88stanford88
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I said that this story is written in a realistic wayWell...
there is real life and then there is entertainment. With entertainment it's not real...but that doesn't stop people from liking/disliking, finding inspiration, or getting emotionally invested in a work of fiction. So, we all have to take a grain of salt because in all reality it's like talking about weaponizing squirrels--pointless, though to be fair it can be fun to waste time discussing it.
I never said that is not a fiction
The great thing about this is that this story could be the couple who live near my house where there is a wife who is a teacher and the husband is employed in a financial private company
This makes the story realistic and believable
I already write that if porno logic means that Chris has an erection when is in the car with Vivian..I do take issue with "porn logic" as being a workaround in a story's plot because it's just lazy or lack of talent. And these "games"...damn. For some reason chicks-with-dicks is the theme of many new games... almost every game out there has a guy with a dick as long as his forearm (and all women in those games go KooKOO for it)... and it's like watching acrobatswith all the crazy positions and... {never mind}
WELL
I will also had an erction in that car for real
I don't think Sunshine will be a permanent character...it is very provable that both Rebecca and her husband Brian /those are their real names are just side characters who will never appear again...or they will be random encountersNow as far as "My husband's Boss," it has the potential of being a great game... at the moment it's a good game. I said it earlier, but the Sunshine/Rain story to propel the narrative of a wife taking it upon herself to cheat was a bit too much... or as you have correctly pointed out "PORN LOGIC." What are the odds of a woman meetings another woman into swinging at bar...with swinging husband in tow and they happen to even talk about life phycology ending up in bed... or the odds of Vivian going out and getting picked up by some random dude? Yes, I know it's the developer's narrative to explain the character Vivian... but what path is the better one?
I believe that the developer will close the fictional narrative in 8/10 chapters at most and that all events will see Vivian as the center of the story
Me too, but that means that the "porn logic" has nothing to do with this game and will never be present in this story.... because even in real life we have sex and in this case Viv does it with her husband's boss because the conditions lead the couple, including Hutch, to this choice.I do like the story...
The whole thing is pretty damn realistic (again I am not talking that the story is reality.. it is fiction)
but for what we see in the first two chapters the story is believable and there are no holes in the script
This is what I call a realistic narrative
The story takes place in the present, and if there are flashbacks I strongly hope that they will be centered on Viv's past.... because she is undoubtedly the main character and as I said in my previous posts there is a side of Vivian that might lead us to find out why Hutch married such a sexually exuberant woman ... for sure they love each other but there is something missing ... and knowing why Hutch married Vivian is very important to close the “realistic” picture of her apparently bipolar behavior.I was wondering how the developer was to explain Vivian's actions at the dinner and thought his solution was flashbacks... but no, the explanation of Vivian's behavior is explained in the duologs between Christian and Vivian in Chp. 2 Actually I think it's a pretty clever writing style that both explains Vivian's behavior then and now, as well as flesh out Vivian's evolution going into this lifestyle
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