VN Ren'Py Abandoned My New Home [v0.3] [AMN]

[single_guy_from_au]

RE:The time I moved in with my new stepmother and her family, then I start to perve and peep on them/ZERO

Fixed it for you.

New Update already! Kudos to the Artist/Developer.

 

[drifter139]

I wanted to let the game reach at least 0.3 before playing it but decided to just give it a try and see how it was going. other than the grammatical errors and some of the plain looking characters, the game is good and the story seems fun. if dev can work on some of the grammatical errors, this game could go pretty far

 

[bobdillan]

NTR/Sharing and foot fetish are avoidable content.

Just... an fyi my guy. Most people that hate that.... ain't gonna care.. and the avoidable to them is avoiding the game.

Peace.

 

[Ghost'']

My New Life [v0.2] Unofficial Android Port + Uncensor Patch

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[Lokitox8]

A patch is coming, gigan has made a patch for version 0.1 and I'm currently modifying it for version 0.2.

Is the story really about a mother or stepmother? I like games with incest but at time I feel people make it weird by making a patch when the stories doesnt go that route. I think I play the first version without a patch and it made more sense that way.

 

[kwiatos]

Is the story really about a mother or stepmother? I like games with incest but at time I feel people make it weird by making a patch when the stories doesnt go that route. I think I play the first version without a patch and it made more sense that way.

This game don't have incest, his mother is dead and his father after her dead have second wife
with 2 daughters, so how ipatch can change te story?

 

[Nerro]

Just... an fyi my guy. Most people that hate that.... ain't gonna care.. and the avoidable to them is avoiding the game.

Peace.

Speak for yourself bro. Most people can play games if a disliked fetish is optional. But keep going to every game with kinks you don’t like and spew this projection bullshit. Seems like a great use of your time

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

Is the story really about a mother or stepmother? I like games with incest but at time I feel people make it weird by making a patch when the stories doesnt go that route. I think I play the first version without a patch and it made more sense that way.

This game don't have incest, his mother is dead and his father after her dead have second wife
with 2 daughters, so how ipatch can change te story?

The patch only changes the context in the intro.

Instead of the MC's mother dying, his parents had just split up and now they're back together.
But the patch won't change the story in any way for those who use it, his mother's death is just a contextual element.

It's the only way I've found not to distort the story, replacing death with a separation, for people who like to play with incest patches.

 

[Kukipett]

Well this is just a quick fuck porn game with forced sex, this first time i refused to see what will happen but right after the next scene just goes on with sex without any choice this time.
Another game wit step sisters you fuck after 5 minutes, i really believe this, it feels so real and accurate to real life.
I don't have any step sister but i'm sure i would have fucked her the first day i met her !
And worse there is a foot fetish and her feets are reall ugly, beeerk !!!

 

[OWSam000]

The patch only changes the context in the intro.

Instead of the MC's mother dying, his parents had just split up and now they're back together.
But the patch won't change the story in any way for those who use it, his mother's death is just a contextual element.

It's the only way I've found not to distort the story, replacing death with a separation, for people who like to play with incest patches.

I think the non-insect version is more suitable for the story.

 

[Myscho]

So you change the name, so thats why i wasnt able find game anymore

 

[Daddy59]

Perfect !! Thanks for All !!

 

[Deleted member 5640726]

Well this is just a quick fuck porn game with forced sex, this first time i refused to see what will happen but right after the next scene just goes on with sex without any choice this time.
And worse there is a foot fetish and her feets are reall ugly, beeerk !!!

Tell me which scene is forced?
If you don't massage Leony at the start you won't get any foot fetish scenes in the game and all the sex scenes give you a choice of whether you want to take part or not.

Another game wit step sisters you fuck after 5 minutes, i really believe this, it feels so real and accurate to real life.
I don't have any step sister but i'm sure i would have fucked her the first day i met her !

Fucking your stepsisters or even fucking every woman the MC sees, yes it doesn't reflect reality.

That's what games are for, inventing stories.

 

[hysepReC]

Just finished playing through the current content and i enjoyed it overall. The girls are attractive (especially Leony) and the sex is frequent. The MC is a bit of a pushover, though and basically just does whatever the girls tell him in the sex scenes. It's all femdom so far. Leony is constantly calling the MC a "good boy" like he's her puppy or something and he mostly just lays there in the sex scene with Emily while she uses him. I did find the scenes hot and there's no humiliation involved but just a warning to people who can't stand any kind of femdom: it's unavoidable.

The only thing i really didn't like was that lesbian kiss in the bathroom, followed by the girls leaving the drunk MC alone to go fuck each other. Wow, thanks girls... guess i'll just sleep on the bathroom floor while you have your fun, then? At least the MC didn't start thinking how hot it was when he saw them kissing. If the relationship between the MC and Leony ever becomes more serious, (and it seems like it could, depending on how you have the MC react when she kisses him) then i hope we aren't going to be forced to share her with her bisexual friend.

But yeah, aside from the lesbian thing, i liked it. The fact that the other guys in the game aren't total douchebags is a plus. The MC seems to have a decent relationship with his brother and Kingston (Leony's boyfriend) is friendly. Definitely worth a try if you like cheating and light femdom.

 

[RR6612]

"WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVES"

It went so well and then you really became that guy.

 

[thousandsun]

The story line and sex scene of Emily are great! Hope to have more scenes with Emily in the future updates

 

[shawnnation]

Would have been interested if real incest instead of step, good luck with it though

 

[Avaron1974]

"WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVE"

Oh dear fucking god......



Even Cringe Kardashian couldn't take it...

 

[ryansFLYIN]

Well......

How do I say this without being that guy.

Go Do Some Real Research on Actual Sexual Fetishes/Topics and then come back and look at the game you are making and then you will understand why the crowd as a whole is so divided and saying to you that Some things Do Not Mix.

Its either NTR or Harem NEVER BOTH and when both are together well.......Devs get destroyed due to the sheer fact there are more Harem Fetish sided preferred people than there is NTR Fetish sided people.

What I am saying is that you really need to listen to the specific type of crowd you are wanting to be lured in but not only that but have the whole draw to want to come back again and again.

I see the comments you write when talking with others and the main issue is you only see it as how you want to do it instead of taking criticism and using that to help develop a understanding for a better overall story/connection with the Reader but You seem to just have this Feeling/Vibe you give us the readers of "Well I respect the opinions but this is my game and I will do as I wish because I want to" And I get it and respect your personal thoughts but you need to remember when creating something for the masses, "WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVES"

So end of the day start to be more Open and Willing to listen to the audience you are showing to but also Understand that we are not here to coddle you and hold your hand in a wholesome way till you finish the story.

End of the day You may Finish the game devolvement but who wants to read it when the topics are ones that the majority of Audience members clash on.

WE All may not fully agree on the whole Fetish Likes & Dislikes scales but we all like to be heard and interacted with (even if you can't talk to us all) for potential changes or reworks or just basic improvements.


Needless to say but some work around some of the M/F areas and maybe flesh things a bit more but I would like to see this plotline come out of its own shadow and make Actual some progress.


PS.
Also Can the MC be Anymore off a Sad Pushover Shlub............
Like I Felt like he was going to start to cry when he was on his cellphone at the mini party.


That Aside,
I Wish You Good Luck With Your Target Audience and the Project.



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Since you seem to have missed an entire conversation on this already...




Harem was removed from the tags.

Also, "WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVES" is cringe as fuck...

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[Deleted member 5640726]

Well......

How do I say this without being that guy.

Go Do Some Real Research on Actual Sexual Fetishes/Topics and then come back and look at the game you are making and then you will understand why the crowd as a whole is so divided and saying to you that Some things Do Not Mix.

Its either NTR or Harem NEVER BOTH and when both are together well.......Devs get destroyed due to the sheer fact there are more Harem Fetish sided preferred people than there is NTR Fetish sided people.

What I am saying is that you really need to listen to the specific type of crowd you are wanting to be lured in but not only that but have the whole draw to want to come back again and again.

I see the comments you write when talking with others and the main issue is you only see it as how you want to do it instead of taking criticism and using that to help develop a understanding for a better overall story/connection with the Reader but You seem to just have this Feeling/Vibe you give us the readers of "Well I respect the opinions but this is my game and I will do as I wish because I want to" And I get it and respect your personal thoughts but you need to remember when creating something for the masses, "WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVES"

So end of the day start to be more Open and Willing to listen to the audience you are showing to but also Understand that we are not here to coddle you and hold your hand in a wholesome way till you finish the story.

End of the day You may Finish the game devolvement but who wants to read it when the topics are ones that the majority of Audience members clash on.

WE All may not fully agree on the whole Fetish Likes & Dislikes scales but we all like to be heard and interacted with (even if you can't talk to us all) for potential changes or reworks or just basic improvements.


Needless to say but some work around some of the M/F areas and maybe flesh things a bit more but I would like to see this plotline come out of its own shadow and make Actual some progress.


PS.
Also Can the MC be Anymore off a Sad Pushover Shlub............
Like I Felt like he was going to start to cry when he was on his cellphone at the mini party.


That Aside,
I Wish You Good Luck With Your Target Audience and the Project.



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As said in the previous message, the Harem tag has been removed and the game will not be a Harem (according to F95zone's definition).

But I never said:
"Well I respect the opinions but this is my game and I will do as I wish because I want to"
If you were there when the very first version came out, you would have seen that I listened to the critics on many things (the avoidable NTR, the avoidable foot fetish, the avoidable sex scenes...).

And the most recent result, the removal of the Harem tag, I've listened to opinions and modified my point of view.

If I hadn't listened to anyone, the NTR tag and Harem tag would still be there, but I was wrong about the definition of Harem.

"WE ARE THE JUDGE, JURY, & EXECUTIONER and WE WILL DECIDE IF THE GAME SURVIVES"

Developer has to make "firm" decisions to make a game that has his vision of things.

Criticism of image quality, spelling, grammar, script, gameplay or dialogue quality I totally understand.

But criticisms of in-game content (fetish for example), the scenario, the characters and their actions are completely different.

These things are there because that's how I created my game, and they'll surely improve in the future, but if I had to change everything as soon as someone criticized me on these subjects, then I'd simply have to hold a vote every week to decide on the game's scenario.

The MC is indeed a boy with no personality who says yes to everything and listens like a dog, but how do you know it won't evolve?

I can understand that it's annoying, but the scenario will evolve, we're only at the beginning of the game so it's normal that it doesn't evolve on this point for the moment.

Once again, I'd like to thank you all for your feedback.
Your criticisms are not ignored, they make me think and question myself in order to offer a better quality game.