- Jul 25, 2017
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played a little more didn't want to play to much as it's late meant to play more a little sooner. Finished the dinner scene the sex scenes really well done I might add.
Only thing that was a bit off was the pacing in showing how the Wife goes from being faithful to cheating for me. But I think I saw it mention that is planned to me shown later.
Still undecided who I dislike more the husband , the boss or the wife for cheating. Tho I will say despite the wife being a cheater I don't totally hate her yet. As without the context it does feel like she did it with a reason and showed remorse for doing it. As she doesn't come across doing it cause she is slutty or anything so I can respect that even tho it's still a shitty thing to do. But im guessing im gonna change my mind on that at some point.
But I really like how you made the husband act in the dinner scene. As someone that isn't an Alpha but really passive it's probably close to how I would of acted. Especially if I wanted to keep my job , tho I would of probably told the wife I know when she asked and not make a scene and tell her we will talk about it the next day. But that is just me not everyone is able to keep their cool haha especially after betrayal but comes kind of natural to me.
Hopefully I can finish this tomorrow if not next day for sure id wager.
Only thing that was a bit off was the pacing in showing how the Wife goes from being faithful to cheating for me. But I think I saw it mention that is planned to me shown later.
Still undecided who I dislike more the husband , the boss or the wife for cheating. Tho I will say despite the wife being a cheater I don't totally hate her yet. As without the context it does feel like she did it with a reason and showed remorse for doing it. As she doesn't come across doing it cause she is slutty or anything so I can respect that even tho it's still a shitty thing to do. But im guessing im gonna change my mind on that at some point.
But I really like how you made the husband act in the dinner scene. As someone that isn't an Alpha but really passive it's probably close to how I would of acted. Especially if I wanted to keep my job , tho I would of probably told the wife I know when she asked and not make a scene and tell her we will talk about it the next day. But that is just me not everyone is able to keep their cool haha especially after betrayal but comes kind of natural to me.
Hopefully I can finish this tomorrow if not next day for sure id wager.