VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [v0.2] [SC Stories]

[Sparta158]

My bet on 0.6 is that Huutch who didn't talk much in 0.2 and even couldn't bring on a full sentence towards Christian, will be completely silenced by then.
We will witness from his point of view an absolute detached wife on Vitamin D who drives him to utter despair.
Get your umbrellas ready!

I think the exact opposite. He will have to ask himself the question, did I make my wife do this through my distant behavior over several years? i will explain it in more detail later.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

I think the exact opposite. He will have to ask himself the question, did I make my wife do this through my distant behavior over several years?

Not possible if we can trust our DEV!

Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose

...it will rain heavy Huutch tear drops!

 

[Sparta158]

Not possible if we can trust our DEV!


...it will rain heavy Huutch tear drops!

I interpret that differently. This part will answer for me how it got this far.

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I think0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think that's what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about a quarter of it is already done and it's easier to render because it's focused on Hutch.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Project Update
(the real one)

I meant it when I said WOW before... this is the energizer bunny of threads. I am not a professional writer. I don't even consider myself an amateur writer. As stated before I wanted to write a story for myself and so I sat down with a known story arc and basic character motivations and started writing. I simply tried to put myself in the shoes of each character and write from their mindset when they spoke or acted. What I crapped out turned out better than I hoped. I wish I could say I meticulously planned out every detail discussed here, but the fact is the nuanced events and dialogs that are talked about here mostly happened organically. Just evolving into what it is over time as I wrote, added, rewrote and evolved the script into what it is today. I never set out specifically to add X here so that Y happens there. It wasn't until seeing you guys starting to analyze it that I started to appreciate my own creation. Maybe that comes off as conceited and I'm sure some would argue I write worse than a retarded monkey, but what I mean to say is - thank you. Thank you for making me feel good about my story. Thank you for making me feel good about my dark and depressing story that is going to get much worse.


Chapter vs Release vs Version
For now I will try to stick to calling these by version number (0.2,0.4,etc). I haven't decided if I will publish as a stand alone game, in which case I'll call them chapters, or as a complete (to date) game. The only thing stopping me from releasing a stand alone update is that every broken up game I've ever seen here is a confusing mess of naming conventions, groupings hidden under spoiler tags, and other nonsensical formatting. I would like to think calling them Chaper 1, Chapter 2, along with an in game title page stating 'hey this is chapter 2, go download chapter 1 if you haven't' would work... but I'm not so sure. I'm all about eye candy and I really... really... don't want to compress my game. v0.2 has over 600MB just in animations. That could be 2GB by then end of the game, plus 20k renders, and trying to compress than into 10GB or maybe even 5gb file? Anyway, still thinking about the best solution.

Version 0.4
It's on track for a mid to late May release as originally planned. I've got 2k renders done with probably about another 1k to go, not including the sexy scenes which still need animating. Compared to v0.2, it looks like total play time will be less than the first one. v0.2 had 6 games days but only 5 with significant content and 5k of images. v0.4 is 6 and 4 with 3k(probably) images. I could include more game days to match the size of v0.2 but this will end at a natural break point. As mentioned this is a Vivian heavy update with the next one(v0.6) picking up with a lot more Hutch content right from the start. v0.4 will answer some questions and develop the story, but v0.6 is where the pain begins.

Porn Logic
I had a really long rant about this but I scratched it and I'll simply say this: It's a story. All stories are unrealistic to a degree but that's what makes it entertaining. I feel my 'leaps of faith' are easier to swallow than most Hollywood movies. 'Pitch meeting' and 'The Critical Thinker' on YT show just how shitty Hollywood is. But they entertain nonetheless.


Just to speak to this for a moment - YES. That is the short answer to your questions. It's up to you to see WHAT he does then decide for yourself WHY he did it. This thread is a couple hundred pages of people answering that. But to expand on this just a little, despite her screen time, I do not consider Vivian to be the main character. Hutch does not get an inner monologue on purpose. I think v0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think is what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about of quarter of that is already done and being Hutch focused, it's easier to render. The bad news is, after this update, I will need to slow down a little. I'm rushing to get this one done to sort of 'cement' the story, and, as a non initial release, get more attention from people holding off. I almost never download initial releases as they typically have little content and often quickly abandoned. I suspect there are plenty others like me.

Again, thank you to everyone.


No sneak peaks but I'll include just some old eye candy renders I've done in the past.

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This one I'm particularly proud of. I know most of you don't use Daz but I made this without any post work. It was one render from Daz using mirrors. It was inspired but the music video Late Night Feelins by Mark Ronson.

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Okay... edited to include a gratuitous titty shot for Packard

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Looking forward to the update to see how it plays out

One question just and it's not even story based but what made you design Vivian the way you did looks wise that is , as I've never seen a female character model like her in a game before , so I'm curious to see what inspired you to go for that look

 

[xert13]

I interpret that differently. This part will answer for me how it got this far.

Quote:
I think0.6 is a much more interesting part of the story and I think that's what most of you really want. We'll get there in time. The good news is that about a quarter of it is already done and it's easier to render because it's focused on Hutch.

”….what most of you really want.” Not sure it is easy to quantify what most of us want. Very subjective. Maybe the Dev means in terms of answers as to how this scenario could have possibly unfolded. Hutch and Vivian backstory? Marriage issues? Not sure, but I take solace in knowing the Dev’s story is already done. That eliminates manipulation of the story by what a vocal few seem to want, like: Vivian becoming a prostitute; Hutch going postal and decapitating Christian; Vivian going postal and decapitating Christian; Christian becoming despondent after Hutch calls the IRS on him and decapitating himself, the toaster from Summer Heat fucking Vivian and then decapitating Christian…

 

[Chaoticjustice]

”….what most of you really want.” Not sure it is easy to quantify what most of us want. Very subjective. Maybe the Dev means in terms of answers as to how this scenario could have possibly unfolded. Hutch and Vivian backstory? Marriage issues? Not sure, but I take solace in knowing the Dev’s story is already done. That eliminates manipulation of the story by what a vocal few seem to want, like: Vivian becoming a prostitute; Hutch going postal and decapitating Christian; Vivian going postal and decapitating Christian; Christian becoming despondent after Hutch calls the IRS on him and decapitating himself, the toaster from Summer Heat fucking Vivian and then decapitating Christian…

You can't forget my dark one I suggested we cut off any limb or member that can provide sexual gratification then send Christian back to Vivian knowing he can never satisfy her again hahaha

I still stand by this if we where doing a super extreme route haha

 

[packard1928]

DEV said that .6 is mostly about Hutch and what he decides to do. That statement say he is going to do something ! Dev also say the darker side of the story is Hutch which starts in this chapter.. Personally.. I think he will be diabolical in taking Christin down... If Vivian is part of that he may be already emotionally detached to just think... so what... she made he bed. Anyway according to Dev... this story is to get dark and stay dark... so I do not think it will be a happy ending for anyone !

 

[Sparta158]

”….what most of you really want.” Not sure it is easy to quantify what most of us want. Very subjective. Maybe the Dev means in terms of answers as to how this scenario could have possibly unfolded. Hutch and Vivian backstory? Marriage issues? Not sure, but I take solace in knowing the Dev’s story is already done. That eliminates manipulation of the story by what a vocal few seem to want, like: Vivian becoming a prostitute; Hutch going postal and decapitating Christian; Vivian going postal and decapitating Christian; Christian becoming despondent after Hutch calls the IRS on him and decapitating himself, the toaster from Summer Heat fucking Vivian and then decapitating Christian…

For me it's simple, otherwise this thread wouldn't have exploded to over 250 pages after 2 months. In such a short time, that's an unimaginable number. It just shows that Dev has reached a point with viewers on many levels. I calculated it down for fun, even AWAM has surpassed it on a monthly basis.
Some even well written NTR Vitamin D games don't manage this after several years. That's usually because it's too superficial and at some point it's just about proteins, slut, prostitute, cum swallowing, boring.
That could happen here too, but the difference is that I think there will be a good narrative explanation.

 

[robrize2169]

DEV said that .6 is mostly about Hutch and what he decides to do. That statement say he is going to do something ! Dev also say the darker side of the story is Hutch which starts in this chapter.. Personally.. I think he will be diabolical in taking Christin down... If Vivian is part of that he may be already emotionally detached to just think... so what... she made he bed. Anyway according to Dev... this story is to get dark and stay dark... so I do not think it will be a happy ending for anyone !

i do love a good revenge story. hopefully the revenge on Christian and Viv will be epic.

 

[Luc77]

sad, and pain and suffering...

 

[fbass]

sad, and pain and suffering...

High emotions, sex and drama.

 

[Luc77]

SC Stories

Okay, I've had a brief look, but I can't see anything about this, where is it from please?

day 2 s1 ambush part3
pictures 155-200
SC kicks out images 190-200 from the storyline and replaces them with images 501-515. The new images provide a longer build-up to the kiss and more intense disorientation for Vivian and the magnetic influence of Chris . In the older version, the attempt at the kiss is shorter, and Vivian leaves after throwing a snarky remark.
Here, for the first time, we see the kind of power Chris has over Vivian.

High emotions, sex and drama.

its Vivain

I wrote about Hutch

 

[TonyMurray]

SC Stories


day 2 s1 ambush part3
pictures 155-200
SC kicks out images 190-200 from the storyline and replaces them with images 501-515. The new images provide a longer build-up to the kiss and more intense disorientation for Vivian. In the older version, the attempt at the kiss is shorter, and Vivian leaves after throwing a snarky remark.

So those images (190-200) don't appear in the game? Are you playing a different version to me, because I've only seen one version released, and those images look like they are all there to me. I don't see any "original" version. Putting some additional images in, or putting existing images in a different order doesn't mean anything, there are always drafts and edits prior to release. Unless I'm missing something here, this looks like just another case of looking too deeply into something and convincing yourself that you've found something that isn't there. It's a non-story.

 

[SC Stories]

SC Stories
day 2 s1 ambush part3
pictures 155-200
SC kicks out images 190-200 from the storyline and replaces them with images 501-515. The new images provide a longer build-up to the kiss and more intense disorientation for Vivian and the magnetic influence of Chris . In the older version, the attempt at the kiss is shorter, and Vivian leaves after throwing a snarky remark.
Here, for the first time, we see the kind of power Chris has over Vivian.

Thanks for filling me in. Like tony said, I think you're trying to read more into it than is there. I make frequent 'reshoots'. Just part of the process.

 

[Luc77]

So those images (190-200) don't appear in the game? Are you playing a different version to me, because I've only seen one version released, and those images look like they are all there to me. I don't see any "original" version. Putting some additional images in, or putting existing images in a different order doesn't mean anything, there are always drafts and edits prior to release. Unless I'm missing something here, this looks like just another case of looking too deeply into something and convincing yourself that you've found something that isn't there. It's a non-story.

I'm not saying it's a huge change, but the added images 501-515 make the effect of this scene much stronger. In fact, if you look closely, images 190, 191, 192, and 194 are still mixed with 500-515, while 193, 195-200 are completely gone. It's a small detail—like adding extra shots to a scene in a movie after post-production, when the director wants to fix, highlight, or complete something.

 

[Dealbreaker]

Isn't the important question if that change (as minimal as it may have been) was intended to encourage that:

the magnetic influence of Chris

interpretation/perception/characterization by the viewer (as Luc claims) or not. I hope not. But even if so, I'm not sure it was successful in doing so in my case at least.

 

[xcalibar4]

i do love a good revenge story. hopefully the revenge on Christian and Viv will be epic.

You can't forget my dark one I suggested

Vivian becoming a prostitute

3. Something else?

he would ruin his company so that he would get rich

A really simple short story, you guys may enjoy it

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My revenge take is from one of Edgar Allan Poe's short story. Where the Hubby comes home sees his wife made his favorite dinner, and after eating it police comes to arrest her and ask her

Spoiler: Not for faint heart

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[Sparta158]

A really simple short story, you guys may enjoy it

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Thanks for sharing the short stories. There are some good ones.

 

[Luc77]

questions keep popping up - how is it possible that a wife after 20+ years of marriage gives a fuck to a guy she just met in one day.
This is exactly the answer – the guy has a powerful influence on her, an animal magnetism. It is beyond her control (Malkovich ). Thanks to this, we also have a certain consistency in her behavior – from the meeting by the door to the scene in the garden. In each of them, he is dominant, and she is submissive.

 

[JoeBlogs]

Perhaps in the end we discover that Christina is a closet homosexual, who uses woman as a tool to hide his true desires.
In the end, Hutch does the community a service, and fucks Christian in the ass before dumping a full load into his awaiting mouth. Finally now that Christian is out of the closet, he become a model citizen and repents for the way he has behaved towards women in the past. Vivian is pissed off that her boyfriend has no more interest in her, and has more desire for her husband.