HTML My New Mansion [v0.3] [Kestler Games]

[Xo Mo]

As for the grammar/spelling, i had no idea it was so bad to be mentioned in 2 posts already lol. I tried checking everything multiple times and some phrases sounded weird, but not technically wrong. But as you can see, english is not my first language. If you can point out some of the mistakes i made, i'll very much appreciate it and i wil fix them promptly.

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The majority of issues I noticed were the use of "were" instead of "was" (as in 1 person "were" should be "was"), the start of dialogue using "Own" instead of "oh" or "ow" or "now", as well as not capitalizing "i", which is the standard in English.

 

[IdleGuy]

Dang, when I glanced over the thumbnails I thought for a second that OP decided to use different porn stars for once but it's the standard realporn Mom actress but now as a brunette.

 

[Yeezy666]

Good luck on your game, looks good. Cheers

 

[kestlergames]

There are many free services, including

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, an app/website you can copy and paste the text into and it will flag grammar, typos, punctuation, phrasing, etc.

The majority of issues I noticed were the use of "were" instead of "was" (as in 1 person "were" should be "was"), the start of dialogue using "Own" instead of "oh" or "ow" or "now", as well as not capitalizing "i", which is the standard in English.

Thanks, i'll try Grammarly in the future.

As for the "Own" is more of a vocalization of a sound. Like, "Own, so cute." Like the "mow" some japanese characters use in anime to express a little frustration. Get it?

The "I" thing i didn't know, thanks for the info. I'll try to kepe the "was" and "were's" in check.

Thanks again!

Dang, when I glanced over the thumbnails I thought for a second that OP decided to use different porn stars for once but it's the standard realporn Mom actress but now as a brunette.

With the amount of actresses i'm planing to add, i'm sure you will find some new ones. I guarantee it.

Good luck on your game, looks good. Cheers

Thanks!

 

[drifter139]

first time I've seen Sweetie Fox in a game. usually it's the most well known ones

 

[nk0x]

first time I've seen Sweetie Fox in a game. usually it's the most well known ones

honestly a huge draw when I was just looking at the photos on this. She's damn hot and has such a huge amount of content with cosplays and otherwise. She is severely underutilized.

 

[kestlergames]

honestly a huge draw when I was just looking at the photos on this. She's damn hot and has such a huge amount of content with cosplays and otherwise. She is severely underutilized.

I agree. That's why I decided to give her such a big role in the game.

 

[drifter139]

I agree. That's why I decided to give her such a big role in the game.

good on you for going a different route. most real porn games seem to recycle the main girl and it gets tired after awhile. rooting for ya

 

[odbpm]

first time I've seen Sweetie Fox in a game. usually it's the most well known ones

shes in "THE WISH" aswell but that game is grindy af, like think of grinding but x50

 

[Shellheart Master]

Thanks, good game.

 

[Sergellato]

Online version pls bro

 

[Ertito]

Online por favor!!

 

[Hairyhornyhog]

Nice start would like a list of models used, good luck forward

 

[kestlergames]

Nice start would like a list of models used, good luck forward

This is already being added!

Thanks!

 

[skyrfen]

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[kestlergames]

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[Degen003]

vids do not autoplay for is it a me issue ? also you probably should space vids with some sort of fade in/click/delayed text gl dev

 

[Zuul]

As for the "Own" is more of a vocalization of a sound. Like, "Own, so cute." Like the "mow" some japanese characters use in anime to express a little frustration. Get it?

You're describing what's called an onomatopoeia, and that's not how they work. And what you're mistaking for an onomatopoeia with "Own" is the cooing use of "Ooh" or "oooo", there's no N in that phonetic verbalization (in this context, cooing means to make a single open or closed vowel sound).

Also your example isn't an onomatopoeia, or a phonetic sound at all, it's just a normal Japanese word all on its own with an actual meaning. もう (pronounced mō) means "Already", and is the Japanese equivalent of phrases like "Geez".

The Grammarly advice is very much recommended here, since you conflated 3 entirely different things together and added an extra sound to a single sound phonetic.

 

[Tromilka]

As for the "Own" is more of a vocalization of a sound. Like, "Own, so cute." Like the "mow" some japanese characters use in anime to express a little frustration. Get it?

You cannot use "Own" in this way because it is already a word. The standard onomatopoeia for this sound in English is "Ooh"; if you feel this doesn't adequately represent the actual sound you want the character to make you can make up a custom spelling ("Ooowah!" "Unghh!" "Woohm!" or whatever), but it can't match the spelling of an existing word because people aren't going to read that as a vocalization, but as the person saying the word.

If you make up a custom spelling, there's also no guarantee people will understand how you mean it, so you're almost certainly better off using the standard "Ooh."