Apologies accepted.First of all, I want to apologize if my earlier comment felt aggressive in any way. I did not mean to "correct" you.
I wrote it right before leaving for work, and only selected the part of your and harmonyrose's comment that I wanted to answer to. I agree that I should probably have reformulated and asked if I had understood correctly what you both had said.
I wanted to make it clear on this thread, as it has been done on the SoA one, by others :
Both stories take place in the same "world", in neighboring cities.
They do, however, each have their own tone, plots, and interesting characters.
If some cameos are to be expected between the two (or even possibly a scene or two in the future), major plot elements, such as Nyct X, will not cross the boundary.
I have been proofreading the MNGF script since the second Chapter, and the SoA one since the fourth.
While I do not claim (far from it) to know where both stories will go, I do know some immutable facts about them.
You can find me on both their Discord servers, if you want to discuss about anything related to these projects.
We can't do that obviously, but both SoA and MNGF have big - and almost entirely SEPARATE I want to make that very clear - plans. I have the utmost faith in both CG and Abyss to deliver a unique, interesting and - most importantly - incredibly sexy narrative. If I didn't believe in the projects I wouldn't give my time to helping with them. Neither would cho.Apologies accepted.
Honestly, I thought that we could squeeze from you some future details from both plots, that would have been awesome considering it will take a while for the next updates to arrive...But i'll take what you said about some "inmutable facts" at least for now.
*Tips fedora*
...And this is what I wanted to read....but both SoA and MNGF have big - and almost entirely SEPARATE plans.
I think a lot of people can assume already a lot of the things that will happen, but often probably not in the ways and contexts they might have in their own minds. And they also might not think a lot of things will happen that will...
...Nyct X... won't feature in MNGF at all
Thought this has always been the case and the appearance of characters from other VNs are just cameos. Less of a cross-over and more of fan service. Kinda like a "hey, it's that guy from ___ show" situation.both SoA and MNGF have big - and almost entirely SEPARATE I want to make that very clear - plans
I was going to ask the same thing, I took some away so the updates can rack up, but I'm seeing "after party v.2".....what changed?Was there a new version released?
Generally, I liked it a lot and have no issues with it overall, especially in the context of the story so far.So I'm curious after having a debate elsewhere - how did people feel about the final scene between mc, Vi, ari, and Sai? Were they pissed he was even there? or did it flow well, or what?
I also thought Sai humiliations were a bit much. I mean, I generally don't care that much about that kind of things if it fits the overall story, but MNG is soo careful about the ego of the MC, and in my eyes the game regularly sends the message to the player "it's a very sensitive subject warning". But somehow if it's your friend and not you, the game goes all out in a complete U turn. Weird.That said, I had only one quibble based solely on my own personal preferences: I'm a pretty big fan of all things NTR/NTS (sharing, swinging, cheating, corruption, etc.) and while I don't mind cuck content, I don't care much for the straight humiliation aspect of it. In Sai's case, maybe the extent to which he's into that was (intentionally or unintentionally) misrepresented, but he didn't seem like he was having a great time, and I didn't like that aspect much. Like, Ari leaving him hanging to help Vi with MC was great, and I'm sure he enjoyed *that* aspect of it, but Ari piling on the insults seemed a bit over the top (to me) based on what we know of their relationship to this point.
Youre free to to criticize if you want, but if we are being factual the latest update added around 50 images (you can find them in the two dlc folders with silver in the name) several animations and hundreds of line of script in 2 weeks. Given the quality of said work I find it hard to reason how hed be any faster and I can assure you he was working on it a lot daily.I don't quite understand what I just launched? Why couldn't this "FINAL" update of part 5 be released on May 22 or early April with the supposed DLC about the main character's sister? Are we now going to get pitiful crumbs each time consisting of 5-10 pictures and a script of 5 sentences in 17 font, which fit on one A4 sheet? It seems that free money spoils the developers of such novels.
It's the same scenes, but there is content added to the end of the Anya DLC (starting from the point Rob cums) and the After Party (starting from the point Ari joins Vi). The After Party in particular had a lot of content added/improved.after party V2 have a any new scenes or minor news ?
Generally, I liked it a lot and have no issues with it overall, especially in the context of the story so far.
That said, I had only one quibble based solely on my own personal preferences: I'm a pretty big fan of all things NTR/NTS (sharing, swinging, cheating, corruption, etc.) and while I don't mind cuck content, I don't care much for the straight humiliation aspect of it. In Sai's case, maybe the extent to which he's into that was (intentionally or unintentionally) misrepresented, but he didn't seem like he was having a great time, and I didn't like that aspect much. Like, Ari leaving him hanging to help Vi with MC was great, and I'm sure he enjoyed *that* aspect of it, but Ari piling on the insults seemed a bit over the top (to me) based on what we know of their relationship to this point.
I mean, yeah, he got off in the end, but it almost seemed like mean for the sake of being mean. Some guys love that, and that's great. I'm not convinced Sai's one of them, and that was a bit uncomfortable ... but not enough to ruin the scene.![]()
Yup, those were pretty much my thoughts, on the whole I enjoyed it, but the over-the-top taunting took away from the hotness. It'd be different if Sai was more into it, nervous but cheering them on. For me the sticking point was less Ari taunting and more MC kinda playing the role of a fuckboi getting sucked by a rando's gf, not his best friend's gf.I also thought Sai humiliations were a bit much. I mean, I generally don't care that much about that kind of things if it fits the overall story, but MNG is soo careful about the ego of the MC, and in my eyes the game regularly sends the message to the player "it's a very sensitive subject warning". But somehow if it's your friend and not you, the game goes all out in a complete U turn. Weird.
That being said, if the author has some particular kinks they want to explore (like big dicks vs small peepee(actually average)), I think they should just do it. Very often, a story feels more natural and raw (thus enjoyable to me) if they don't try to cater to any crowd seeing things differently. Devs always do to some degree though, but it's generally better when it's kept to a minimum.
I'll be very honest here, I am not a fan of the Sharing, NTS, and even less NTR themes, in the first place.So I'm curious after having a debate elsewhere - how did people feel about the final scene between mc, Vi, ari, and Sai? Were they pissed he was even there? or did it flow well, or what?