VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[Justaphase]

Oh good. Thanks for clearing that up. I'm still listing My Husband's Boss as a favorite and like I said
recommending it, I want to see it progress and get supported. It's just that one part that rattles me haha
Mistakes get made in design and execution, I know this. It just has to be said.

I actually liked how quickly she succumed (literally) to the bosses seduction, it was a shock but a good one IMO. I'm glad that it didn't get dragged out forever as it does in so many games like this.

No need to be sorry. Hubby is so fucking pathetic and i also have 0 sympathy for him. He is like: Boss fucking my wife? Why not? i don't give a shit, im okay with that! He do completely nothing about it This shit is surreal

Would the game even work though if the husband was some type of alpha or even a normal guy who would never allow his wife to sleep with the boss in the same bed while he slept on the couch? I don't think it would. He needs to be some weak beta cuck or the story doesn't work IMO.

 

[MixQQ]

Would the game even work though if the husband was some type of alpha who would never allow his wife to sleep with the boss in the same bed while he slept on the couch? I don't think it would. He needs to be some weak beta cuck or the story doesn't work IMO.

Yea, but there is 0 reaction from him. He is not angry, furious, totally nothing - like she doesn't mean anything for him. He is just ok with that and went into full depression/devastated mode. I played many games here but this guy is really on another level

 

[Justaphase]

Yea, but there is 0 reaction from him. He is not angry, furious, totally nothing - like she doesn't mean anything for him. He is just ok with that and went into full depression/devastated mode. I played many games here but this guy is really on another level

The reaction was stunned silence, he doesn't know what to do. The shock of his wife cheating so quickly literally hits him like a truck. But at the same time, he can't deny how much his wife enjoys it, from what he hears and later on sees with his own eyes.
He's likely never seen his wife like this, he quickly accepts that he can't satisfy his wife the same way.
We can all agree that in "real life" this would result in separation and divorce but this is an NTR game, so let's just go with it.
Anyway the guy chose to marry a girl with a tramp stamp so it's on him really.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

This is what the dev wrote about the "missing" build up scene. We will get to see what happened in time apparently.
Also I agree with what you wrote, personally I'm glad that it ended the way that it did with the husband accepting that he can't satisfy his wife in the way that Christian does. She also likes Christian way more than she lets on, she finds his arrogance attractive, even though she won't admit it.

Problem is regardless of what was said out of sight, in my mind it doesn't justify the pacing. He could be the smoothest rake in the west and it would still be jarring to go from 'relucant wife who recoiled at a kiss earlier that day' to 'full on extramarital quickie fuck in the backyard'. Everything prior to that - while stretching the limits of believability, could be somewhat justifed. Like I said in my prior comment, this segue killed so much of the build up work.

The sex scenes afterwards were enoyable enough as vanilla avn sex scenes, but the narrative thrill was gone after that point.

 

[MixQQ]

We can all agree that in "real life" this would result in separation and divorce but this is an NTR game, so let's just go with it.
Anyway the guy chose to marry a girl with a tramp stamp so it's on him really.

separation, divorce. But you forgot one important thing - someone would end in hospital, that's for sure. Depends which guy has better fighting skills

 

[Justaphase]

Problem is regardless of what was said out of sight, in my mind it doesn't justify the pacing. He could be the smoothest rake in the west and it would still be jarring to go from 'relucant wife who recoiled at a kiss earlier that day' to 'full on extramarital quickie fuck in the backyard'. Everything prior to that - while stretching the limits of believability, could be somewhat justifed. Like I said in my prior comment, this segue killed so much of the build up work.

The sex scenes afterwards were enoyable enough as vanilla avn sex scenes, but the narrative thrill was gone after that point.

Do we really need multiple chapters of build up though that we so often get in NTR games? Personally I liked that it all happened quite quickly, it was refreshing.
The wife obviously likes Christian way more than she lets on and is also way more unsatisfied with the husband than she wants to admit. We see her reaction to Christian when they first meet and how much she fancies him.
I'm betting the backyard scene will end up being pure blackmail by the boss. "I'm going to fire your husband tonight, unless you let me fuck you right here."
As for the narrative thrill I think that part of that is how the corruption of the wife is going to play out. She promises the husband at the end that she will always come home to him and probably means it, but I doubt that it will happen. How far will she go from loyal and loving wife to the bosses slut?

separation, divorce. But you forgot one important thing - someone would end in hospital, that's for sure. Depends which guy has better fighting skills

Looking at the husband it would be him who would end up in the hospital. His wife fucks his boss, then his boss fucks him up. Double the losses.

 

[gymnopedies]

I just discovered this amazing thing, what a wonderful job.

 

[Dessolos]

Anyway the guy chose to marry a girl with a tramp stamp so it's on him really.

I was already gonna check this out soon but this sold me to play it as my next AVN only if Final Fantasy Rebirth on PC didn't just come out id play this over a normal video game cause I love tramp stamps

 

[Justaphase]

I was already gonna check this out soon but this sold me to play it as my next AVN only if Final Fantasy Rebirth on PC didn't just come out id play this over a normal video game cause I love tramp stamps

You should avoid this thread until you do play it as I'm giving some major spoilers here bud.

 

[Dessolos]

You should avoid this thread until you do play it as I'm giving some major spoilers here bud.

yeah tbh im not really reading much of the text just a quick glance here and there to clear my notifications haha just saw the word tramp stamp and read that sentence only. Looks like a game spoilers would suck for

 

[nino40]

To address the issue of the 'unseen' seduction of the female lead by the antagonist, it was obviously intentional to leave you wondering what happened. Why could just a devote wife succumb so quickly, so easily? Did he really just threaten his job? Is she just a slut who drops panties for any alpha male? Others are just disappointed they didn't get to see a sexy scene. There is lots of story left and these are addressed in time.

Just a little background, the entire story arc is defined and the whole script is complete save for some polish. I do not like epically long stories with a sudden weak, rushed ending that doesn't do the rest of the game justice. The ending is fantastic in my mind, will make half of you happy, will make half of you pissed off, but will surprise everyone. It's just a matter of about 20k more renders to complete so bear with me.

This is also my second game but I've yet to publish the first (called Standing Guard). It is complete except for one scene I just can't seem to make myself finish. It is much shorter(about 1.5-2hrs total if you actually read the dialog). It's also a romance (no NTR). MHB is more polished because of the learning curve on my first game(it's a lot rougher in every measure). I'll publish it some day.

I want to thank all the reviewers and the kind remarks so far.

Thank you.

I could be wrong, but I think that, IF you are young, you have at least a smattering of psychology or at least a fair amount of empathy (certainly greater than most users) and a good cultural background. The female character you have created is credible (finally), and I hope she remains so until the end. I think it is intuitive, even from the subsequent dialogues, or at least that is how I interpret it, that the sudden giving in to the boss in the backyard, planned or not, for which many are taken aback, is determined by an agreement made on keeping the job, and therefore linked to the deep love and esteem of the wife, who pines to see her beloved husband, devastated by the depression due to his failure as responsible for the family's well-being, and therefore wants to help him at any cost. Good work.

 

[Freedom9555]

Dessert comes after the meal. Flashback story telling maybe?

That would be great, to find out how she fell for the Boss and the deal they had.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Do we really need multiple chapters of build up though that we so often get in NTR games? Personally I liked that it all happened quite quickly, it was refreshing.
The wife obviously likes Christian way more than she lets on and is also way more unsatisfied with the husband than she wants to admit. We see her reaction to Christian when they first meet and how much she fancies him.
I'm betting the backyard scene will end up being pure blackmail by the boss. "I'm going to fire your husband tonight, unless you let me fuck you right here."
As for the narrative thrill I think that part of that is how the corruption of the wife is going to play out. She promises the husband at the end that she will always come home to him and probably means it, but I doubt that it will happen. How far will she go from loyal and loving wife to the bosses slut?

Looking at the husband it would be him who would end up in the hospital. His wife fucks his boss, then his boss fucks him up. Double the losses.

No, it's not about the length of buildup, but the pacing and consistency. The backyard scene wasn't an exponential function, it was a stepwise discontinuity. It would have felt different if they were making out in the office that morning, or had something else to go on other than "hey lemme talk to you for a minute".

Pardon my cynicism, but I'd wager few in this thread have been in any kind of analogous situation in the real world. I have. And while the rapid escalation can surprise even the participants, the way it went down in this story was the stuff of pure fantasy. If others don't see it as such, I guess that's good for them for their story enjoyment - but objectively the writing had pacing problems.

 

[blacktag222]

I haven't played this game, but when looking at the images of the hero's wife, I saw the corners of her mouth drooping down everywhere, which creates the impression of constant depression. Surely there is something lighter there, or is this purely a depressive drama? Maybe the images chosen coincided just by chance?

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I haven't played this game, but when looking at the images of the hero's wife, I saw the corners of her mouth drooping down everywhere, which creates the impression of constant depression. Surely there is something lighter there, or is this purely a depressive drama? Maybe the images chosen coincided just by chance?

No, your gut perception is accurate.

 

[Justaphase]

No, it's not about the length of buildup, but the pacing and consistency. The backyard scene wasn't an exponential function, it was a stepwise discontinuity. It would have felt different if they were making out in the office that morning, or had something else to go on other than "hey lemme talk to you for a minute".

Pardon my cynicism, but I'd wager few in this thread have been in any kind of analogous situation in the real world. I have. And while the rapid escalation can surprise even the participants, the way it went down in this story was the stuff of pure fantasy. If others don't see it as such, I guess that's good for them for their story enjoyment - but objectively the writing had pacing problems.

If this was written as a romantic affair or some adventurous couple wanting to experiment then sure, but this is blackmail.
It's a matter of how desperate the husband and wife are and how much of an asshole the boss is. Afterwards it's going down the affair route due to the fact that the wife enjoys it more than she wants to admit, but that's not how it starts.

 

[Tyger1234Rose]

Dessert comes after the meal. Flashback story telling maybe?

To address the issue of the 'unseen' seduction of the female lead by the antagonist, it was obviously intentional to leave you wondering what happened. Why could just a devote wife succumb so quickly, so easily? Did he really just threaten his job? Is she just a slut who drops panties for any alpha male? Others are just disappointed they didn't get to see a sexy scene. There is lots of story left and these are addressed in time.

Just a little background, the entire story arc is defined and the whole script is complete save for some polish. I do not like epically long stories with a sudden weak, rushed ending that doesn't do the rest of the game justice. The ending is fantastic in my mind, will make half of you happy, will make half of you pissed off, but will surprise everyone. It's just a matter of about 20k more renders to complete so bear with me.

This is also my second game but I've yet to publish the first (called Standing Guard). It is complete except for one scene I just can't seem to make myself finish. It is much shorter(about 1.5-2hrs total if you actually read the dialog). It's also a romance (no NTR). MHB is more polished because of the learning curve on my first game(it's a lot rougher in every measure). I'll publish it some day.

I want to thank all the reviewers and the kind remarks so far.

Thank you.

Thank you for release the game!
I want to leave a review and some wishes. Very cool renders, amazing animation, the main female character is very hot and sexy. The story is good, but I need to go through it again and read everything to understand, I'll probably wait for the next part and start again. A very big plus is that it's a kinetic novel and there is no choice or different paths that complicate everything. As you wrote in the game, it's more like a movie.

Some wishes - you can add more sounds in sex scenes, like for example in the scene when the husband hears sounds from behind the door(the scene is amazing!, like another scene further in the game, you have a talent for writing unusual sex scenes and very intriguing angles of vision on them), it is very cool and adds atmosphere. I think in those scenes that are, you did not add such sounds, because it is described by the script and the situations when the scenes took place, although in those sex scenes you can add only the sounds of touching bodies, and not the sounds that the characters make. In my opinion, the sound in the NSFW scene in games adds much more immersion to it than it would be without sound or just music playing in the background. And in general, I think it is right that you did not add music to the game, it would distract from the text and immersion in the story.

I would like to see the main female character in MMF and maybe even MMMF, maybe the wife will realize her needs and move on?). But this is just my wishes), the vision of history is yours and now you are doing great, so do what you have planned. You have a wonderful game, keep up the good work.

And there's also a small mistake at the end of the game, I don't think it's a spoiler.

 

[lordkaos666]

This game go direct to my favorite list, great work, congratz

 

[lemonsqueezie]

..Pardon my cynicism, but I'd wager few in this thread have been in any kind of analogous situation in the real world. I have. And while the rapid escalation can surprise even the participants, the way it went down in this story was the stuff of pure fantasy. If others don't see it as such, I guess that's good for them for their story enjoyment - but objectively the writing had pacing problems.

I wholeheartedly agree with you. In about an hour or so it went from an "innocent" little peck on the lips to doggy style in the backyard. I mean, in just 10-15 minutes alone with her, the boss had her bent over the table, fucking her hard. That's gotta be a record.

 

[Thickgravy49]

What an absolute gem!

Best game of it's type I've played on here and what's even better is that we didn't have to wait two to five years and slog through endless chapters of blue-balling slow-burn rubbish to see something good happen! Hurrah!

Many thanks and kudos to the dev for this.
Good luck and keep up the great work. Awesome stuff!