From first it looks hot and vulgar for his friends (welcoming with boner) but her dress too cheap and too slutty for a start, and eating hotdog was erotic but fingering? too fast and would be better to slow it down, they can put drugs or something in her food to make her horny first too accept more touchy would be erotic.
In the bar they using aphrodisiac oil on her ass, yes that's hot only if they using it again when they got refused when they wanted something in the future.
And the moment she was sunbath around erick and bruce was hot, but need a little add (Time) when they started, how long they touching her, makes more sense if she was refusing first but they changed with aphrodisiac oil instead sunscrean and the game started when she was in heat after they applied ophrodisiac oil.
When she was giving head in living room with bruce and erick was too slutty too, let her keep her shirt on and only erotic and too fast for something like that, keep it on the pool for playing with both of them, playing in living room only makes the story shorter, only if she giving head to erick in bathroom leave her alone make her wait and invite bruce from phone, make the story more longer and interesting.
First her have sex, using aphrodisiac first to make her on heat first and wanted to have sex, and using condom, make sure doug found the used condoms, after that make sure put pile of condom everywhere for adding erotic vibes, add time when they have sex too to make sure they have "big cock fatigue"
And next would be erotic if bruce consuming viagra for alone time with her, next day alone time with erick.
And the final day both of them playing for 48 nonstop with her with a lot of drugs they comsume.
The next game "My italian slut wife 2" when they have holiday together to some island or somewhere, with bruce and erick and some new character, and start with slow for reminding what they had in bruce place.
