VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.6 Final] [CircleGames]

[Zobra]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face

i was one of those who wanted V to do more with Sai at that moment (BJ) , but actually what you said makes sense & fit perfectly the story & his personality

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai

meanwhile she suck some balls of a Dude she meet after few minutes , i love their chemistry
(hey i'm jk , but let hope we see more fun content with her before she become officially a Pornwhore )

 

[yourmomma]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

Sense in a romantic way maybe.

I can't count the amount of times during a wild night out with the right atmosphere and a few drinks, I've personally had ladies slobbing the nob with zero build up before that night.

Sometimes things just happen, don't need to make sense and everyone is having a good time.

Don't get me wrong I understand what CG is trying to do, but sometimes porn logic works both ways in that unadulterated lust is a bit silly, especiallywith gang bang scenarios, but also realistically during a crazy night out when drinks are in, inhibitions are lowered and the atmosphere is right some women will suck a dick or even fuck it.

 

[fuffek]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

While I totaly understand the aim at that time and I think it was well planned with the exception of the ending where it could have that slight extra playfull tease for Eric and slight extra humilitation for baldy (Sai) that I did explain some time ago, wouldn't have any negative impact on story, it would be simply good finish with focus on those 4 and them playing/exploring together

And with the way chapter 6 went I also feel like now it would make more sense with Baldy receiving more than what I even suggested as slight touch up. It doesn't really feel like it sticks together looking at ch5 and ch6, if it is Bruce then ye it's ok (since she already kinda knows him and was feeling doing things with him) but if it's some porn actor just showing up, it does make you feel like leaning more into Sai receiving more in ch5.

But before ch6 came out the way ch5 ended was completely fine in my opinion, it was well planned, had some connection and reasonable action leading to it and it's ending (even without my suggestion I think it was fine) but ch6 did kinda disconnect it

Does that turn story to shit for me? HELL NO. I still think story is very well made but there are some small things that could get a little bit of fix in my personal opinion.

 

[telly1712]

in my eyes giving Bruce at least a blow job would have been logical after all the teasing Vi did upfront with sending the naughty pictures and with all the naughty intensive sexy talk during the photoshoots...

...Eric was also very aware of this...to suck a complete stranger is for me at least not logical and disturbs story flow...

...but anyhow...it is like it is...

 

[fr3shNh0rNy]

i was one of those who wanted V to do more with Sai at that moment (BJ) , but actually what you said makes sense & fit perfectly the story & his personality


meanwhile she suck some balls of a Dude she meet after few minutes , i love their chemistry
(hey i'm jk , but let hope we see more fun content with her before she become officially a Pornwhore )

He wasn't just some dude , he is a famous porn star and she had a flashback in her mind watching videos with him and maybe that turned her on.

 

[Zobra]

He wasn't just some dude , he is a famous porn star and she had a flashback in her mind watching videos with him and maybe that turned her on.

bro i'm not her for a debate , was just kidding about the "chemistry" lol , who gives shit about "chemistry" btw a porn actor and a future Actress (they fuck , get paid , and move on) , i'm sure he have a "BIG" "chemistry" for her

 

[BingusCollective]

I think until the next chapter with Vi's POV of that scene comes out we don't truly know what happened or what the motivations were. That's half the fun! We only have Ari's retelling and I've got no reason to trust her as a narrator in the scene. More reason to look forward to what comes next.

 

[fr3shNh0rNy]

bro i'm not her for a debate , was just kidding about the "chemistry" lol , who gives shit about "chemistry" btw a porn actor and a future Actress (they fuck , get paid , and move on) , i'm sure he have a "BIG" "chemistry" for her

Well I get you , I am just trying to see her reasoning behind licking his balls there and than , I personally wished it would be Bruce , but then again I hope his time will come as well , cheers.

 

[fuffek]

I think until the next chapter with Vi's POV of that scene comes out we don't truly know what happened or what the motivations were. That's half the fun! We only have Ari's retelling and I've got no reason to trust her as a narrator in the scene. More reason to look forward to what comes next.

That's how it works, now it might feel disconnected and with less sense, later it might be completely reasonable.

 

[PsyDoggo]

I do still think that Vi haven't stopped only sucking some balls and at the end gave full on bj, we'll see it in the POV part.(or I just wish that have happened)From the perspective of climbing the pornstar ladder - interaction with Cendrik will give her a great "head" start.(pun intended)

 

[SymbioticLife]

Sense in a romantic way maybe.

I can't count the amount of times during a wild night out with the right atmosphere and a few drinks, I've personally had ladies slobbing the nob with zero build up before that night.

Sometimes things just happen, don't need to make sense and everyone is having a good time.

Don't get me wrong I understand what CG is trying to do, but sometimes porn logic works both ways in that unadulterated lust is a bit silly, especiallywith gang bang scenarios, but also realistically during a crazy night out when drinks are in, inhibitions are lowered and the atmosphere is right some women will suck a dick or even fuck it.

Didn't really mean it in a romantic sense, the crazy shit happening WAS the double bj on Eric (and Vi allowing it). Usually alcohol just exaggerates/brings out feelings already there, but Vi has never really expressed any particular attraction to Sai - beyond what purpose he serves as a general tease target. And as I've said previously about this - though not in this particular discussion - Vi plays the bad girl sometimes and she plays the good girl sometimes with Eric, there she was playing the good girl concentrating on his pleasure and feeding her own cuckquean fetish.

In terms of Bruce vs Cedrick, as I've seen people bring this up too I also have insight here. Point one is that making it Bruce would have kept the shots to POV, which was limiting for what CG wanted. But more importantly it's a shoot, Cedrick and Vi don't have to have previous chemistry (though unlike with Sai she's sexually attracted to him, both his appearance and his dick) because it's part of a photoshoot as opposed to just completely unscripted sex.

Personally I think it works to keep Bruce the voyeur just a tiny bit longer, he's a camera guy he's used to that role and probably revels in it. Getting to get directly involved after he's seen her in action is likely more his style.

 

[Owlearyn]

Didn't really mean it in a romantic sense, the crazy shit happening WAS the double bj on Eric (and Vi allowing it). Usually alcohol just exaggerates/brings out feelings already there, but Vi has never really expressed any particular attraction to Sai - beyond what purpose he serves as a general tease target. And as I've said previously about this - though not in this particular discussion - Vi plays the bad girl sometimes and she plays the good girl sometimes with Eric, there she was playing the good girl concentrating on his pleasure and feeding her own cuckquean fetish.

In terms of Bruce vs Cedrick, as I've seen people bring this up too I also have insight here. Point one is that making it Bruce would have kept the shots to POV, which was limiting for what CG wanted. But more importantly it's a shoot, Cedrick and Vi don't have to have previous chemistry (though unlike with Sai she's sexually attracted to him, both his appearance and his dick) because it's part of a photoshoot as opposed to just completely unscripted sex.

Personally I think it works to keep Bruce the voyeur just a tiny bit longer, he's a camera guy he's used to that role and probably revels in it. Getting to get directly involved after he's seen her in action is likely more his style.

is it like official info that Vi will become a pornstar eventually? Or CG hasn't specified his plans on it?

 

[Zobra]

is it like official info that Vi will become a pornstar eventually? Or CG hasn't specified his plans on it?

too bad players has no choice on that , i'd love if she become a famous photoshoot model (spicy/nude stuff ) instead of becoming an official hoe , this will kill the nts for me (her situation/environment different from Alice, if you know you know).
ah well , like a friend said , "Let him cook" , who knows , we might like it , we all degenerate after all

 

[Laudu11]

New post??

 

[:-Gordok "-"]

I'm just waiting for the moment when violet gets screwed by some other guy

 

[Illustrivity]

I do still think that Vi haven't stopped only sucking some balls and at the end gave full on bj, we'll see it in the POV part.(or I just wish that have happened)From the perspective of climbing the pornstar ladder - interaction with Cendrik will give her a great "head" start.(pun intended)

She did give a full-on BJ. I can launch the MNGF I have on my computer right now and she does just that. I like to think of it as Chapter 6 Canon Edition.

 

[VolsHazard]

Feels like CG has been posting quite a few DPs recently, wonder if he is testing it for generation, or its a small hint for coming chapters, or it's just random.

 

[Phantom Renegade]

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Feels like CG has been posting quite a few DPs recently, wonder if he is testing it for generation, or its a small hint for coming chapters, or it's just random.

Hi, well if the Dev know what the people need time will come when Violet will have some of that an much more... Haha

PD: Hope to see some Gangbangs and Bukkakes Kokoro breakers hahaha, i cant wait to see the next chapter, the work of this Dev is one of the best you can find for sure.

 

[final form]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

yeah from the devpoint, but the story is so good the male characters that wants to get vi we are rooting for them, we watch their build up, the edging(mainly bruce)("chemistry with sai"sai dirty talks and vi responding while dancing that groping on the dance floor, vi hypnosed by sai's dick inside the club booth giving him hands while ari bj), now a total stranger gets the first action with vi, thats a let down for me

its like showing us whats gonna happen, its coming its coming SIKE! random dude never seen dont know shit about him gets first... if she snapped pictures(camera auto shoot) with bruce that would make sense, form the last dialogue vi was having with bruce and shown her tits to him, the tone of the conversation was really making them to do naughty things vi telling she cant stop listening to his commands etc.... random dude!

its a fumble...5 chapters of edging for vi's first move

the first time all of us was waiting for this moment(fan point of view), we read and follow the story which is really good so far, we are engage with all characters...giving vi any random dick doesnt make us hype just because she got a random dick to suck on, its the story behind of how she got that dick

p.s am just trying to convey what most of us thinks, i know there are a lot of ego who wont agree and argue, am just saying and not flaming anyone

 

[PsyDoggo]

She did give a full-on BJ. I can launch the MNGF I have on my computer right now and she does just that. I like to think of it as Chapter 6 Canon Edition.

Lol I have it too brother.