VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[SC Stories]

Great to hear that you are well. Chapter 2 occupied me so much that I sat down and wrote a possible sequel. It contains 5558 words and if you are interested in contact me via jon_hoesm@gmail.com. Alternatively, I could post it here as fanfic. In this reply, I add the first lines of the fan sequel (Immediately after Vivian rather rudely dropped Hutch off at home.):

If you're asking me if it's okay to post fan fiction, yes... go right ahead. As far as potential sequels though, there will be ways to carve out a sequel or a spin off, but it won't come from me. I've mentioned before I will likely release the characters as a downloadable asset for Daz after I'm done and people can 're-imagine' her how they see fit.

You'll find that most successful devs have just abandoned F95 for the most part or altogether. It becomes a bombardment of entitlement. You've got a good game.

Professional devs might not have many places to go anymore. The whole payment processing thing going on right now might force many of them to purely SFW games in order to get paid.

I'll give the wardrobe poll another day but looks like skirt&jacket Viv is in a comfortable lead. Thanks for the warm welcome back.

 

[_YD__]

If you're asking me if it's okay to post fan fiction, yes... go right ahead. As far as potential sequels though, there will be ways to carve out a sequel or a spin off, but it won't come from me. I've mentioned before I will likely release the characters as a downloadable asset for Daz after I'm done and people can 're-imagine' her how they see fit.


Professional devs might not have many places to go anymore. The whole payment processing thing going on right now might force many of them to purely SFW games in order to get paid.

I'll give the wardrobe poll another day but looks like skirt&jacket Viv is in a comfortable lead. Thanks for the warm welcome back.

both look good but wasn't in for the fishnet stockings.

 

[adrocks7156]

The goat SC Stories is back, good to hear from you. Looking forward to upcoming updates

 

[noahsombrero]

the only thing I was implying was that we would get a reaction from you on every post. I'm not really a fighter. I would rather take Viv for a ride

Every Post? Shirley, you exaggerate. I know you might rather not see my stuff at all. No way pal.

Actually I have no quarrel with your stuff. You seem like a Wife lover, not a hater. Wife lovers unite. In pornland we don't even need to take turns.
Because here in pornland there are really only two rational responses to an image in on computer screen.
Yes, I want to fuck her
or
No, I don't want to fuck her.

It seems you would like to fuck Wife. So welcome to the club.

 

[noahsombrero]

SC's comment about how chapt 3 is where we will see Husband dealing with his complex feelings, together with some things SC said early on about how Wife is really not a complex character, and perhaps the least interesting of the three are bringing things a lot clearer for me.

So, the simple interpretation:
That all night session in the bedroom with Husband listening through the door really was the honeymoon scene that it appeared to be with her screaming her pleasure and Boss grunting his all 7 times. It was far more intense for both of them than either expected, and has been the beginning of them constructing an enduring relationship which will be completed in chapt 4. Boss and Wife have much to say to each other in making that enduring relationship possible, a whole chapter's worth. So next up, Wife goes home to Husband and tells him they are through. From now on she will be living with Boss, staying with him every night.

And somehow Husband deals with it. We cannot imagine at this point. I don't think he is anywhere near being ready for a new relationship, officegirl or not. But stranger things have happened in pornland. Yes, it would be great if he could find a willing partner and fuck her 7 times in one night. Perhaps SC will let us watch this time.

But we can still have a little more complex interpretation:
Wife goes home to Husband and begins to attempt a reconciliation with him. Yes Husband will be still dealing with his complex emotions.

But in light of what we have seen of Boss & Wife dealing with each other, I can't see that reconciliation, as long as Boss respects Wife's demands.

Yeh, I know the female degredation and corruption guys are giggling in the background. I'd say my interpretations are as good as anything you guys offer. So giggle away.

 

[Shinomorisan]

If you're asking me if it's okay to post fan fiction, yes... go right ahead. As far as potential sequels though, there will be ways to carve out a sequel or a spin off, but it won't come from me. I've mentioned before I will likely release the characters as a downloadable asset for Daz after I'm done and people can 're-imagine' her how they see fit.


Professional devs might not have many places to go anymore. The whole payment processing thing going on right now might force many of them to purely SFW games in order to get paid.

I'll give the wardrobe poll another day but looks like skirt&jacket Viv is in a comfortable lead. Thanks for the warm welcome back.

Just wanted to say that the quality of your work is some of the very best on the site. The explosion of popularity is testament to that. The characters are unique and well crafted. The scenes are layed out and rendered well. The story is well thought out and has a logic to it. Oh and of course Viv is hot. I might have some different preferences for how the story goes and would definitely like more saucy scenes with Viv, but more than that I want to see where YOUR story goes. As I said the overall quality is exceptional. I would very much like to see anything else you work on that you feel is somewhat complete even if it is quite short. If you don't want to release half assed stuff I can appreciate that, but I would really like to see anything you feel is complete.

 

[noahsombrero]

Just wanted to say that the quality of your work is some of the very best on the site. The explosion of popularity is testament to that. The characters are unique and well crafted. The scenes are layed out and rendered well. The story is well thought out and has a logic to it. Oh and of course Viv is hot. I might have some different preferences for how the story goes and would definitely like more saucy scenes with Viv, but more than that I want to see where YOUR story goes. As I said the overall quality is exceptional. I would very much like to see anything else you work on that you feel is somewhat complete even if it is quite short. If you don't want to release half assed stuff I can appreciate that, but I would really like to see anything you feel is complete.

Damned right.

 

[noahsombrero]

Concerning Steam purging porn. I do have a number of porn games in my Steam account. The list is now a little shorter. I'm not sure what is gone, but Bad Memories, which has a lot of incest, is there and has an update. As does Defending Lydia Collier. It is not clear what standards they are using. It might be that having porn or even incest is not the issue. The dev of Boundaries of Morality says he was denied access because his characters look a little too much like real life (Otherwise known as FMV) and, yes, they do fuck right on your computer screen. No Steam, the guy is simply a really good graphic artist.

Chasing Sunsets also has an update on Steam. It is a good day for porn, yesterday's return of SC makes it fabulous.

 

[Luc77]

SC Stories
It is good that you are. You make a great story and never doubt it. At the same time, even the best stories never satisfy everyone. You yourself know well that the audience here is.... heavily targeted, so negative criticism from them should not crush you Van.

 

[noahsombrero]

SC Stories
It is good that you are. You make a great story and never doubt it. At the same time, even the best stories never satisfy everyone. You yourself know well that the audience here is.... heavily targeted, so negative criticism from them should not crush you Van.

No doubt. He says he ignores us to preserve his sanity. That is encouraging in a way.

 

[Dealbreaker]

My humble recommendation to the dev: I'm convinced that you could read this forum without any damage and even without being shaken in your confidence as a creator, on the contrary, you are going to harvest overwhelming and well earned sympathy for your game. I also humbly think, that you could profit (as any creator) from the readers' perspectives (and I mean user statements from all sides), even if you won't be influenced in the grand design of your game, as you have stated early on. There are some criticisms which could be interesting to reflect on if you are inclined to do so.
People here are obviously unwilling or incapable of differentiating between player, character of the game and creator. Critizising the FMC of the game (as superfluous and aggressive as it may be) IS NOT THE SAME as critizising either the game as such or the creator. This sould be self-evident. That is what is bringing down the thread.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

SC's comment about how chapt 3 is where we will see Husband dealing with his complex feelings, together with some things SC said early on about how Wife is really not a complex character, and perhaps the least interesting of the three are bringing things a lot clearer for me.

So, the simple interpretation:
That all night session in the bedroom with Husband listening through the door really was the honeymoon scene that it appeared to be with her screaming her pleasure and Boss grunting his all 7 times. It was far more intense for both of them than either expected, and has been the beginning of them constructing an enduring relationship which will be completed in chapt 4. Boss and Wife have much to say to each other in making that enduring relationship possible, a whole chapter's worth. So next up, Wife goes home to Husband and tells him they are through. From now on she will be living with Boss, staying with him every night.

And somehow Husband deals with it. We cannot imagine at this point. I don't think he is anywhere near being ready for a new relationship, officegirl or not. But stranger things have happened in pornland. Yes, it would be great if he could find a willing partner and fuck her 7 times in one night. Perhaps SC will let us watch this time.

But we can still have a little more complex interpretation:
Wife goes home to Husband and begins to attempt a reconciliation with him. Yes Husband will be still dealing with his complex emotions.

But in light of what we have seen of Boss & Wife dealing with each other, I can't see that reconciliation, as long as Boss respects Wife's demands.

Yeh, I know the female degredation and corruption guys are giggling in the background. I'd say my interpretations are as good as anything you guys offer. So giggle away.

He would definately serve her divorce papers for adultery. Any divorce court case he would win, he would probly get the house but she can keep the cum car. I’m pretty sure son or mailman’s son is 18 so no custody battle there either

 

[_YD__]

No doubt. He says he ignores us to preserve his sanity. That is encouraging in a way.

So I was exaggerating about replying to every post?

 

[noahsombrero]

Critizising the FMC of the game (as superfluous and aggressive as it may be) IS NOT THE SAME as critizising either the game as such or the creator. This sould be self-evident. That is what is bringing down the thread.

That's odd, I was not thinking that mortally criticizing or hating Wife had any implications for the game or the creator. For me, I simply think that even in the context of this game, a woman would deserve a more sympathetic treatment than a few (not many really) are willing to grant. My criticism then is directed at those who do not want to grant such sympathetic treatment, not at the game or SC.

He would definately serve her divorce papers for adultery. Any divorce court case he would win, he would probly get the house but she can keep the cum car. I’m pretty sure son or mailman’s son is 18 so no custody battle there either

I am glad to say that I can agree with you there. Divorce for adultery would definitely be an option on the table. It seems to me though that the SC intends to concern part 3 mainly with Husband dealing with his conflicting emotions. Loving Wife, hating her sexual infidelity, etc. Wife has a similar conflict to resolve, which would be inability to stand the though of Husband fucking another woman, while at the same time herself fucking Boss madly.

Shrinks would say:

Cognitive dissonance refers to the mental discomfort experienced when a person holds two conflicting beliefs or when their actions do not align with their beliefs. This discomfort often motivates individuals to change their thoughts or behaviors to achieve consistency and reduce the tension. This is where both Husband and Wife are right now.

Once the dissonance is resolved, both can start to behave in a more directed and rational way. And then, part of Wife and Boss putting together an enduring relationship would be Boss demanding that Wife divorce Husband if Husband has not already taken that action. And removing him from the premier place in her heart so Boss can have that position, married or not. Depending on where SC wants to take this game.

If Wife could come to understand that she has already in effect replaced Husband in her heart with Boss, it would help her resolve her conflict. IRL such understandings do not come cheap. It might take the prospect of loosing Boss if she cannot let Husband go to trigger the understanding. Or vice versa depending on where takes the game.

I do not think that either your or my preference will have any effect on SC's decision which could well be something neither of us has contemplated.

 

[Dealbreaker]

That's odd, I was not thinking that mortally criticizing or hating Wife had any implications for the game or the creator. For me, I simply think that even in the context of this game, a woman would deserve a more sympathetic treatment than a few (not many really) are willing to grant.

Odd indeed. You are constantly suggesting that people don't appreciate the dev (last time as late as yesterday) and are hating the game which is nonsense and badmouthing the thread.

 

[noahsombrero]

Odd indeed. You are constantly suggesting that people don't appreciate the dev (last time as late as yesterday) and are hating the game which is nonsense and badmouthing the thread.

What I then say is that I am entitled to my interpretation which does not agree with yours and does not in my mind cast aspersions on the game or SC. The aspersion is upon those who are unwilling to grant Wife what it seems to me a reasonable accommodation for the situation she finds herself in. You of course may ignore my aspersion the same as I ignore yours. Your appreication of the dev is not my concern. He has returned and assured us that he has not taken offense with either your interpretation or mine.

Because it feels to me like you want to impugn my brain power or my manhood because I refuse to hate, hate, hate, hate Wife. Perhaps we can agree to mutually ignore such implications. So now, what are we arguing about?

The game is exactly as it should be. It is up to me to understand it or not. I continue to do my best. I have no doubt that SC will prove me wrong about many things.

 

[Emperoe_46]

Can anyone recommend games with a plot and story as compelling as this one? Ideally, I'm looking for a slow burner that is already completed and enjoyable to play.

 

[noahsombrero]

Can anyone recommend games with a plot and story as compelling as this one? Ideally, I'm looking for a slow burner that is already completed and enjoyable to play.

It seems to me this game has no equal. People tend to not agree on what is so good about it, but we all agree that this is great stuff. I think you will find the games in my sig to be worth your time. Completed games are hard to find because they tend to be labors of love extending over some years. City of Broken Dreamers in my list is complete.

 

[jon_hoe]

SC Stories said: "If you're asking me if it's okay to post fan fiction, yes... go right ahead."

Thank u 4 the answer. Here I go (Plot 1 - feel free to use it however you want):

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[noahsombrero]

SC Stories said: "If you're asking me if it's okay to post fan fiction, yes... go right ahead."

Thank u 4 the answer. Here I go (Plot 1 - feel free to use it however you want):

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A route for possible Wife/Husband reconciliation that I hadn't thought of. And not a hint of hatred for wife. Thanks.