How many chapters did you have planned for this amazing piece of work?Just cheating and getting away with it? That's answered in this version.
Losing the spouse? You'll have to wait for the finale.
How many chapters did you have planned for this amazing piece of work?Just cheating and getting away with it? That's answered in this version.
Losing the spouse? You'll have to wait for the finale.
That might be more wishful thinking on your part. lol. I dont blame you. If the dev stays true to NTR, Hutch will be destroyed. So will Viv, but she will be too broken to even realize it.He’s already suffered for 20 years married to a secret ho, whose son might not even be his. she’s already fucked his boss in front of him wherever she wants,
what more suffering can he get? divorce, yes please and since she committed adultery right in front of him, good luck winning that trial.
I’m pretty sure her son would disown her too, and once Christian fucks her in the ass, he’ll be done with her too and we know how jealous that bitch can get.
I do not see a happy ending for that ho
Yeah she broke fairly quickly. And her logic is so twisted. Its been twisted from the beginning. I dont think Hutch is a cuck. He has visibly been in pain. not once has he expressed pleasure. it would make sense that chapter 3 will focus more on how Viv accepts being owned to the point that she will express resentment toward Hutch as a projection. Hell, she might even reveal to the entire office that she was originally Hutch' wife. I would love for hutch to take revenge and succeed. . . but "Hutch isnt an idea man."Just finished chapter 2. I really did not expect Vivian to turn that quickly? Her transformation and yielding to her lust and passions seemed to get fast forwarded for the sake of the story. I wish she kept that dread and doom in her about divorce instead of this Mistress path she now seems to be on.
As for Christian? My hope for him to be that Kaiser Soze looks dimmer and dimmer, like really his suffering thru this is pointless at this end. There is no mystery involved. He knows what she is doing and does not have to have doubts about it. So what is he really concluding in himself? Being a Cuckold? or ..Revenge.
If you all remember the movie Flawless! That is what I would like to see in this from Hutch.
I admit , I am more the cheating path and consequences type person . not so much NTR and being a cuckold , I mean that is good for some? but I'd rather be the person dishing it out than taken it! but to eaches own.. right.
The other characters like the son should also get involved. I mean at this point I would not be surprised by some Taboo Incest
like in the movie if the mothers desires really get out there and degraded. Not too far of a reach.
The Dev can do so much with this story line! Its GREAT . Really looking forward to Chapter 3 and what they have instore for us.
I sincerely hope so. But I doubt it.vivian is going to lose everthing not hutch
Its NTR. The bad guy ALWAYS wins.I have a feeling it will be Christian... the bad guy can't win. Maybe nobody will.
I'm quite impressed with this initial effort. I found the sex scenes to be arousing, and the story to be engaging. This is despite the fact that I'm generally not a fan of NTR, as it tends to take away from the immersiveness of the experience for me. For example, in this case I cannot picture myself being in the role of the pushover husband or the manipulative boss.
Unlike some others, I thought that the wife was incredibly hot: middle aged with attractive facial features, nice hairstyle, gloriously full figure, and a few well-placed tattoos and piercings...an altogether beautiful imaginary woman. I also like that she is portrayed as well-intentioned, well-mannered, and loyal. It adds to the emotion surrounding the situation.
Though the wife's admission of finding sex with the boss to be pleasurable at times could be seen as corruption, I like that she desires to maintain her core sense of self as a loving wife and mother. She's not sleazy and values pleasing her husband ahead of herself. So there's hope that she will not be truly corrupted. That's one reason why I'd be pissed if the story ends up involving her doing something with another man that she was not willing to do with her husband, such as anal sex.
I am curious about if anything will happen between the husband and Addison from work. She obviously has a soft spot for him, and although I could never be that guy, I can't help but feel sorry for him. And his wife even suggested that maybe he should have sex with another woman to "balance things out" (in part to assuage her feelings of guilt).
In closing, I must say that I agree with the review from AssassinWolf67: "Great start. Outstanding visuals, and the story is engaging. I hope this doesn't follow the usual formula, and I'm crossing my fingers that there's a twist by the end that has the MC's boss put in his place, with the MC and his wife behind his downfall....Either way, a very well done KN."
I would love to see this sort of story ending, to see the boss get what he deserves. Regardless, I would be satisfied enough if the love between the husband and wife wins out in the end, with their marriage still standing strong (and maybe even in some way strengthened by the experience, having endured together and increased in understanding).
She's still conflicted, which make the speedy downfall less credible from my POV. She isn't fighting for her marriage besides some briefs and hard to believe tantrums with Christian (after having fuck- post-nut clarity, maybe?- ), nor accepting fully her mistress or sexual rediscover path.I wish she kept that dread and doom in her about divorce instead of this Mistress path she now seems to be on.
Are you talking about Christian or Hutch?He knows what she is doing and does not have to have doubts about it. So what is he really concluding in himself? Being a Cuckold? or ..Revenge.
IIRC the dev ruled out this option. Not so with the the twins friends.I would not be surprised by some Taboo Incest
She already did, while talking with Sunshine at the bar she's mad "he´s not fighting". I agree with you, it's projection from her part.she will express resentment toward Hutch as a projection.
Hutch working for Christian and he has access to secret company internal information, he will sell the information and he'll drive Christian's company into bankruptcy and then run off with Addison. Vivian will probably end up without both men and is forced to prostitute herself. That would also be a plausible scenario.Just found this today, watched both chapters and I have some thoughts as I've been reading through the comments. I think most agree that Hutch is not happy and this will not become his fetish. J think the comments that he is a weak are kinda true, but not really.i think what people are missing is why Hutch accepted this, in my opinion. It wasn't to save his job, not because he was surrendering to an alpha male. it was to keep his wife. He loves her and if he can excuse her behavior he doesn't have to really face it. Christian wasn't waiting for him at the end of Chapter 1 out of the goodness of his heart. He's an evil fuck. No he knew Hutch was close to leaving his wife that day, so he reminded Hutch that she loved him and did it for him, so he'd stay. Because if he left Vivian, Christian wasn't getting another crack at her. But now Hutch stayed and gave the okay, which Vivian now thinks excuses her actions with "I did it for him and he might secretly like it". No he did it to let him hide behind the possible lie "She did it for him", because the moment he faces the truth that she betrayed him he's out and it really appears it wasn't for him, it was for Magic Dick.
I say Lie because after Chapter 2 it really feels like. Vivian has fallen rather quickly and was way more keyed to cheat and just needed an excuse. I kinda wish it had shown that her and Hutch hadn't been intimate for ahile(I don't think I missed it). If anything it was implied that they had an active sex life, which makes her getting so into the sex typical NTR slop with the bad guy having magic dick. Okay so it was one whole night, and she did it to save Hutch, but C'MON after one day of guilt she's on his dick again? I feel like this may very well end with her losing everything. I agree that Christina doesn't give a fuck about her, it's the conquest. Based off of Pics of Chapter 3, I'm guessing Christian is going to push Hutch a bit too much and he's probably not going to take it. Probably keeping Vivian overnight after the party humiliation. And Vivian breaking her promise is what will cause him to accept their marriage is over.
I saw it mentioned SC wanted a Soprano ending, I hope not, that implies no closure and I fking hate those endings. If it's Soprano I'm predicting shit's gone south. Vivian is finally done with Christian and is waiting for Hutch, but in an earlier scene Addison finally told Hutch she liked him and asked him to leave with her. Theyr'e both in separate rooms with similar doors waiting for Hutch and the last scene his him walking up to a door...but which one? I say Hutch because at this point if it's Vivian she's walking through Christian's door. I'm curious to see what Christian is going to do to even make her think about dropping him, it really feels like she's in love with him.
Side note - My perfect ending would be Christian in a pool of blood because of Hutch in some way, Vivian waiting at home for Hutch, and Hutch driving down the highway with Addison. Anyway played it earlier today and now several hours later I'm still fuking thinking about it.
This scenario is completely impossible, given that stealing confidential data from a company that deals in trading and signing contracts with major clients would result in Hutch being fired. This would leave her husband with nothing, and he would also be arrested and unable to work for any other company. In fact, Vivian had already asked Hutch to do this before she met Christian.Hutch working for Christian and he has access to secret company internal information,
the reason he was fired is precisely because he isn't closing enough deals, so the boss can fire him...
If Hutch does that, he'll go straight to prison, and Addison is Christian's niece... do you believe she would remain loyal to him, given that the company belongs to her family and that one day it will be hers?he will sell the information and he'll drive Christian's company into bankruptcy and then run off with Addison.
It is an ending we've seen a thousand times before... I don't think SCS would ever do such a banal ending.Vivian will probably end up without both men and is forced to prostitute herself.
Sorry but I can't agree with you. That is not plausible scenario...That would also be a plausible scenario.
Yes, I think the ending will divide the remaining viewers. But I hope with each scene, from simple text exchange to raunchy sex, the viewer understands why it is happening based on the character's personality. A one paragraph discription of MHB might make someone beleive it's just another cookie cutter NTR story, but I believe with each release you will say to yourself "Damn! I didn't see that coming" but also see that it fits the story. And that includes the ending.
In what way is a loser like Hutch running off with a woman half his age after sabotaging his boss's company a plausible scenario? He was too much of a pussy to stop his wife from cheating on him and you expect him to be a mastermind? He'd try to do it and five minutes into it he'd talk himself out of it because he's too much of a weak, pathetic coward to do anything. At any point on the first night he could have stopped what was happening and instead he curled up into a ball and cried about it, but he's gonna get revenge and get the girl? Nah, that would be absolutely ridiculous.Hutch working for Christian and he has access to secret company internal information, he will sell the information and he'll drive Christian's company into bankruptcy and then run off with Addison. Vivian will probably end up without both men and is forced to prostitute herself. That would also be a plausible scenario.
You realise these are two different things, right? Not arguing one way or the other about Hutch, but just in general terms, being in total shock and not stopping something from happening doesn't mean you're incapable of doing something completely different and unrelated on a completely different day... Specifically here, once the initial shock has passed, it would be perfectly reasonable for a seemingly quiet man to plot revenge. It's not something that he would only be able to do if he had stood his ground at the time he discovered his wife with someone else.In what way is a loser like Hutch running off with a woman half his age after sabotaging his boss's company a plausible scenario? He was too much of a pussy to stop his wife from cheating on him and you expect him to be a mastermind? He'd try to do it and five minutes into it he'd talk himself out of it because he's too much of a weak, pathetic coward to do anything. At any point on the first night he could have stopped what was happening and instead he curled up into a ball and cried about it, but he's gonna get revenge and get the girl? Nah, that would be absolutely ridiculous.
No, I don't realize those are two different things because they're not two different things. Hutch has been given multiple exit ramps from this nonsense and he's pussied out every time. He's pathologically incapable of standing up for himself, he quite literally let Christian talk him into agreeing to be a cuck.You realise these are two different things, right? Not arguing one way or the other about Hutch, but just in general terms, being in total shock and not stopping something from happening doesn't mean you're incapable of doing something completely different and unrelated on a completely different day... Specifically here, once the initial shock has passed, it would be perfectly reasonable for a seemingly quiet man to plot revenge. It's not something that he would only be able to do if he had stood his ground at the time he discovered his wife with someone else.
You've basically said that if a "mastermind" finds his wife cheating on him he would always stop it - I'd say those are the ones more likely to stop and think and plot, rather than just diving in without a thought.
Maybe he won't get the girl, but the girl could want him, because she sees in him a good guy. Even more if she finds out that Vivian is his wife, given how she looked down on her the day she visited the office. Maybe she will want to "save" this "good man" from this whore. If it's the case, he will be again the passive one in the supposed couple because it look like Addison is the type who does not hold back, even if she appears calm.In what way is a loser like Hutch running off with a woman half his age after sabotaging his boss's company a plausible scenario? He was too much of a pussy to stop his wife from cheating on him and you expect him to be a mastermind? He'd try to do it and five minutes into it he'd talk himself out of it because he's too much of a weak, pathetic coward to do anything. At any point on the first night he could have stopped what was happening and instead he curled up into a ball and cried about it, but he's gonna get revenge and get the girl? Nah, that would be absolutely ridiculous.
I agree, but thing is, if he had decided to leave or divorce, you will not have this story.Hutch has been given multiple exit ramps from this nonsense and he's pussied out every time. He's pathologically incapable of standing up for himself,
People do things in different ways. Not standing up to Christian face to face does not mean Hutch can't stand up to him behind his back. They are not the same thing at all.No, I don't realize those are two different things because they're not two different things. Hutch has been given multiple exit ramps from this nonsense and he's pussied out every time. He's pathologically incapable of standing up for himself, he quite literally let Christian talk him into agreeing to be a cuck.
Except he has repeatedly done nothing about it. This isn’t one time thing. He knew she was going to get screwed by the client at the hotel when she yells at him for coming in and waiting in the lobby or when boss fucks her in the bathroom.You realise these are two different things, right? Not arguing one way or the other about Hutch, but just in general terms, being in total shock and not stopping something from happening doesn't mean you're incapable of doing something completely different and unrelated on a completely different day... Specifically here, once the initial shock has passed, it would be perfectly reasonable for a seemingly quiet man to plot revenge. It's not something that he would only be able to do if he had stood his ground at the time he discovered his wife with someone else.
You've basically said that if a "mastermind" finds his wife cheating on him he would always stop it - I'd say those are the ones more likely to stop and think and plot, rather than just diving in without a thought.
Again that's looking at two different things though. You're talking about getting confrontational, and maybe that's not the type of person Hutch is, even allowing for shock being the reason for not acting in the first instance. We haven't seen much of Hutch since things happened, so until the next update, we don't really know his state of mind (well, hopefully we will know it in the next update).Except he has repeatedly done nothing about it. This isn’t one time thing. He knew she was going to get screwed by the client at the hotel when she yells at him for coming in and waiting in the lobby or when boss fucks her in the bathroom.
then she fucks his boss right in there driveway and half out of the car on the front lawn while he watches from the window and so all the neighbors can see and hear the whore of the block is home. Maybe he should become her pimp and start selling her services, since he doesn’t do a damn thing about stopping her