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duckydoodoo

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chapter 2 was unsurprising in every way. as for things getting darker for hutch, ive assumed from chapter 1 his actions mood and choices are going to be dark. funny that everyone thinks rubbing salt into a the wound over and over again is what will make things darker. lol dude already looks unhinged, im frankly surprised he doesnt talk about french fried taters, i mean his facial expressions and demeanor make him a shoe in for lead role in a sling blade reboot
 

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I'm just here getting myself ready for the Hutch pain that's about to be unleashed in chapter 3 which is a sad statement considering whats already happened to him . At least we have a good 4 or 5 months to prepare . The first bedroom scene in chapter 1 was the hottest scene I've ever seen and I'm guessing we will be getting another one similar in chapter 3 .Hopefully there are cutscene where we see inside bedroom or they just don't care and leave door open/cracked. Just guessing though
 

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Christian is a real low life. He said he would steal Hutch wife from him ( in jest ) . But he actually ment it. I think only because she was a conquest. She means nothing to him. Somewhere I think she will find that out and either hatch her own plan to take Christian down or partner with Hutch. I actually thought Christian was not bad in the manner he had conversations with hutch. He seem to show respect for him .... But underneath wow he is a shark ! He needs to be taken out with the trash !

Vivian is a lost soul She doesn't know what to do. If what she said to Christian is true... Wow she is in for a big surprise....and it will not be a good one !
 

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We will know more about Vivian in the early moments of 3 chapter when she gets home and faces Hutch. Either she tells Hutch she is moving to Christians or they are in on a plan together. I am curious if we do see more setups from Christian if Vivian is pimped out again... Not sure if that would be part of 3.
don't think there will be a plan by vivian or hutch or either of them doing setup plan to get back at christian. the last scene clearly showed the vivian belongs to christian now and she accepts that. there is no more more hutch. there is a 0.00001% chance i maybe wrong but so far all progression shows vivian or hutch or both destroying themselves. so a tragedy for the protagonists.

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having read your followup post it made sense (y)
I have to disagree. The interlude with Sunshine and rain is obviously not satisfying for Vivian. She appears awkward and has to be constantly dragged - in complete contrast to her relation to the Boss, where she is eager and attentive all the time. Reason among aothers: she needs a person, a dominant character. It's a mistake (and falls for liberal propaganda) to think that Vivian's "needs" are primarily sexual. If so, that escapade with Sunshine may have helped (although not "healthy" in my opinion whatever that means). Her needs come frome deficits in her characer and personality development, a crisis, a craving for validation. Sex is just a means to achieve that. It's a liberal fallacy to conflate that.
hit the mark there with the comment DB was about to write this after reading DA's post.

Your take on the scene is similar to what I took from the scene. It's an extremely powerful scene that pretty much sets up the game going forward. In one scene, we got enough deposition to allow Vivian to understand her urges, her fetishes, her kinks etc etc are not forbidden; everybody has them, and in some cases, people happily act on them and live a normal life. On top of that. She got to experience Anal sex, a woman watching her husband have sex with another and a bit more. Its this scene that completes her fall from Grace or rather allows her to accept what she truly wants. She'd have never gone had love and cuddle sex with Christian or told him she was his without it.
vivians fall from grace??? didnt you read the conversations before about her trampstamp and he past history as a wild gal?? she was just acting the part and repressing her true nature which was take advantage by the antagonist. with or without the sunshine and rain encounter vivian was flawed as stated by others in this thread many times over. not because of the encounter but the dev is using that to show vivian she can save her marriage but as a flawed character she made the wrong choices. repeatedly since chapter 1.

And surely that's absolutely the right, healthy and normal thing to do for her. Man...
:LOL: totally agree but everyone has their own experiences seems like he is relating some to real life when Lagunavii is writing about living happy lives. not sure. what that means.

Christian is a real low life. He said he would steal Hutch wife from him ( in jest ) . But he actually ment it. I think only because she was a conquest. She means nothing to him. Somewhere I think she will find that out and either hatch her own plan to take Christian down or partner with Hutch. I actually thought Christian was not bad in the manner he had conversations with hutch. He seem to show respect for him .... But underneath wow he is a shark ! He needs to be taken out with the trash !

Vivian is a lost soul She doesn't know what to do. If what she said to Christian is true... Wow she is in for a big surprise....and it will not be a good one !
didn't want to burst your theory so sorry in advance.... if she was smart or clever(2 words the i think the can never describe vivian) she wouldn't have fallen for the escort trap in the first place... she proposed that idea to christian at the restaurant when she said the client was having marital issue... how dumb is she that she cant even ad 1+1 = 2 . and christian may have manipulated her but she did it in the end and like it. as some others explained before in this thread.. vivian is not a planer or doer... events of chapter 1 and 2 all happened because of her and she is dumb enough not to realise it. she even talks about all that she went through was for nothing in the restaurant.

there is the hutch plan theory but i don't think that will be happening as the way the story in progressing ... just the fallout which will destroy everyone from the events that occur in chapters 2, 3 and 4 is my thinking. someone posted that hutch will end himself and addison will take revenge..... that's a more likely possibility than vivian or hutch coming up with a plan.
 
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Congratulations SC Stories for the formidable work, the novel is a work of art by your gender. Also say that I saw a small mistake in one scene, but I suppose you have already commented it, this is the scene of vivian and christan in the car, in a plane of the action where you see the bare back of vivian, does not have the tattoo. Looking forward to chapter 3
 

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He also stylized this as a moment of liberation and self-discovery which in my opinion is a total over-estimation of this sex with two strangers.
I give you the possibility that from the perspective of narrative technique the dev could have meant to imply this nexus, that the one follows the other. I'm still not convinced because she herself makes clear that she sees the difference between that casual sex and her interest in the boss, that she needs the latter, not the former. So why would she transfer "insights" from the one to the other? And even if so it would be dangerous and delusional to do so.
I mean... in 10 minutes Sunshine was able to dig deeper into her psyche than Christian was in 2 lengthy scenes, hardly makes the case for either Sunshine being fleeting or the boss being necessary. For all his bravado and narrative padding; Christian seems far more like a device Viv uses to feel complete.
 
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We'll know when 3rd release comes in. That said, if she does tell Hutch,,, it is over... Why is she with him in the 3rd release previews ? At that point I do not think Hutch would care about her or his job... move on and game over... But, it is not. So, there is something Dev is not telling us yet. As for hutch in the Mens club.. Not sure about that at all. I lost the other pic showing the girl on the pole... Not sure if it is Vivian or not...
 

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I mean... in 10 minutes Sunshine was able to dig deeper into her psyche than Christian was in 2 lengthy scenes, hardly makes the case for either Sunshine being fleeting or the boss being neccesary. For all his bravado and narrative padding; Christian seems far more like a device Viv uses to feel complete.
I agree... somewhere she will se she is a tool, nothing more. I do not know How it will effect Hutch.. But it will make a good story.
 
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We'll know when 3rd release comes in. That said, if she does tell Hutch,,, it is over... Why is she with him in the 3rd release previews ? At that point I do not think Hutch would care about her or his job... move on and game over... But, it is not. So, there is something Dev is not telling us yet. As for hutch in the Mens club.. Not sure about that at all. I lost the other pic showing the girl on the pole... Not sure if it is Vivian or not...
Feel the club pics are from the business trip.
 

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I mean... in 10 minutes Sunshine was able to dig deeper into her psyche than Christian was in 2 lengthy scenes, hardly makes the case for either Sunshine being fleeting or the boss being neccesary. For all his bravado and narrative padding; Christian seems far more like a device Viv uses to feel complete.
your are correct in saying sunshine analysed vivian in one event but vivian wants to be with christian that what have seen by the end of the update. not hutch not rain or not some random person at a bar. vivians past as a trampstamp girl and her repressed past activities are talked about and show that she wants christian as Dealbreaker wrote in his post...or was it DarkArchon . someone posted earlies about the manipulations of christian and how vivian is accepting of it. this just shows even when shown a better option by sunshine vivian chose christian in the end. even if we all know and say no .... vivian choosing christian shows his manipulation and bravado are working better on vivian.
Feel the club pics are from the business trip.
that's a very high possibility.
 
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Christian is a real low life. He said he would steal Hutch wife from him ( in jest ) . But he actually ment it. I think only because she was a conquest. She means nothing to him. Somewhere I think she will find that out and either hatch her own plan to take Christian down or partner with Hutch. I actually thought Christian was not bad in the manner he had conversations with hutch. He seem to show respect for him .... But underneath wow he is a shark ! He needs to be taken out with the trash !

Vivian is a lost soul She doesn't know what to do. If what she said to Christian is true... Wow she is in for a big surprise....and it will not be a good one !
Christian from the beginning you can see he is a narcissist so i don`t know what you can like about him.Vivian is a slut but i don`t know why dev portray her in such a bad light.Even if you understand her motive how she behave is utterly illogical.
But my main beef with chapter 2 and maybe 1 a little is the lack of reaction from Hutch.I understand chapter 3 is going to be Hutch`s stage but at this point i`m so fed up with him.And i don`t think he will go berserk or be "behind the scene mastermind" to redeem himself for being a loser.
 

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Feel Christian took him to the club to see if he could corrupt him. But don't think he succeeded because he did not mention anything to Vivian. If Hutch did something believe Christian would have told Vivian with urgency.
 

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Feel the club pics are from the business trip.
I here you... but I don't see what that does for the game....Hutch sitting in a mens club.. And a retro view of an event at that...But the pic I lost showed him looking at someone in a distance with a better attitude ? interesting
 

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I here you... but I don't see what that does for the game....Hutch sitting in a mens club.. And a retro view of an event at that...But the pic I lost showed him looking at someone in a distance with a better attitude ? interesting
Early I said I think Christian was trying to corrupt him. As leverage for using Vivian which we find was a waste.
 

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Feel Christian took him to the club to see if he could corrupt him. But don't think he succeeded because he did not mention anything to Vivian. If Hutch did something believe Christian would have told Vivian with urgency.
Yea think so too. Hutch is good with numbers. He wants to "own" him also. Vivian is having sex with the clients closing the deals and Hutch is doing his magic with numbers.
Christian knows how to exploit people
 
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