I enjoyed this overall, fantastic work
SC Stories! I'm happy just being told a compelling story, so while there are a few bits that I might not expect to happen so quickly or "easily", they don't bother me in the slightest. It looks great, and I like Vivian, especially as she's not the sort of FMC you generally tend to get elsewhere.
A couple of minor issues:
- As someone else mentioned, colleagues/Vivian occasionally call MC "Hutch", even if you change the name. That should easily be fixable with a quick coding change. I think it's just in day 3 and day 6, looking at the files.
- Addison's lipstick disappears suddenly during conversation when Vivian turns up at the office again (also does Vivian leave her hat and sunglasses behind somewhere?)
- Some typos in the dialogue, but nothing too frequent or major. One that came up several times was "to" instead of "too" though.
I look forward to continuing, and appreciate the quick "preview" renders at the end there!