Too obvious plot, too much already revealed, no choices, poor quality.
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Viv's drawer will soon be filled with more than just the sweater from Christian...a basketball jersey, alma-mata shirt, car-shop overall...
Great character gestures and mimics.
Just love the way how Dev let the characters act to each other.
Viv was already blown away by Christian as soon as he stole a kiss on his mouth from her and then faked a kiss she was eager to receive which landed at her cheek.
The interaction especially between Viv and Hutch.
Both no courage to tell the other what's on their mind but point out that they can tell each other anything.
Viv wants to get reclaimed by her hubby but Hutch already sees himself on the losing path and waves the white flag.
Both keep denying and lying even to themselves. but try to lure it out of the other.
Only thing that disturbs the great atmosphere is the animation per images from Viv like:
Great character gestures and mimics.
Just love the way how Dev let the characters act to each other.
Viv was already blown away by Christian as soon as he stole a kiss on his mouth from her and then faked a kiss she was eager to receive which landed at her cheek.
The interaction especially between Viv and Hutch.
Both no courage to tell the other what's on their mind but point out that they can tell each other anything.
Viv wants to get reclaimed by her hubby but Hutch already sees himself on the losing path and waves the white flag.
Both keep denying and lying even to themselves. but try to lure it out of the other.
Only thing that disturbs the great atmosphere is the animation per images from Viv like:
- from her car to the office - needs a short, lovely, smooth and sexy animation showing her off
- from the scooter the her house door entrance - needs a short, lovely, smooth and sexy animation showing her off
- the scooter ride itself - would love to see her skirt fluttering up & down, right & left in an animation, causing distraction on the road
- from car to Christian's door entrance - needs a short, lovely, smooth and sexy animation showing her off
- the walk from door to door in school - needs a short, lovely, smooth and sexy animation showing her off
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one of the best NTR games I played, and I played many this kind of games. Great start !
Most devs usually release a demo and start working on their game for 2~3 more releases on time then they stall and release 2 versions a year or even less while milking their patrons. And THIS CHAD comes releases a 4000 images 1st version with great story great renders with great potential, asks for no donations or support.
@SC Stories you're a goddamn chad.
I know you don't want donations but god damn it you deserve it. I hope all these positive feedback don't put a pressure on you as you're clearly doing this out like a hobby for you. As much I want the next release be tomorrow, I hope you have fun creating your game.
@SC Stories you're a goddamn chad.
I know you don't want donations but god damn it you deserve it. I hope all these positive feedback don't put a pressure on you as you're clearly doing this out like a hobby for you. As much I want the next release be tomorrow, I hope you have fun creating your game.
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Since this is a nev dav and game it would be nice to know what his expectation is for a release schedule.... I understand that currently he is doing thisfor free. But since it is recieved so highly !! it would be nice to know !
This is without a doubt one of the best releases I have seen on this site in a long time. With one of the hottest main characters I have seen in a long time. Absolutely fantastic work and I can´t wait to see more.
Is this the greatest first release for an NTR game, or any genre, ever? I think there's a strong argument for it.
Fan-fucking-tastic. I do hope we get to see Vivian all done up again (judging by the previews we will
) because she looked incredible in that dinner. By far the highlight of the update. The cowgirl sex scene that followed was fking hot.
I admit having Vivian find out Hutch knows this soon threw me off a bit. I usually prefer stories where the wife cheats while being oblivious to her husband's complicity. But the writing here is so strong, Vivian's reactions so genuine and believable, that I dont mind this at all. I have full confidence the dev will deliver.
Fan-fucking-tastic. I do hope we get to see Vivian all done up again (judging by the previews we will
) because she looked incredible in that dinner. By far the highlight of the update. The cowgirl sex scene that followed was fking hot.I admit having Vivian find out Hutch knows this soon threw me off a bit. I usually prefer stories where the wife cheats while being oblivious to her husband's complicity. But the writing here is so strong, Vivian's reactions so genuine and believable, that I dont mind this at all. I have full confidence the dev will deliver
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This game will be better is it has choice based scenes and the wife with long hair.
DefinitelyIs this the greatest first release for an NTR game, or any genre, ever? I think there's a strong argument for it.
Fan-fucking-tastic. I do hope we get to see Vivian all done up again (judging by the previews we will
I admit having Vivian find out Hutch knows this soon threw me off a bit. I usually prefer stories where the wife cheats while being oblivious to her husband's complicity. But the writing here is so strong I dont mind this rn. I have full confidence the dev will deliver
please DEV remove the auto advancing, Thank You
Note You are in a very, very, small minority. It is arguably one of the best KNs on this site. You understand Kinetic Novel, right? If you actually did play it you would have noted in the introduction exactly what it was all about. Which makes me think you didn’t and just being a contrarian.
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Exactly! I think I need to forget a certain game that you and I know very well. I can't use it as a parameter for all other games. But, honestly, I expected a more elaborate, slow and progressive adultery. You know very well.
Either way, this game has a lot of potential. It's more about sharing than NTR.
The introduction clearly states why auto advancing is there - you can speed it up in preferences.
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You should know that "alex" guy from sicilia. It's his 546th account already and never learned his lesson!
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Excellent stuff!
I see TonyMurray already pointed out some things I spotted as well (minor issues).
One thing I haven't seen mentioned, I get a
I see TonyMurray already pointed out some things I spotted as well (minor issues).
One thing I haven't seen mentioned, I get a
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Here is something I am not sure what it means. After the sleepover she comes home in the shirt the boss gave her. She takes a shower. After she takes the shirt.... gives it a sniff...then put it in a drawer ?????
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She thinks of him / what transpired. You see she's aroused, she takes a sniff as it smells of him.