Like the other Dumb Koala efforts, the quality was excellent. It was nice to see a mother/daughter effort. Personally, I would have preferred if the mother at least had bigger tits, but that's my taste. The only negative comments I have are:
- It was pretty dumb of Naomi to get fixated on the damn dildo when Mom's waiting for her to bring her the phone. That could have been fixed by something like "While I'm busy, could you LOOK for my phone?" Gives the kid more time before Mom gets impatient.
- Rendering error: When Abigail- I'm sorry, The Landlady

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is watching Naomi, she has stripped to her sexy black bra in close-ups, but in the long shots she still has the red blouse on.
- The thing hit one of my pet peeves. She pulls her (snug) pants off OVER her shoes, but keeps the damn shoes on? Oh, well, at least it's not the porno stars wearing nothing but high heels, even in bed or in the bathroom/pool.
- It was WAY too short. The quality of offerings that you are putting out is fantastic and might work better as a longer endeavor as an actual game with some choices by the MC.
Any way, good luck and I look forward to your next effort.