Well, congrats to the dev for all the positive remarks on his release. I thought the renderings were good and most of the dialogue was well written.
I have to say one of my biggest complaints for not only this KVN but every NTR game that I've come across is that the 'victim' or husband is always so unlikeable. I'm waiting for the husband in one of these games to have 'some' kind of redeeming quality or qualities. I read through these and find myself disregarding the pathetic or poorly written husband and just root for the antagonist.
Perhaps, as an example, there could have been a scene or two where we are shown (not told) how close the husband and son are, but instead what we got was the mom going to get ogled over by the college boys. Which we know where that will eventually lead. Unfortunately, everything about the husband is utterly pathetic... which is always the case. I never feel bad for these characters and so the supposed draw quickly loses interest for me.
Also, the speed with which she cheated on her husband is kind of story-breaking for me. Her showing so much emotion afterwards, and constantly telling her husband that she loves him does not line up with reality. Either she was dissatisfied with her marriage/sex life and was tempted to cheat or she just doesn't like her husband. But that was not the way it played out. Regardless, anyone with a mind for these things, understand the direction this game will go, as it is with so many before it.
I criticize only because I see the talent of the dev. and hope one day there will be a little more depth to this genre of porn game than the standard status quo. Anyway, good luck to the dev, you seem to have a lot of fans here already.