VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.2] [SC Stories]

[TonyMurray]

Who are these “we” people? Do you take this decision by talking with SC stories?

So, by arguing with those you call “ we ” , are you setting yourself up as the sole possessor of the truth?
I don't believe you're talking about a discussion you had with SC stories, and even if you were, I don't think he told you everything...
while I only take inspiration from what is written in the story without cheating, as you seem to do with your hatred towards my interpretations of the script.
(you call them "fabrications" )
At this point, you are the one who wants to divide the people who love this story... you even say that my interpretation is:"you are fabricating, you are giving details that simply do not exist in the game."
Everithing i write takes insperation from the script in CH1 and 2...i don't use your "we" discussion

I think you are just full of yourselves...
You think Vivian is a cheap whore like all NTR hater

But do you know how much commission Hutch earns when he sells the shares traded by Hutch's company...
Do you know how trading companies work?
I think and I'm sure that when SC says...

We will see soon in the next chapters if my interpretation of the SC stories screenplay is like the one you with your
"we-friends" will be near as my "fabrication" that are just my interpretation of what it is written in the game...

I don't know if today i will have the time to post again but I will mention your nickname so that you get the notification.
with the respect I always give to those who read me with such interest, as you always do.

Thanks

As you can't back up the things you claim to have been said in the game, I see you've moved on to nonsensical attacks instead. Bravo.

I have no idea what you are trying to say in this post, because you are all over the place. I said "we've discussed this in quite a bit of detail in this thread" which I thought was quite obvious, but apparently I was wrong - it means it has been discussed in this thread by people who post here, which includes me, and therefore becomes "we have discussed". It doesn't mean "I have individually discussed this with the dev of the game", and I don't think anyone other than you would have taken it that way.

You even say yourself here "Everithing i write takes insperation from the script in CH1 and 2" - so you agree that some stuff you say doesn't appear in the script, it's just inspired by it, that is at least some progress from your previous claim.

You think I'm full of myself? That's fair, that's completely your prerogative. I think you're full of yourself, so we're even there. No idea why you suddenly attack with "You think Vivian is a cheap whore like all NTR hater" though. That one doesn't even deserve a response, it is so random - actually, is it just another case of you making something up to suit your argument? Except I don't know what the argument is there...

Once again, prove to me that I am wrong. Prove to me that you are not making things up, by showing me where in the script it says Hutch was asking for too much commission, that Christian warned him about this, that it's why he lost clients, and that Christian told Vivian this. Tell me where in the script it says Hutch has never taken a day off or gone home for lunch in six years working for Christian. Prove to me that you didn't make up those assertions, and I will retract my claim that you fabricate things to back up your arguments.

 

[88stanford88]

Once again, prove to me that I am wrong. Prove to me that you are not making things up, by showing me where in the script it says Hutch was asking for too much commission,

This is my interpretation of the first scene.... why you think I'm fabricating?
it is clear to me...

Hutch: "GSA?Oh shit!"
Just this exclamation, accompanied by a guilty expression, makes us realize that Hutch knows exactly what happened and that... we will soon find out.

Christian "Oh shit indeed"

And here we begin to understand that the boss had warned him about what the GSA was doing. This is my interpretation: he had told him to lower his commissions so that the GSA would fail in its attempt to steal his clients.

Hutch: "I thought I had..."
At this point, we know that Hutch DID NOT do something his boss had told him to do... Christian had warned him... in my opinion, he had asked him to lower his commissions, but Hutch only thought about lowering them, but then... he also thought that he needed the money... I'm not saying he needed it for illegal things... he has a lot of debts, with the mortgage and school fees for his children and the payments for the car he gave to Vivian...
In any case, the loss of the two clients is entirely Hutch's fault, since his boss had warned him before the clients were stolen from him.

Could it also be that Chris agreed with the GSA to have an excuse to fire him? Nah, I don't think so.
However, there is a connection between the first scene of chapter 1 and the last scene of chapter 2 that further reinforces Hutch's attachment to money, which I believe is sacrosanct. A man should always want to earn more, and if he does so legally, there is nothing to object to...
But there could be a third hypothesis... and this one is fabricated and has no basis...
Hutch could have made a deal with the GSA to get even more money... but that's a truly impossible hypothesis.


Sorry for not quoting your entire post, I like to stick to the point...
so as not to make my post too long and boring, and since I've found the time... in my next post I'll write my interpretation of the fact that Hutch also has something to hide... posting the last scene of CH2... When Vivian receives the check for the information she gave to her husband's boss.

 

[packard1928]

I do not read in that He lost the accounts for commission... Money... There are many reasons a company leaves a contract. Money, Service, Delivery and others. I think ( My opinion ) The Boss was messing with someone in both companies and got caught... so they left. Yes, Just my though.. it has to be proven. But, Not a thought to far off base. Maybe that goes back to the Blonde in Bed... just saying ???

 

[neronwtf]

I take it that what you expect is what you hope for, otherwise you would try to visualize something else. Like me, I don't want bad things for Wife, so I try to suggest ways that might not happen

Unlike you, I'm not basing my comment in what I hope or what I want. As I already told you, I would have wanted the characters to be less cliché. They're not. I provided different examples of the evolution of Vivian character in the way the dev choose to represent it in the game and I put it together with what he said about character and story development, not what I want or feel about them. NTR games have a more or less similar structure, and so far this game is not any different in this sense. And if the dev said it will get darker, that's expected in a ntr game.

And you assume that means only for Wife. Since SC did not say, his statement could equally apply to all 3 mc's.

Again, where I said the contrary? From what we have seen so far and what we can gather from the teasers, most probably Hutch will suffer as well. As for Christian, it seems things are going well for him, but maybe it can change.

I don't think that is what happened at all.

You're focusing in the final scene, I was talking about the rape scene,the one at the hotel and the reenactment in the garden.

Not once do I see that.

Oh, boy! I invite you to play again every post sex scenes parts and I want to believe that you will see she's not always cuddly and happy after fucking with him. In fact, in the same scene you brought up, are you gonna tell me that all the interaction was calmed and relaxed? Because I remember she was a little bit upset and shouting at him. Their relation is not based in making love, they're fucking and exerting dominance, specially from Christian's POV.

 

[TonyMurray]

This is my interpretation of the first scene.... why you think I'm fabricating?
it is clear to me...Hutch: "GSA?Oh shit!"
Just this exclamation, accompanied by a guilty expression, makes us realize that Hutch knows exactly what happened and that... we will soon find out.
Christian "Oh shit indeed"

And here we begin to understand that the boss had warned him about what the GSA was doing. This is my interpretation: he had told him to lower his commissions so that the GSA would fail in its attempt to steal his clients.

Hutch: "I thought I had..."
At this point, we know that Hutch DID NOT do something his boss had told him to do... Christian had warned him... in my opinion, he had asked him to lower his commissions, but Hutch only thought about lowering them, but then... he also thought that he needed the money... I'm not saying he needed it for illegal things... he has a lot of debts, with the mortgage and school fees for his children and the payments for the car he gave to Vivian...
In any case, the loss of the two clients is entirely Hutch's fault, since his boss had warned him before the clients were stolen from him.

Could it also be that Chris agreed with the GSA to have an excuse to fire him? Nah, I don't think so.
However, there is a connection between the first scene of chapter 1 and the last scene of chapter 2 that further reinforces Hutch's attachment to money, which I believe is sacrosanct. A man should always want to earn more, and if he does so legally, there is nothing to object to...
But there could be a third hypothesis... and this one is fabricated and has no basis...
Hutch could have made a deal with the GSA to get even more money... but that's a truly impossible hypothesis.


Sorry for not quoting your entire post, I like to stick to the point...
so as not to make my post too long and boring, and since I've found the time... in my next post I'll write my interpretation of the fact that Hutch also has something to hide... posting the last scene of CH2... When Vivian receives the check for the information she gave to her husband's boss.

Sorry, I thought you were proving that Christian said Hutch was asking for too much commission. All you have done is repost the same scenes we've all seen many times over. We know that Hutch lost clients, the point is that you said it was because he was asking for too much commission - that is the fabrication. At least now you are backtracking and saying that it is "your interpretation", the thing is though, your interpretation is just that - your interpretation. Not fact, which is what you were previously presenting it as. Everything you mention here about Hutch lowering prices is made up. It's your opinion, as you say, but it is not represented in the game, which is why you can't provide the screenshots to verify it.

The fact is: it's not important why the accounts were lost, and chances are we will never learn more about it. It's just a device to give us the opening conflict of the game, with Hutch fearing for his job as a result, and Vivian "doing the wrong thing for the right reason" as a further consequence.

 

[88stanford88]

TonyMurray
This post is closely related to Vivian's husband's “non-dismissal” ) my previous post https://f95zone.to/threads/my-husbands-boss-ch-2-sc-stories.241893/post-18442683 ) and is another thing that confirms the fact that stock traders always need to make more money because the benchmark among colleagues is that the best accountant is the one who has the best clients, who are also the ones who earn the most...
I believe that Hutch does not have a fixed salary... he earns based on the number of clients he has and for whom he is solely responsible.

It is very likely that the check Vivian is holding is for more than a month's salary or more than a teacher's salary... it's a shame that SC blurred the amount on that check, but perhaps we will find out in the future.

Spoiler: I will add some intersting dialogue at the end of CH2 bc CH3 willstart after this scene with Viv and Chris

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As you can see here, Vivian explicitly tells Chris that he has won her... this means that she understands her role but wants to be the one to manage her relationship with Hutch.

As you can see here, Vivian explicitly tells Chris that he has won... this means that she understands her role but wants to be the one to manage her relationship with Hutch.
Money is always important in these stories, especially if there are lots of zeros in the figure...
I think there will be many surprises, and I also think Hutch isn't so honest... I'm sure he has some skeletons in his closet too... 22 years of marriage is a long time and can include stories that are not always legally acceptable.

 

[88stanford88]

Sorry, I thought you were proving that Christian said Hutch was asking for too much commission.

This is my interpretation of that scene but is connected with the second post i posted for you
there are 32 pics inside... as you know is the limitation of this forum... NO MORE THAN 32 PICS FOR MY ACCOUNT TYPE

Money is always what drives stories about reality and competition within companies that deal with business...
You are free to give your interpretations... we'll see who comes closest.
Best regards

 

[TonyMurray]

TonyMurray
This post is closely related to Vivian's husband's “non-dismissal” ) my previous post https://f95zone.to/threads/my-husbands-boss-ch-2-sc-stories.241893/post-18442683 ) and is another thing that confirms the fact that stock traders always need to make more money because the benchmark among colleagues is that the best accountant is the one who has the best clients, who are also the ones who earn the most...
I believe that Hutch does not have a fixed salary... he earns based on the number of clients he has and for whom he is solely responsible.

It is very likely that the check Vivian is holding is for more than a month's salary or more than a teacher's salary... it's a shame that SC blurred the amount on that check, but perhaps we will find out in the future.

Spoiler: I will add some intersting dialogue at the end of CH2 bc CH3 willstart after this scene with Viv and Chris

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As you can see here, Vivian explicitly tells Chris that he has won her... this means that she understands her role but wants to be the one to manage her relationship with Hutch.

As you can see here, Vivian explicitly tells Chris that he has won... this means that she understands her role but wants to be the one to manage her relationship with Hutch.
Money is always important in these stories, especially if there are lots of zeros in the figure...
I think there will be many surprises, and I also think Hutch isn't so honest... I'm sure he has some skeletons in his closet too... 22 years of marriage is a long time and can include stories that are not always legally acceptable.

Sorry, I'm confused. Nothing in your post backs up your previous comments. I'm also confused as to what you think Hutch does. Is he a stockbroker/trader? An accountant? Are either of those backed up by content in the game? I must be playing a different game to you if so, because I've not seen it. I also notice your usual tactic of trying to obfuscate by moving on to other topics (here, the whole part involving Vivian, basically), so I think we should probably leave it there.

You've proven by omission that you can't verify your previous claims, and therefore I reiterate that you fabricate information to back up whatever point you're trying to make. I gave you two recent examples (one of which you ignored completely), and you failed to back up either of them. Therefore, I'll leave it now, and just ask that you stop presenting your "inspiration from the game" as what actually happened, especially under the guise of "helping new people to enjoy the game."

 

[88stanford88]

All you have done is repost the same scenes we've all seen many times over.

NO.. I posted the scene where Hutch admits that he didn't do what his boss warned him about. In fact, he says... Hutch: "I thought I had..."

Christian had warned him that it was customary for the GSA to steal customers... and to steal a customer, it is well known that you have to offer better commissions... Hutch thought he had done so... but he didn't for some personal reason

 

[neronwtf]

Sorry, I'm confused. Nothing in your post backs up your previous comments. I'm also confused as to what you think Hutch does. Is he a stockbroker/trader? An accountant? Are either of those backed up by content in the game? I must be playing a different game to you if so, because I've not seen it. I also notice your usual tactic of trying to obfuscate by moving on to other topics (here, the whole part involving Vivian, basically), so I think we should probably leave it there.

You've proven by omission that you can't verify your previous claims, and therefore I reiterate that you fabricate information to back up whatever point you're trying to make. I gave you two recent examples (one of which you ignored completely), and you failed to back up either of them. Therefore, I'll leave it now, and just ask that you stop presenting your "inspiration from the game" as what actually happened, especially under the guise of "helping new people to enjoy the game."

Why are you wasting your time with an user that clearly doesn't want to engage in a dialogue, but impose his POV, even if he has not any proof to endorse it as your already shown? Plus, you already know he's like this.

 

[TonyMurray]

NO.. I posted the scene where Hutch admits that he didn't do what his boss warned him about. In fact, he says... Hutch: "I thought I had..."

Christian had warned him that it was customary for the GSA to steal customers... and to steal a customer, it is well known that you have to offer better commissions... Hutch thought he had done so... but he didn't for some personal reason

No, what you did was post something and tell us that it says something it doesn't. You have made up a reason for what happened and are trying to convince us that it is actually what happened. Hutch thought he had shored up his clients. He thought he had contacted them and/or thought they were happy. The only bit where he thought he had offered them lower rates is in your head. It is not well known that you have to offer better commissions to steal a client from another company, because although money is a big factor, it is not the only factor (see Packard's comment a few posts back, for instance).

 

[packard1928]

Currently we do not know what Christians company provides. I actually think they are a supplier of something. There is only one other company that does what they do.... and they stole the accounts. Brokers can sit anywhere ... This is why I do not think it is about money... I think it is something else... As I state above. But Hutch said he can not move and do what he does...there is only the 2 companies...

 

[noahsombrero]

calmed and relaxed? Because I remember she was a little bit upset and shouting at him. Their relation is not based in making love, they're fucking and exerting dominance, specially from Christian's POV.

It seems you missed that lover's cuddle after the final sex scene at the end of pt 2. Mostly we don't see the post sex scenes, except for the one where she and Boss come out of the bedroom in the morning after their all nighter and she does not seem at all perturbed, only concerned that Husband doesn't know. We also have that pic where Boss and Wife come out of the sex room at the party to meet Husband at the door and she is holding Boss's hand. Nope, I don't see anger.

 

[TonyMurray]

Why are you wasting your time with an user that clearly doesn't want to engage in a dialogue, but impose his POV, even if he has not any proof to endorse it as your already shown? Plus, you already know he's like this.

I know, it just annoys me when he says something that is inaccurate, but presents it as accurate. He thinks drowning people in screenshots proves he is right, but all it actually does is give people achy fingers from having to scroll further to get to the point he's failing to make.

 

[packard1928]

It seems you missed that lover's cuddle after the final sex scene at the end of pt 3. Mostly we don't see the post sex scenes, except for the one where she and Boss come out of the bedroom in the morning after their all nighter and she does not seem at all perturbed, only concerned that Husband doesn't know. We also have that pic where Boss and Wife come out of the sex room at the party to meet Husband at the door and she is holding Boss's hand. Nope, I don't see anger.

yep... but in the next preview... she is leaning into Hutch with a perplexed look on her face as the boss is walking away....

 

[neronwtf]

I know, it just annoys me when he says something that is inaccurate, but presents it as accurate. He thinks drowning people in screenshots proves he is right, but all it actually does is give people achy fingers from having to scroll further to get to the point he's failing to make.

Thing is, even if you're respectful with him, he will still try to avoid to answer when pointed out his contradiction or lack of proof. He will divert, change topic, most probably with another lie/inaccuracy and bring you to his game. It will be a vicious circle. There isn't anything positive to take with users like him.

 

[88stanford88]

Sorry, I'm confused. Nothing in your post backs up your previous comments. I'm also confused as to what you think Hutch does. Is he a stockbroker/trader? An accountant? Are either of those backed up by content in the game? I must be playing a different game to you if so, because I've not seen it. I also notice your usual tactic of trying to obfuscate by moving on to other topics (here, the whole part involving Vivian, basically), so I think we should probably leave it there.

You've proven by omission that you can't verify your previous claims, and therefore I reiterate that you fabricate information to back up whatever point you're trying to make. I gave you two recent examples (one of which you ignored completely), and you failed to back up either of them. Therefore, I'll leave it now, and just ask that you stop presenting your "inspiration from the game" as what actually happened, especially under the guise of "helping new people to enjoy the game."

I'm sorry if you are not capable to understand my reasoning, but everything I write is based on the chapters already published...
Money is the reason for everything, but perhaps if I describe the scene with Vivian in the hotel with Mr. Rees, you'll understand what kind of figures I'm talking about.

There is no rape in this scene... she is free to leave without closing the contract
I'll spoiler the rest if you are interested

Spoiler: sex scene at the Hotel for clusing a very rich 8 million dollars contract

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Meanwhile Hutxh is waiting but after his wife has colesed a contract for one of Hutch client

Vivian treats him like shit because she realizes that Hutch knew Mr. Rees well, and rightly gets pissed off and says to him... “What the fuck are you doing here? I told you to wait in the car.”

Now, if you can't connect the dots between the first day with Hutch losing two important clients... saving his job thanks to his wife... the fact that Mr. Rees was another client Hutch could have lost... with the fact that thanks to Christian, Hutch earned more than he lost with the clients stolen by the GSA... it's certainly not my fault...
The story is very convoluted and it's difficult to find the right connections, but when there's a lot of money involved, it's easy to draw a line.
If Vivian hadn't gone to Chris to save her husband's job, Hutch would now be unemployed and living off Vivian's teaching salary.

This is my interpretation

Thanks to be interested in my opinions

 

[88stanford88]

No, what you did was post something and tell us that it says something it doesn't. You have made up a reason for what happened and are trying to convince us that it is actually what happened. Hutch thought he had shored up his clients. He thought he had contacted them and/or thought they were happy. The only bit where he thought he had offered them lower rates is in your head. It is not well known that you have to offer better commissions to steal a client from another company, because although money is a big factor, it is not the only factor (see Packard's comment a few posts back, for instance).

I do not agree with your lecture...

this is the script;
b "Oh shit, indeed."
b "I warned you they were expanding by stealing other people's clients. I warned you to shore up your relationships."

In this sentence from Chris, I read that he asks him to strengthen his relationships with customers, and on that day he didn't know that Hutch was married to Vivian... so the only way to strengthen the relationship was to invite them for a drink and give them a discount... or offer them a prostitute, which he obviously has to pay for if he wants to keep his customers...
Hutch had been warned... but the result was that he lost two of his important clients on the same day.
So he lost also the commissions he was hoping for... in fact, he comes home devastated when he hears his wife talking about the car breaking down and paying taxes for their son's school.

I'm sorry for you but this is my interpretation!

If you are not able to see the connection in the scenes i posted is just your fault

Money is always the big reason for doing something that you don't like to do ...in the real life everything is always related to money!!.. THIS IS A REALISTIC WRITTEN PLOT!!

Cheers

 

[oshikuru]

This KN is strictly related to the realism of the story plot.

There are many games for those who love hot scenes without a plot that connects the reasons why the female protagonist sleeps with every man she meets...
I could recommend hundreds of titles focused on sex...
but here we are talking about a story writer... I recommend reading the author's posts.

I only replied to you to avoid giving you false hope...
If you like the story, I recommend you look for the posts that SC Stories (you can easily find all of SC's posts using the search function at the top right of the page) has chosen to share with those of us who love stories with deep, realistic developments within the relationships between husband and wife (or between partners).

I would advise you to read carefully what the author has written in this paragraph... It will never be an action plot like Fast and Furious, with nonstop sex and parties...
The story is written to remain as close as possible to reality, which includes logical motivations even for creating a sex scene.

Let's not get carried away here. The story is hardly realistic. But keeping that aside. This is a AVN, not a AN. Without visuals to further immerse yourself in, this story wouldn't get much attention. I've seen a lot of similar ones on sites like literotica that get discarded, though loving wives section is a hard one to break into. Anyway, because this one does have great visuals it's so good. Sometimes they say more than words. Like for example when Vivian and Christian are naked in the kitchen she grabs his hand and drags him back to his bedroom. She didn't have to do that she could have just sneaked back quickly and let Christian do whatever he wanted to do. But to me this says that she was also horny and wanted to be fucked by him some more.

 

[lolo540]

I'm sorry if you are not capable to understand my reasoning, but everything I write is based on the chapters already published...
Money is the reason for everything, but perhaps if I describe the scene with Vivian in the hotel with Mr. Rees, you'll understand what kind of figures I'm talking about. View attachment 5369497
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There is no rape in this scene... she is free to leave without closing the contract
I'll spoiler the rest if you are interested

Spoiler: sex scene at the Hotel for clusing a very rich 8 million dollars contract

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Meanwhile Hutxh is waiting but after his wife has colesed a contract for one of Hutch client
Vivian treats him like shit because she realizes that Hutch knew Mr. Rees well, and rightly gets pissed off and says to him... “What the fuck are you doing here? I told you to wait in the car.”

Now, if you can't connect the dots between the first day with Hutch losing two important clients... saving his job thanks to his wife... the fact that Mr. Rees was another client Hutch could have lost... with the fact that thanks to Christian, Hutch earned more than he lost with the clients stolen by the GSA... it's certainly not my fault...
The story is very convoluted and it's difficult to find the right connections, but when there's a lot of money involved, it's easy to draw a line.
If Vivian hadn't gone to Chris to save her husband's job, Hutch would now be unemployed and living off Vivian's teaching salary.

This is my interpretation

Thanks to be interested in my opinions

You live in your own parallel universe. It would be good to start your sentences with “I think” or “I believe.”

Everything is extrapolation. Like Tony, I don't see what you think is strictly written in the game. It's just an interpretation.