revenge of Hutch, some of his reaction show it
 

Robb123456

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Hutch is done.He doesn`t matter anymore at this point.I don`t think SC can do anything to be relevant because he downplayed him in this 2 chapters too much.
He's irrelevant to Vivian. But I think he can explore his life without her. It's not about even the cheating and the humiliation. He never saw his wife's true colors and I have to say most of guys would find her either deranged or either at least, not relationship material.
 
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Ok. I have to say i'm a little bit disappointed.

-Not so much sex scenes, so th porn aspect of it is not great. I have to say the middle scene is good but the é others no so much.
- The evoluion of Vivian is a bit much but it had to happen i guess. for the game to advance, Vivian needs to be slutified but by the same movement, she gets a lot less interesting. I understand SC stories comment about Vivian not being that interesting. The rape scene and Viv's reaction to it only happens in ntr porn.
- The only interest for me now is Hutch's reaction. It is clear now the respect will disappear.Hence, the scene we know of the 0.6.

I just hope Hutch won't be just a cuck. Because if it is it would be very disappointing.
Dont' worry my friend. Christian cares about his niece. I don't think our boy Hutch feel no more love,respect and FEAR. ;)
 

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Overall, I loved the first half of ch2, hated the second half. First half was very well written, believable outside a porn context. Second half does a bunch of ntr trope handwaving.
Very very very good update. Really sexy sensual scenes from Viv and Christian. It's hard to see Christian as the antagonist he is a player who knows the game! Let all hell break loose in chapter 3! Btw that "R" scene i believe was done in the perfect context. It may be hard to stomach but at the same time you understand it needed to happen to further the storyline and the emotions of the next scene. 10 out of 10 update!
Yeah not at all for me - easily the most hateable antagonist of recent memory. Immediately tempts me to track down the assets in daz just to make a fanart revenge scene with him.

v "Christian, I'd hate to see that pegging video we made last night with you and Bubba fall into the wrong hands..... who knows what your loyal underlings in the office might do with it.."
Well, it's not easy to outsmart men like Christian.
You mean men like antagonists in ntr games with plot armor? :LOL: totally agree. In the real world though that type is easy -9/10 times their fatal flaw is ego; you just play to that.
 

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Ok 2nd time i replay chapter 2 i have to say this....SC was right this isn't really a Vivian story... when you want to try to dissect the story you completely stop focusing on Vivian and focus almost completely on Hutch and his boss(Christian) Vivian becomes irrelevant we NOW know that based on this chapter she is just a piece of meat to be passed around.

What has the attention is how much more damage will Christian do to Hutch and how much more is Hutch willing to take before he succumbs or fights back... it's Hutch and Christian the characters that we can't predict..Vivian became predictable in ch 2.
 

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Overall, I loved the first half of ch2, hated the second half. First half was very well written, believable outside a porn context. Second half does a bunch of ntr trope handwaving.

Yeah not at all for me - easily the most hateable antagonist of recent memory. Immediately tempts me to track down the assets in daz just to make a fanart revenge scene with him.

v "Christian, I'd hate to see that pegging video we made last night with you and Bubba fall into the wrong hands..... who knows what your loyal underlings in the office might do with it.."

You mean men like antagonists in ntr games with plot armor? :LOL: totally agree. In the real world though that type is easy -9/10 times their fatal flaw is ego; you just play to that.
Funny this is the second Chris that is hated in a NTR game APM is the first.
 
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