VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.6 Final] [CircleGames]

[final form]

Feel like that his has been brought up several times before, but the setup was arguably there for exactly what did happen instead. Ari already talked (multiple times in multiple chapters) about wanting to get with Eric and has already been cucking Sai behind his back, now it was just in his face. Vi for her part... again, part of the whole reason Eric found she watched cuckquean porn in chapter 2 was setup for events just like that. Sai getting more with Vi there would actually have been what would have gone against the dynamics established up to that point, that being that he's the harder NTR narrative, the one the girls are the most dismissive of.

Considering I was a proofreader at the time - but keep in mind that just means I was editing grammar phrasing I wasn't writing any of this - I do have some insight into the whole build up and finale of that arc.

I think moreso than it "making sense" that Vi sucks off Sai there, people simply wanted it to happen which is valid but in the actual narrative up to that point there was little to no sexual chemistry between Vi and Sai. Not like with Vi/Bruce, Vi/Rob, hell even Vi/Sam in their brief meeting. And on the flipside Vi has fetishes of sharing Eric with others and Ari wants the dick so... that was the logical conclusion of that night, especially as Sai already had his fun and Eric had had none.

yeah from the devpoint, but the story is so good the male characters that wants to get vi we are rooting for them, we watch their build up, the edging(mainly bruce)("chemistry with sai"sai dirty talks and vi responding while dancing that groping on the dance floor, vi hypnosed by sai's dick inside the club booth giving him hands while ari bj), now a total stranger gets the first action with vi, thats a let down for me

its like showing us whats gonna happen, its coming its coming SIKE! random dude never seen dont know shit about him gets first... if she snapped pictures(camera auto shoot) with bruce that would make sense, form the last dialogue vi was having with bruce and shown her tits to him, the tone of the conversation was really making them to do naughty things vi telling she cant stop listening to his commands etc.... random dude!

its a fumble...5 chapters of edging for vi's first move

the first time all of us was waiting for this moment(fan point of view), we read and follow the story which is really good so far, we are engage with all characters...giving vi any random dick doesnt make us hype just because she got a random dick to suck on, its the story behind of how she got that dick

p.s am just trying to convey what most of us thinks, i know there are a lot of ego who wont agree and argue, am just saying and not flaming anyone

 

[PsyDoggo]

She did give a full-on BJ. I can launch the MNGF I have on my computer right now and she does just that. I like to think of it as Chapter 6 Canon Edition.

Lol I have it too brother.

 

[TurboKinetics]

Lol I have it too brother.

People got in their feels about it so that got retconned lol

 

[SymbioticLife]

People got in their feels about it so that got retconned lol

Eh, that wasn't why it was changed. CG doesn't care about people "getting in their feels" about something. He just realized he wanted something different for the first full on BJ, as opposed to it being a rather sudden "That happened" sort of thing.

To be honest, I do feel some are somewhat in their feels about it being changed to the point of pretending the change did not happen. I had no issue with the OG (And no complaint was brought up by any proofreader, I don't think any of us really expected the level of outrage over that) but at the same time in retrospect I can see where it could be an improvement to leave it for a separate scene.