VN Ren'Py Abandoned My Love Path [v0.05] [AwelianGames]

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I'm Awelian. I'm a new game maker. My Love Path is my first game project and its have fate system. What you do will affect the progress of the game.​

Thread Updated: 2019-02-19
Release Date: 2019-02-19
Developer: AwelianGames

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Version: 0.05
OS: Windows and Mac
Language: English
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[User_23654]

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[AeriaAxel1]

Is it weird if I ask if it's animated? I kind of have a habit of assuming it's animated coz of the HS models...

 

[freedom.call]

What's a 'fate system'? Some ingame stat thing?

 

[Awelian]

Is it weird if I ask if it's animated? I kind of have a habit of assuming it's animated coz of the HS models...

No animation at this time. Animated scenes will be added in future updates.

What's a 'fate system'? Some ingame stat thing?

Your choices affect the future of the game. For example, if you are a beloved with Juliet, you will play a part about Juliet in the next updates.

 

[freedom.call]

Your choices affect the future of the game. For example, if you are a beloved with Juliet, you will play a part about Juliet in the next updates.

Understood. I'll try my luck later.

 

[Hotkillerz]

not much on description. dont know if it worth checking out or not.

 

[Awelian]

not much on description. dont know if it worth checking out or not.

Only 275 mb. I think you should give it a chance.

 

[vengefulspirit]

Are the tags accurate for the current version of the game? Or are they what might come in future updates? Cause thats a bunch of tags for a 275mb first release.

Also like others said, some description of the plot/setting/main character would be great. Lastly calling what is just a choice driven story (like pretty much every other renpy vn) a "fate system" is probably needlessly confusing and might come off as pretentious.

 

[Awelian]

Are the tags accurate for the current version of the game? Or are they what might come in future updates? Cause thats a bunch of tags for a 275mb first release.

Also like others said, some description of the plot/setting/main character would be great. Lastly calling what is just a choice driven story (like pretty much every other renpy vn) a "fate system" is probably needlessly confusing and might come off as pretentious.

You will be divided into 3 main roads according to your preferences. There will be 3 different games in future updates. Each will have different endings and events.

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[AeriaAxel1]

No animation at this time. Animated scenes will be added in future updates.

Gotcha...

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[rory68]

Promising start!!!Good luck Awelian!!

 

[vengefulspirit]

You will be divided into 3 main roads according to your preferences. There will be 3 different games in future updates. Each will have different endings and events.

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Alright, that's a lot more to go on. You didn't answer about the tags though.

Also Niki mustve hit puberty at like 7 if that is her at 12. Like geeeeez. And she has far darker skin than both her parents lol.

 

[soleroth]

game is just a big bag of exceptions for me as soon as lucy enters the room

 

[Awelian]

Alright, that's a lot more to go on. You didn't answer about the tags though.

Also Niki mustve hit puberty at like 7 if that is her at 12. Like geeeeez. And she has far darker skin than both her parents lol.

I'm sorry I didn't realize. The tags are correct for this version.

She's just a little tall. And you paid attention to the skin color. Maybe there's something different about it.

And and my main language is not English. Some mistakes have been overlooked while translating. They will be corrected in the next release.

 

[rangaru]

She's just a little tall. And you paid attention to the skin color. Maybe there's something different about it.

FYI patreon will block your account if they find out about incest and 12 y/o character. And they will find out eventually.

 

[D3ssel]

Alright, that's a lot more to go on. You didn't answer about the tags though.

Also Niki mustve hit puberty at like 7 if that is her at 12. Like geeeeez. And she has far darker skin than both her parents lol.

Was about to say the same thing.

Also, considering the age of the characters, I always believe that, if you want to add a "teen" character to your plot, never give a precise age like that. Just design your character to "act" like the age you think he/she has, and let players figure out their age themselves.

The same thing can be done with incest as well since Patreon has decided to not allow it anymore. Just set up every reaction according to an "incest logic", but don't objectively tell the relation of the characters to each other. This also makes it a lot easier for incest "mods". That's basically what Dark Silver himself did recently with his latest game.

Either that, or allow the player to set the relation at the start of the game, but design all the interactions to follow your original game design intent (incest, in this case).

Everything said and done, I actually enjoyed this little alpha. Not enough to become a patron yet, but looking forward to seeing a bit more in the future.

FYI patreon will block your account if they find out about incest and 12 y/o character. And they will find out eventually.

Honestly, I do know quite a few games that explicitly have incest in their core and still haven't had any problem with Patreon yet. But, yes, it could happen at any given moment. It's, always, a risk nowadays.

 

[Varador]

@Awelian

May I suggest not using turkish letters, might save you from future headache. Also there is one untranslated text and a few mis translated texts.
Yabancı => Stranger
Infiltrated => dozed off / fell asleep (google translate for "sızmak" refers to sneaking around)
Juliet uyanır => Juliet wakes up.
There is a point where you call your daughter "him" when you try to make her talk.
These are the ones that I can remember top of my head. But there is some more, you might want to have that checked over.

 

[Awelian]

rangaru
D3ssel

There is never any sexual content related to that character. She is a child and she just got the role in the story.

I've updated this statement on the patreon. Thank you for feedback.

@Awelian

May I suggest not using turkish letters, might save you from future headache. Also there is one untranslated text and a few mis translated texts.
Yabancı => Stranger
Infiltrated => dozed off / fell asleep (google translate for "sızmak" refers to sneaking around)
Juliet uyanır => Juliet wakes up.
There is a point where you call your daughter "him" when you try to make her talk.
These are the ones that I can remember top of my head. But there is some more, you might want to have that checked over.

Thanks for feedback. You can be sure that all of them will be corrected.