VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.6 Final] [CircleGames]

[SymbioticLife]

I do personally have the opinion that she should have sucked Sai off after the club.

The setup was right there, and the timing felt right to my mind to start her going a little further. The longer it's put off the more repetitive the story feels and the less the NTS aspects fit imo. Maybe it's just me but I'm not a big fan of ch6 but then I'm not an Ari guy so, for me it was kind of just buildup for two things that didn't end up happening.

That said the tease/delivery balance is a fine one, I just think the game had the balance right up until ch6 and then basically rushed Anya's story only to stall, and backtracked a bit with Vi. I suspect ch7 pt2 should deliver a bit more but that's ages away, so I can't help but feel a little annoyed that for a game that's clearly building to NTS the trajectory lost some steam.

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

 

[TurboKinetics]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, not it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

correct. and realistically with sai being such a cuck he'd get more enjoyment of just watching anyways. that whole scene worked because of all those things interwined. i thouught it was very well thought out.

 

[Zobra]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face

i was one of those who wanted V to do more with Sai at that moment (BJ) , but actually what you said makes sense & fit perfectly the story & his personality

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai

meanwhile she suck some balls of a Dude she meet after few minutes , i love their chemistry
(hey i'm jk , but let hope we see more fun content with her before she become officially a Pornwhore )

 

[yourmomma]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

Sense in a romantic way maybe.

I can't count the amount of times during a wild night out with the right atmosphere and a few drinks, I've personally had ladies slobbing the nob with zero build up before that night.

Sometimes things just happen, don't need to make sense and everyone is having a good time.

Don't get me wrong I understand what CG is trying to do, but sometimes porn logic works both ways in that unadulterated lust is a bit silly, especiallywith gang bang scenarios, but also realistically during a crazy night out when drinks are in, inhibitions are lowered and the atmosphere is right some women will suck a dick or even fuck it.

 

[fuffek]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

While I totaly understand the aim at that time and I think it was well planned with the exception of the ending where it could have that slight extra playfull tease for Eric and slight extra humilitation for baldy (Sai) that I did explain some time ago, wouldn't have any negative impact on story, it would be simply good finish with focus on those 4 and them playing/exploring together

And with the way chapter 6 went I also feel like now it would make more sense with Baldy receiving more than what I even suggested as slight touch up. It doesn't really feel like it sticks together looking at ch5 and ch6, if it is Bruce then ye it's ok (since she already kinda knows him and was feeling doing things with him) but if it's some porn actor just showing up, it does make you feel like leaning more into Sai receiving more in ch5.

But before ch6 came out the way ch5 ended was completely fine in my opinion, it was well planned, had some connection and reasonable action leading to it and it's ending (even without my suggestion I think it was fine) but ch6 did kinda disconnect it

Does that turn story to shit for me? HELL NO. I still think story is very well made but there are some small things that could get a little bit of fix in my personal opinion.

 

[telly1712]

in my eyes giving Bruce at least a blow job would have been logical after all the teasing Vi did upfront with sending the naughty pictures and with all the naughty intensive sexy talk during the photoshoots...

...Eric was also very aware of this...to suck a complete stranger is for me at least not logical and disturbs story flow...

...but anyhow...it is like it is...

 

[fr3shNh0rNy]

i was one of those who wanted V to do more with Sai at that moment (BJ) , but actually what you said makes sense & fit perfectly the story & his personality


meanwhile she suck some balls of a Dude she meet after few minutes , i love their chemistry
(hey i'm jk , but let hope we see more fun content with her before she become officially a Pornwhore )

He wasn't just some dude , he is a famous porn star and she had a flashback in her mind watching videos with him and maybe that turned her on.

 

[Zobra]

He wasn't just some dude , he is a famous porn star and she had a flashback in her mind watching videos with him and maybe that turned her on.

bro i'm not her for a debate , was just kidding about the "chemistry" lol , who gives shit about "chemistry" btw a porn actor and a future Actress (they fuck , get paid , and move on) , i'm sure he have a "BIG" "chemistry" for her

 

[BingusCollective]

I think until the next chapter with Vi's POV of that scene comes out we don't truly know what happened or what the motivations were. That's half the fun! We only have Ari's retelling and I've got no reason to trust her as a narrator in the scene. More reason to look forward to what comes next.

 

[fr3shNh0rNy]

bro i'm not her for a debate , was just kidding about the "chemistry" lol , who gives shit about "chemistry" btw a porn actor and a future Actress (they fuck , get paid , and move on) , i'm sure he have a "BIG" "chemistry" for her

Well I get you , I am just trying to see her reasoning behind licking his balls there and than , I personally wished it would be Bruce , but then again I hope his time will come as well , cheers.

 

[fuffek]

I think until the next chapter with Vi's POV of that scene comes out we don't truly know what happened or what the motivations were. That's half the fun! We only have Ari's retelling and I've got no reason to trust her as a narrator in the scene. More reason to look forward to what comes next.

That's how it works, now it might feel disconnected and with less sense, later it might be completely reasonable.

 

[PsyDoggo]

I do still think that Vi haven't stopped only sucking some balls and at the end gave full on bj, we'll see it in the POV part.(or I just wish that have happened)From the perspective of climbing the pornstar ladder - interaction with Cendrik will give her a great "head" start.(pun intended)

 

[SymbioticLife]

Sense in a romantic way maybe.

I can't count the amount of times during a wild night out with the right atmosphere and a few drinks, I've personally had ladies slobbing the nob with zero build up before that night.

Sometimes things just happen, don't need to make sense and everyone is having a good time.

Don't get me wrong I understand what CG is trying to do, but sometimes porn logic works both ways in that unadulterated lust is a bit silly, especiallywith gang bang scenarios, but also realistically during a crazy night out when drinks are in, inhibitions are lowered and the atmosphere is right some women will suck a dick or even fuck it.

Didn't really mean it in a romantic sense, the crazy shit happening WAS the double bj on Eric (and Vi allowing it). Usually alcohol just exaggerates/brings out feelings already there, but Vi has never really expressed any particular attraction to Sai - beyond what purpose he serves as a general tease target. And as I've said previously about this - though not in this particular discussion - Vi plays the bad girl sometimes and she plays the good girl sometimes with Eric, there she was playing the good girl concentrating on his pleasure and feeding her own cuckquean fetish.

In terms of Bruce vs Cedrick, as I've seen people bring this up too I also have insight here. Point one is that making it Bruce would have kept the shots to POV, which was limiting for what CG wanted. But more importantly it's a shoot, Cedrick and Vi don't have to have previous chemistry (though unlike with Sai she's sexually attracted to him, both his appearance and his dick) because it's part of a photoshoot as opposed to just completely unscripted sex.

Personally I think it works to keep Bruce the voyeur just a tiny bit longer, he's a camera guy he's used to that role and probably revels in it. Getting to get directly involved after he's seen her in action is likely more his style.