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Since you have a pile of renders... any chance for a few plot teasers to add spice to the preview pics.
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Well, congrats to the dev for all the positive remarks on his release. I thought the renderings were good and most of the dialogue was well written.
I have to say one of my biggest complaints for not only this KVN but every NTR game that I've come across is that the 'victim' or husband is always so unlikeable. I'm waiting for the husband in one of these games to have 'some' kind of redeeming quality or qualities. I read through these and find myself disregarding the pathetic or poorly written husband and just root for the antagonist.
Perhaps, as an example, there could have been a scene or two where we are shown (not told) how close the husband and son are, but instead what we got was the mom going to get ogled over by the college boys. Which we know where that will eventually lead. Unfortunately, everything about the husband is utterly pathetic... which is always the case. I never feel bad for these characters and so the supposed draw quickly loses interest for me.
Also, the speed with which she cheated on her husband is kind of story-breaking for me. Her showing so much emotion afterwards, and constantly telling her husband that she loves him does not line up with reality. Either she was dissatisfied with her marriage/sex life and was tempted to cheat or she just doesn't like her husband. But that was not the way it played out. Regardless, anyone with a mind for these things, understand the direction this game will go, as it is with so many before it.
I criticize only because I see the talent of the dev. and hope one day there will be a little more depth to this genre of porn game than the standard status quo. Anyway, good luck to the dev, you seem to have a lot of fans here already.
I have to say one of my biggest complaints for not only this KVN but every NTR game that I've come across is that the 'victim' or husband is always so unlikeable. I'm waiting for the husband in one of these games to have 'some' kind of redeeming quality or qualities. I read through these and find myself disregarding the pathetic or poorly written husband and just root for the antagonist.
Perhaps, as an example, there could have been a scene or two where we are shown (not told) how close the husband and son are, but instead what we got was the mom going to get ogled over by the college boys. Which we know where that will eventually lead. Unfortunately, everything about the husband is utterly pathetic... which is always the case. I never feel bad for these characters and so the supposed draw quickly loses interest for me.
Also, the speed with which she cheated on her husband is kind of story-breaking for me. Her showing so much emotion afterwards, and constantly telling her husband that she loves him does not line up with reality. Either she was dissatisfied with her marriage/sex life and was tempted to cheat or she just doesn't like her husband. But that was not the way it played out. Regardless, anyone with a mind for these things, understand the direction this game will go, as it is with so many before it.
I criticize only because I see the talent of the dev. and hope one day there will be a little more depth to this genre of porn game than the standard status quo. Anyway, good luck to the dev, you seem to have a lot of fans here already.
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I don't think so, it has nothing to do with it.
It was her decision to meet her husbands boss at his office.
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The strong sexual tension between the two was through the roof and she broke at that moment.
The extra-marital intercourse was invitable from that point on.
Maybe this sounds plain, but Vivian is just a sex starved wife and probably bored in her twenty-two year long marriage.
Besides the boss uses the art of persuasion and knows how to manipulate people to get what he wants.
But if we are honest no husband would have allowed this:
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It's still a game with porn logic involved, so it needs to be play out that way to progress the story.
The dev did something right, when people discuss fictional characters and their motivation in a porn game.
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Didn't you play through the part where she goes to see their son at college and his roommates are lusting after her?
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Adhd tends to take responsibility for not remembering
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A never ending story about these sex starved teenagers lusting after a MILF.
This would be fun, the son witness his dad getting cucked and get's cucked himself this way.
Double cucked.
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You're definitely taking the right approach here, because too many branching paths creating impossible complexity are probably the #1 reason games get abandoned by the dev, with the #2 reason being the dev's attempts to satisfy everybody's feedback - which ends up satisfying nobody and ruining the game. Starting with a clear vision and sticking to it will see this game completed successfully, with players free to make up their own minds on the content. I live in hope that Hutch's devastated face and brooding silences are hiding the slow development of a psychotic revenge killer, but if the game ends with Vivian (heavily pregnant with someone else's baby) and Addison crying over Hutch's grave after he kills himself in despair, that's OK too. I'm enjoying the journey more than the destination.
Something you might consider after that is adding a series of 'What If?' snippets, to explore interesting possibilities that wouldn't fit into the main game. Its an approach that works well with Kinetic Novels, with a few examples on this site.
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Double cucked double revenge. Dad takes care of college kids son takes care of boss. Both leave mom.A never ending story about these sex starved teenagers lusting after a MILF.
This would be fun, the son witness his dad getting cucked and get's cucked himself this way.
Double cucked.
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That's pretty much guaranteed. The ending was the 2nd thing to get outlined. The 1st? It was the backyard scene. As controversial as the whole backyard/bedroom part seems to be, it was/is the foundation I build this world on. I wanted the viewer to live those moments through Hutch, though, hence the teasing.
And I'll just say again, thank you everyone for the praise and support so far. I won't confirm or deny anything story wise. I've got a much bigger response than I anticipated and I'm enjoying reading everyone's theories, critiques, and hopes. I want everyone to have fun with that while we wait for the next update. When will that be? I can't give an answer. This is a hobby, and I do have a day job, so bear with me.
Thanks again.
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Just take your time I am not a KN fan I like some semblance of control but your KN has caught my attention even if it doesn't go the way I hope I have enjoyed it. I will say I hope you keep it to the title and don't add the BBC to it. But it's your game. Do you.
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I just started playing the game, and so far i'm enjoying it. However, on the preview pics (specifically the last pic) on the thread's front page, we see a black dude eyeing the wife's body. Is the wife going to turn into a village whore? I hope not, cuz that'll just ruin the game for me personally.
Bro SC Stories great game man, loved the story, animation, characters, dialogues. Eagerly waiting for the next part.
BTW I know you are not taking any support from us and doing a true god's work but man if there is any possibility of getting the chapters faster with our support than...
Don't know about your plans but one of the most famous AVN game "Leap of Faith" was also free release for everyone of patreon but people still supported it, but at the end of the day its up to you.
Once again great game!
BTW I know you are not taking any support from us and doing a true god's work but man if there is any possibility of getting the chapters faster with our support than...
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Don't know about your plans but one of the most famous AVN game "Leap of Faith" was also free release for everyone of patreon but people still supported it, but at the end of the day its up to you.
Once again great game!
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Similarly to what a bunch of others said, there's a weird thing where she looks like an old lady but at the same time fit with no actual signs of aging. It's probably the hair and make up along with just the face design, I think giving her a tramp stamp (along with the other dumb tattoo) though says all you need to know about the plans for her and her probable history before getting married. Reminds me of someone I use to know who like to use to the quote "you can't make a hoe into a housewife" and she'd know because she ended up being a hoe.
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Damn. For Hutch to start Vivian with an open marriage, hope things go well for the both of them. I wonder how far deep and corrupt she'll be in the next update? Maybe not that much but a work in progress I guess. I doubt they'll only have the small talk and love and affection towards each other. I mean Hutch and Vivian.
When I was playing through this update, I first felt like Vivian was sacrificing her own life and body for Hutch's job (which I guess that was entirely understandable) and Hutch knows it (when he saw them in the backyard for the first time), but just doesn't want to tell her about it. It just feels like both Hutch and Vivian were just evading from the shit they've been through recently (more like Hutch evading his wife ever since from the first dinner with Christian, the boss) . And it looked like it was going to get worse until the end of this update where they talked about it. I was like, "WOW FINALLY! "I thought it was going to get even worse as Hutch will distance himself from her wife even more, but it didn't.
When I was playing through this update, I first felt like Vivian was sacrificing her own life and body for Hutch's job (which I guess that was entirely understandable) and Hutch knows it (when he saw them in the backyard for the first time), but just doesn't want to tell her about it. It just feels like both Hutch and Vivian were just evading from the shit they've been through recently (more like Hutch evading his wife ever since from the first dinner with Christian, the boss) . And it looked like it was going to get worse until the end of this update where they talked about it. I was like, "WOW FINALLY! "I thought it was going to get even worse as Hutch will distance himself from her wife even more, but it didn't.
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She just knew what she was getting into the moment Christian hit on her on the first meeting, although DEV didn't show the first sex scene we can assure it was little to no resistance from her.I don't think so, it has nothing to do with it.
It was her decision to meet her husbands boss at his office.
When he kissed her a second time, she expected it on her lips and was disappointed when he kissed her cheek instead.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
The strong sexual tension between the two was through the roof and she broke at that moment.
The extra-marital intercourse was invitable from that point on.
Maybe this sounds plain, but Vivian is just a sex starved wife and probably bored in her twenty-two year long marriage.
Besides the boss uses the art of persuasion and knows how to manipulate people to get what he wants.
But if we are honest no husband would have allowed this:
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It's still a game with porn logic involved, so it needs to be play out that way to progress the story.
The dev did something right, when people discuss fictional characters and their motivation in a porn game.
Accept it she is a whore with weak will power, anyone request her, blackmail her or little force her and she is ready to spread the legs.
Also I yell at every husband in NTR games but this MF is special(more like specially retarded), man is not even beta male, fucker got no spine at all.
I also think Christian will swing her to every client for the contracts, eager to know who will take her Anal virginity though.