VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[noahsombrero]

I never said that Hutch held that opinion of Vivian when he married her. They have been married for 20 years, and he worked for Christian for 6. It is obvious I was not talking about when they first got married, and you know that, but that is the length you will go to deny the evidence. You have no evidence to rebut what I said so you use a strawman. Your reasoning is so weak, it takes little effort to tear apart what you say. You continue to simp for Vivian, and as usual you provide no evidence for your claims. You just expect everyone to believe you because you say it. There is nothing viscous about my analysis, it is simply based on what is SHOWN in the game. Your analysis is based on what you MAKE UP in your head, not what is in the game. You don't have evidence to support your assertions, so you just attack the motives of people who are actually honest with what the AUTHOR is CLEARLY communicating in the story. The Vivian you talk about is the Vivian in your head not the story. The story you talk about is in your head, not what the AUTHOR has created. You don't like the Vivian the AUTHOR put in the story, so you make up your own Vivian and tell everyone else your made up Vivian is the Vivian in the story. The evidence that Hutch kept Vivian from Christian because he knew he would end up fucking her is what SC Stories put in the story. The screenshots I provided show this is the case, but as always, you refuse to accept the evidence. I will let you in on a little secret. The AUTHOR made it clear that Christian knew Hutch hid Vivian from him because Hutch was afraid Christian would end up fucking her.

You have manufactured a pretty good fantasy of what I think. Do you think you repeated it enough times?

Now we all know you will ignore the evidence, as you always do, and as you did in your reply to my post. You will pretend the AUTHOR did not make it CLEAR that Hutch hid Vivian from Christian because he knew she would end up fucking Christian, and you will pretend that Christian did not know that Hutch was hiding Vivian from him because Hutch knew Christian would end up fucking her. This will all be based on the story you make up in your head, and not the story the AUTHOR wrote.

You accept Boss's view of the situation. Others do likewise and even repeat Boss's words to Wife, "You could have always said no", as if that were not pure manipulation on his part. No, I think Boss's analysis of the situation is sick. Even so, it might prevail. And I grant you that you can show pics where Boss says pretty much what you say, but that does not make him right.

Simply because Boss thinks that Husband hid wife from him so he could not fuck her, does not mean that there can be no other interpretation. Or that your interpretation is evidence of anything. It is simply your interpretation.

Here is my evidence. Boss tells Husband to not bring her. Husband allows her to come in spite of that. If he had any idea of what was about to happen would he have done that. He would have stood his ground and made her see that Boss does not want her there. I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it.

And here is where I grant that none of us know what SC has in mind. Not you, not me, not your girlfriend or your peanut butter sandwich. None of us know. So maybe be quiet and learn something.

 

[DarkArchon]

You have manufactured a pretty good fantasy of what I think.


You accept Boss's view of the situation. Others do likewise and even repeat Boss's words to Wife, "You could have always said no", as if that were not pure manipulation on his part. No, I think Boss's analysis of the situation is sick. Even so, it might prevail. And I grant you that you can show pics where Boss says pretty much what you say, but that does not make him right.

Simply because Boss thinks that Husband hid wife from him so he could not fuck her, does not mean that there can be no other interpretation. Or that your interpretation is evidence of anything. It is simply your interpretation.

Here is my evidence. Boss tells Husband to not bring her. Husband allows her to come in spite of that. If he had any idea of what was about to happen would he have done that. He would have stood his ground and made her see that Boss does not want her there. I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it.

You should do stand up because you are really funny. Your words. "He would have stood his ground and made her see that Boss does not want her there. I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it."








It is CLEAR from the above pictures what Hutch will allow, and whether he has been a wimp. It is clear to me that I am wasting my time trying to reason with a person who ignores evidence that is put right in front of his face. You talk about Hutch standing his ground! You say, "I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it." Look at the above pictures and tell us about how Hutch acted on his fears.

Since it is obvious you are not concerned about discussing SC Stories game, and instead only want to talk about the game you created in your head, I am going to follow the advice of other posters and use the ignore button with you.

 

[Tugs666]

Did SC stories say next chapter will come out in October or November ? Anyone know ?

 

[oktabitt]

The cuckson senario we will see it in this game?

 

[TonyMurray]

Minus the husband. So many bad things can happen if the wrong person finds out but there is one good thing that can happen if Addison finds out she could manipulate Hutch into a little revenge sex. Would infuriate Vivian and can possibly create the younger man situation. Possible but far fetched feel(personal opinion) this is just going to be another cheating spouse with a depressed husband. Hoping I am proved wrong.

Regarding the garden party, I see no reason whatsoever that any of the colleagues (Maxwell, etc.) would be there. Only if it's specifically a "works" event, which I really don't see Christian throwing, especially at his own home, or a celebration of the business deal, in which case only Maxwell is known to be really involved (outside of Hutch and Vivian). So Addison is the only other colleague who is a plausible attendee, IMO, because she has the family connection as well.

Did SC stories say next chapter will come out in October or November ? Anyone know ?

A timeframe has not been stated yet. Dev took a bit of time off after Ch2, and I have a vague recollection of him talking about a bit more dev time this time around, but that could be for Ch4, since I know he already had a good bunch of the renders for Ch3 done in advance.

The cuckson senario we will see it in this game?

Maybe, maybe not, at this point only the dev knows. Personally, I'm on the fence, I can see if going either way, depending on which path Vivian takes next...

 

[Adhdclassic]

Wonder how many people really just want to see if Hutch grows balls. What his action will be regarding what his wife and boss. I am more interested in that then Vivians escapades. Everything she does is basically like every other cheating wife expected.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Wonder how many people really just want to see if Hutch grows balls. What his action will be regarding what his wife and boss. I am more interested in that then Vivians escapades. Everything she does is basically like every other cheating wife expected.

One could almost get the impression that people are not here at all to watch porn but either to cheer on a wronged husband and see his revenge or to cheer on the wife and to see a cheater transforming herself into the heroine of all frustrated housewives. I'm honest enough to say: I'm interested in a porn story (stress on both components), but one which is as good as possible - and that is not easy to produce, a lot less easy than to follow ideological narratives. And I admit: repetition is probably the biggest aesthetic problem of constructing a good porn story. Because with sex of course its always about repetition, how could it not? A good coomposer has to be able to write 100 variations on a well known tune. One means to do that is to use emotional stakes and, yes, moral stakes as well, but always as means to the end of makiing the story erotically more exciting. That seems to get out of sight here more and more.

 

[TonyMurray]

Wonder how many people really just want to see if Hutch grows balls. What his action will be regarding what his wife and boss. I am more interested in that then Vivians escapades. Everything she does is basically like every other cheating wife expected.

I'm not fussed whether it's a case of "Falling Down" and Hutch going on a revenge spree as some have posited, or just growing a pair and standing up to Vivian and Christian in some way, or having his own adventures with Addison or others... All I want in this respect is to avoid the practically sissified Hutch, who willingly or otherwise falls further into humiliation, for example Christian's "ice cream" reference from Ch1.

I am most interested for the "Hutch chapter" to show us where his head is at, and to find out one way or another what he's going to do, because so far, we haven't seen enough of his processing after the initial evening at Christian's.

 

[Adhdclassic]

One could almost get the impression that people are not here at all to watch porn but either to cheer on a wronged husband and see his revenge or to cheer on the wife and to see a cheater transforming herself into the heroine of all frustrated housewives. I'm honest enough to say: I'm interested in a porn story (stress on both components), but one which is as good as possible - and that is not easy to produce, a lot less easy than to follow ideological narratives. And I admit: repetition is probably the biggest aesthetic problem of constructing a good porn story. Because with sex of course its always about repetition, how could it not? A good coomposer has to be able to write 100 variations on a well known tune. One means to do that is to use emotional stakes and, yes, moral stakes as well, but always as means to the end of makiing the story erotically more exciting. That seems to get out of sight here more and more.

True no argument there, But porn wise these porn games sex acts and scenarios are a been there done that. Very rare that porn game leaves you wondering. DEV made a story not just a porn game. So if people are talking outside of the sex its because thats what the DEV wants and hasn't been shy of saying its a story as well. Most games like this leave the husband depressed utterly pathetic and we see where the husbands fate ends. DEV has made it where you don't know and you are left to speculate. AVN can be porn and story that is the draw to the AVN. Just my opinion from the DEVs words as well as the novel.

 

[Dealbreaker]

I am most interested for the "Hutch chapter" to show us where his head is at, and to find out one way or another what he's going to do, because so far, we haven't seen enough of his processing after the initial evening at Christian's.

I've always been of the opinion that the real revenge is not against the boss but against Vivian. In terms of porn logic that means. Hutch would have to build a coalition with the boss in order to further humiliate Vivian and to distance himself from her (but I guess that wouldn't go down well here, would it?). Just fucking Allison would be a repition of other games. And the healthiest solution (just leaving) is not a viable one for a porn story (no further sex scenes).

 

[GibboBtw]

Wonder how many people really just want to see if Hutch grows balls. What his action will be regarding what his wife and boss. I am more interested in that then Vivians escapades. Everything she does is basically like every other cheating wife expected.

That's me right here baby!


I have very low interest in watching more of Vivian being a whore, I've had enough of her hoeing already. My only interest in her now is watching to see if she gets any karma or comeuppances for her BS. My main interest though is hopefully getting some juicy drama from Hutch And hopefully not the kind, of watching him just continue being a passive cuck...

 

[88stanford88]

I understand but with only 3 chapters left. How will the Dev do that unless the updates are massive. On the other hand seeing Vivian fucking Christian all the time gets boring.

I'm not sure that "updates" as you call them will be 3
1. This game is released as standalone games so technically there are no real updates... every chapter is a complete story
2. this type of screenplay is like the TV Series that you don't need to whatch with a particular chronological order
3. you need to re-read the post SCS posted

In the SCS post where he talks about how many chapters he wants to write, he begins by saying that

Where have I been?

After pushing to release Chapter 2 and then having a lot of negative comments and review bombs I had to step away for a while. I knew people would leave the story over time, I just didn't think they'd make as much noise as they did when they left. However, based on the number of forum pages, I see there is still an active/loyal fan base and I appreciate you guys. But I can't bring myself to look at the reviews or go back and read all of the earlier posts for the sake of my own sanity. I still view this thread as belonging to you guys and I'm just a visitor but I'll participate a bit more and respond to questions and DM's when I can (No I won't tell you when the update is coming out. No I won't give away the plot.)

1. He will never reveal the plot
2. He had received too many negative comments and had therefore decided not to visit this thread for a while.
3. But fortunately, he also realized that there are many fans like me who appreciate his work without moralistically judging a wonderful story that could have happened to your neighbors who have expensive cars and wear luxury clothes without you ever knowing what they do to afford such a high standard of living

What have I been doing?

Mostly just working my house, lots of little projects I've neglected lately. I've also been do some writing on another story. It won't ever been rendered or made public but I like the creative process of building out the characters, plotting the story line and world building. I like taking some of those ideas and building test scenes in Daz to get a feel if my vision is possible. That's why a lot of MHB was rendered out of sequence. An idea gets me excited and I flesh out a test scene and next thing I know I'm rendering an entire scene.

If you read this paragraph carefully, you will understand that, even if he/she does it only as a hobby, he/she (personally, I believe that behind SC stories there is a girl who loves to write stories, but it's just a feeling I have and Maybe I'm only saying this because he chose a girl's avatar.)... he/she, inside his/her soul, has a passion for writing screenplays and does it by professional way.

He doesn't satisfy himself with creating an image with tons of text (which would have saved him a lot of time).
But he is scripting a film, and I am sure that his work will not remain amateur for long.
In fact, I'm sure he's received very serious job offers that are financially impossible to refuse.
He modifies the characters' expressions to make it clear how the actors should perform, and I'm sure that, like all great directors, he shouts,
“STOP! DON'T MAKE THAT FACE, YOU FUCKING IDIOT... THE AUDIENCE NEEDS TO UNDERSTAND WHAT YOU'RE FEELING WITHOUT SPEAKING.”
"Sorry guys, 10-minute break for the crew because now we're going to start shooting the scene again from the beginning"

What's the status of MHB?

The last couple weeks I've gotten back into the story. I've been going over the outline/script and starting to refine it more and finalizing the dialog. A subtle change in Chapter 1 or 2 can propagate through the story so I'm having to reconcile some things in Ch3 while still moving toward a known finale. I've also been working on doing the setup work for the next few scenes in Daz. Each scene needs the location, environment, characters, wardrobe, and accessories figured out plus a rough setting of cameras and lighting before any final posing and rendering can happen. I kind of like that process but I can easily spend an entire day just doing the setup of one scene. But I'm planning and starting to render this week.

Here SCS is talking like Spielberg... He or she has inside himself or herself the quality of a great director and producer of exceptional films with no budget limits.

Chapter 3 and beyond
Yes, a good chunk was already rendered but there is still a lot to do. Yes, this still deals a lot more with Hutch and I'm looking forward to tackling a complicated character, trying to convey the emotions welling within him. There are still some sexy scenes but fewer, making it much easier to render (sex scenes are fundamental to the story but they are not fun to make). It's hard to predict the amount of content that'll actually end up in the chapter but I'm guessing Chapter 3 will be about the same size as Chapter 2. I predict 4 will be a little smaller and 5 will be the shortest concentrating on just the finale. I originally had numerous gratuitous scenes that I'm cutting out so I can focus on the meat of the story. I think it makes the main story better and I think it's what the real fans want. Plus it simply cuts down on production time. I'm not trimming anything that drives the story, just the extra fluff.

He is working on it and it is also written that the third chapter could be ready in the fall, but I believe there is no rush... he or she will only release the chapter only whenhe will be satisfied with the result in all technical and artistic aspects..

He is an artist who knows how to be self-critical, and he is often the one who makes the harshest criticisms of his own work.

So I can only thank F95 for introducing me to such an extraordinary artist.
And NO! I don't think there will only be three chapters to the end of the story...
because his hope today will clash with his desire for perfection and completeness...
Chapter 3 will be a stand-alone game with a complete episode that doesn't need the word “END”
because in life, there is only one “REAL END” for everyone.. that name is MORTE!
I believe that the best endings to any story are those that end with the words: “TO BE CONTINUED....”

 

[88stanford88]

I'm still willing to bet regardless of what else happens, she's going to get blackmailed and then railed by that Token BBC student.

She will never been blackmailed in this game.. or better she has always the choice to go away and refuse to have sex... is Vivian that decides to beaing voluntary raped... and she has at lest 2 good reasons to accept this type of sex;
1. avoiding that hutch being fired
2. in the case of the BBC mechanic, she will decide whether to have sex with the BBC... because HE only asked her if he could test drive her 400 horsepower German car to pay off her debt (but no-debt for real). So this will never be a blackmail...
So if there is someone with whom she she is debt for repairing the car is her student nerd not the mechanic or his BBC

As you can see in the following scene, Vivian says and admits what she really feels when she has sex under blackmail

She felt ALIVE!

She wanted to be fucked HARD, ROUGH, AND VIOLENT

She wanted to be abused, She deserved and wanted to be penetrate

She felt... Satisfaction

She felt POWERFUL

She felt INVINCIBLE!!!


So there are no real blackmail in this game

Vivian has always the chance to leave before having sex

So, when she lets the BBC try her car, keeping her promise to pay off her debt... I think she will be the one to decide whether she wants to be penetrated by the big black cock or not!

To date, there has never been a real rape (so no real blackmail) for this gorgeous hot wife in this story because everyone has always given her the chance to walk away!

Just my 2 cents

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

I'm not fussed whether it's a case of "Falling Down" and Hutch going on a revenge spree as some have posited, or just growing a pair and standing up to Vivian and Christian in some way, or having his own adventures with Addison or others... All I want in this respect is to avoid the practically sissified Hutch, who willingly or otherwise falls further into humiliation, for example Christian's "ice cream" reference from Ch1.

I am most interested for the "Hutch chapter" to show us where his head is at, and to find out one way or another what he's going to do, because so far, we haven't seen enough of his processing after the initial evening at Christian's.

Definately want to see Hutchy get revenge on his boss

 

[88stanford88]

You should do stand up because you are really funny. Your words. "He would have stood his ground and made her see that Boss does not want her there. I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it."

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It is CLEAR from the above pictures what Hutch will allow, and whether he has been a wimp. It is clear to me that I am wasting my time trying to reason with a person who ignores evidence that is put right in front of his face. You talk about Hutch standing his ground! You say, "I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it." Look at the above pictures and tell us about how Hutch acted on his fears.

Since it is obvious you are not concerned about discussing SC Stories game, and instead only want to talk about the game you created in your head, I am going to follow the advice of other posters and use the ignore button with you.

For the note you are talking with someone that is in my black list since the first post he replays to me
Click on ignore button and you will live happy!

Just my 2 cents

 

[noahsombrero]

You should do stand up because you are really funny. Your words. "He would have stood his ground and made her see that Boss does not want her there. I do not grant that Husband is such a wimp that he could not have acted on that fear if he felt it."

Your pictures show that Boss fucks wife and Husband now knows about it. They do not show that he knew in advance that his Wife would allow that. The key is what she will allow. Husband knows very well, that if she is willing, there is no way he will stop her. If not now, it will be later. But if he knew in advance, and he was hiding her, then he would not have allowed her to go with him.

Since it is obvious you are not concerned about discussing SC Stories game, and instead only want to talk about the game you created in your head, I am going to follow the advice of other posters and use the ignore button with you.

Thanks DA, you are so kind.

 

[Luc77]

the basic issues are still not clarified - and their explanation can overturn all theories. So let's wait for the 3rd part which should already explain something.

 

[noahsombrero]

the basic issues are still not clarified - and their explanation can overturn all theories. So let's wait for the 3rd part which should already explain something.

My point exactly. As for the wussification of Husband, as Toni puts it, SC did say that chapters 2 & 3 would best have been combined. That way we would see Wife doing something and Husband responding, instead of standing helplessly by seeing everything, allowing everything, doing nothing. So, one way or the other, Husband looses his wussy aura in the next chapter.

 

[xert13]

My point exactly. As for the wussification of Husband, as Toni puts it, SC did say that chapters 2 & 3 would best have been combined. That way we would see Wife doing something and Husband responding, instead of standing helplessly by seeing everything, allowing everything, doing nothing. So, one way or the other, Husband looses his wussy aura in the next chapter.

Yeah, I tend to agree. This is one of those stories that needs to be taken in its entirety instead of making judgements based on one or two updates. I expect there to be some surprises that may flip the script. I still think not everything is as it appears…we shall see.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Weaker parts now won't be getting better by some revelation later.