Avaron1974

Resident Lesbian
Aug 22, 2018
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The reason I can't bring myself to give a shit about the Holly thing is for the reason i've covered before, it's happened too many times in this game.

Holly has probably the only realistic situation that could hit home to people and should have me feeling sorry for her but all I could think was "fucking seriously". 6 times. 6 times we've had to save a woman in trouble, 7 if you want to get technical and throw Holly's sister in too.

What makes it worse, and the reason I stopped giving a shit about the women in trouble, is once again the Mc was made to look dumb as fuck.

He hears the threat on the phone, knows she's in trouble and for the 4th time did absolutely nothing and let someone suffer.

Why 4th?

Allow me to fill in the blanks.

Convict escapes that MC and Karen put behind bars. He knows she's in danger, knows the police are worried and yet does nothing to keep her safe just lets her carry on.

MC notices something on the roof the day Demi was kidnapped, he thinks to himself "i'm going to check it out" .... right at that moment he's offered a fuck so rather than check out the fucking danger he decides sex is a better option.

Let us also not forget that while both Karen and Demi were kidnapped the Mc did nothing and carried on fucking his harem. It only lasted a few days with Karen but it lasted 7 FUCKING MONTHS with Demi.

Then his cousin escapes a life of being pimped out and abused. The cousins abuser turns up and tells the Mc he's going to take her back. The Mc knows she's in danger and knows the guy is looking for her so what does the MC do to keep her safe?

ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOTHING.

He lets her walk around town on her own so she gets kidnapped.

Now we have Holly being threatened and abused. MC hears the threat, knows she's in trouble and what does he do ....... gets up and walks away.

He wasn't directly involved in Morna and Xanthe being in the shit but the constant damsel in distress bullshit has got old.

So no, I can't bring myself to give a shit about Holly because it's been done to death and i'm bored of that particular plot point.

So much lore that can be covered in 2 realms and a massive war going on and this is the storyline the dev keeps running back to.

The worse part is we know it's not the end because we know Parthena and Red Queen are going to get taken, the writing is on the wall at this point and this is the only story the dev knows.

I apologise for the rants but it's fucking infuriating that there is so much going on in the game that can be covered but the dev ignores everything fucking interesting to have yet another women needing to be rescued by an MC that can't keep his women safe.

No wonder his clan was wiped out, he's fucking useless.
 

-CookieMonster666-

Message Maven
Nov 20, 2018
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The reason I can't bring myself to give a shit about the Holly thing is for the reason i've covered before, it's happened too many times in this game.

Holly has probably the only realistic situation that could hit home to people and should have me feeling sorry for her but all I could think was "fucking seriously". 6 times. 6 times we've had to save a woman in trouble, 7 if you want to get technical and throw Holly's sister in too.

What makes it worse, and the reason I stopped giving a shit about the women in trouble, is once again the Mc was made to look dumb as fuck.

He hears the threat on the phone, knows she's in trouble and for the 4th time did absolutely nothing and let someone suffer.

Why 4th?

Allow me to fill in the blanks.

Convict escapes that MC and Karen put behind bars. He knows she's in danger, knows the police are worried and yet does nothing to keep her safe just lets her carry on.

MC notices something on the roof the day Demi was kidnapped, he thinks to himself "i'm going to check it out" .... right at that moment he's offered a fuck so rather than check out the fucking danger he decides sex is a better option.

Let us also not forget that while both Karen and Demi were kidnapped the Mc did nothing and carried on fucking his harem. It only lasted a few days with Karen but it lasted 7 FUCKING MONTHS with Demi.

Then his cousin escapes a life of being pimped out and abused. The cousins abuser turns up and tells the Mc he's going to take her back. The Mc knows she's in danger and knows the guy is looking for her so what does the MC do to keep her safe?

ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOTHING.

He lets her walk around town on her own so she gets kidnapped.

Now we have Holly being threatened and abused. MC hears the threat, knows she's in trouble and what does he do ....... gets up and walks away.

He wasn't directly involved in Morna and Xanthe being in the shit but the constant damsel in distress bullshit has got old.

So no, I can't bring myself to give a shit about Holly because it's been done to death and i'm bored of that particular plot point.

So much lore that can be covered in 2 realms and a massive war going on and this is the storyline the dev keeps running back to.

The worse part is we know it's not the end because we know Parthena and Red Queen are going to get taken, the writing is on the wall at this point and this is the only story the dev knows.

I apologise for the rants but it's fucking infuriating that there is so much going on in the game that can be covered but the dev ignores everything fucking interesting to have yet another women needing to be rescued by an MC that can't keep his women safe.

No wonder his clan was wiped out, he's fucking useless.
I would type more of a reply, but I honestly think there isn't a single point I would disagree with or could elaborate on more. This is basically the post I wanted to make but never knew I needed to make. I guess that means you're a hero? IDK, I get confused by all the definition changing in modern society. LOL.
 

CrazyRabbit

Engaged Member
Oct 30, 2019
2,208
10,589
The reason I can't bring myself to give a shit about the Holly thing is for the reason i've covered before, it's happened too many times in this game.

Holly has probably the only realistic situation that could hit home to people and should have me feeling sorry for her but all I could think was "fucking seriously". 6 times. 6 times we've had to save a woman in trouble, 7 if you want to get technical and throw Holly's sister in too.

What makes it worse, and the reason I stopped giving a shit about the women in trouble, is once again the Mc was made to look dumb as fuck.

He hears the threat on the phone, knows she's in trouble and for the 4th time did absolutely nothing and let someone suffer.

Why 4th?

Allow me to fill in the blanks.

Convict escapes that MC and Karen put behind bars. He knows she's in danger, knows the police are worried and yet does nothing to keep her safe just lets her carry on.

MC notices something on the roof the day Demi was kidnapped, he thinks to himself "i'm going to check it out" .... right at that moment he's offered a fuck so rather than check out the fucking danger he decides sex is a better option.

Let us also not forget that while both Karen and Demi were kidnapped the Mc did nothing and carried on fucking his harem. It only lasted a few days with Karen but it lasted 7 FUCKING MONTHS with Demi.

Then his cousin escapes a life of being pimped out and abused. The cousins abuser turns up and tells the Mc he's going to take her back. The Mc knows she's in danger and knows the guy is looking for her so what does the MC do to keep her safe?

ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOTHING.

He lets her walk around town on her own so she gets kidnapped.

Now we have Holly being threatened and abused. MC hears the threat, knows she's in trouble and what does he do ....... gets up and walks away.

He wasn't directly involved in Morna and Xanthe being in the shit but the constant damsel in distress bullshit has got old.

So no, I can't bring myself to give a shit about Holly because it's been done to death and i'm bored of that particular plot point.

So much lore that can be covered in 2 realms and a massive war going on and this is the storyline the dev keeps running back to.

The worse part is we know it's not the end because we know Parthena and Red Queen are going to get taken, the writing is on the wall at this point and this is the only story the dev knows.

I apologise for the rants but it's fucking infuriating that there is so much going on in the game that can be covered but the dev ignores everything fucking interesting to have yet another women needing to be rescued by an MC that can't keep his women safe.

No wonder his clan was wiped out, he's fucking useless.
Big sis, also know as The Howling Wind of Facts, strikes again.
Everything in this post is true, unfortunately...
 

juan palote

Engaged Member
Dec 5, 2017
2,032
3,861
The MC of this game is one of the worst MCs i have seen in this kind of games, but i feel it was made like that to enable the whole Futa-Demi-NTR story arc, which wouldnt have made sense with a well written MC. The MC has to be an idiot that doesnt care about his women nor has any urge to help them because otherwise he cant keep going for 7 months without caring about his second most important eternal love.

It all comes down to that story arc, which is the cause of the inconsistencies in the whole story. The story itself doesnt mane sense anymore, i dont know why you guys keep trying to.
 
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Crimsonfiend76

Herald - Super Naked Ginger Cuddle Time
Donor
Sep 8, 2020
2,309
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As bad as the writing is, I'm just glad I was able to get that script error fixed so I can follow the inconsistent, illogical narrative and laughable dialogue, without rage quitting due to all the errors popping up in literally every render in Ch. 10. (y)

On a side note, did anyone else notice the slight resemblance between Penny and Xanthe? It seems to me in spite of having Kimi and literally anyone else in her harem to choose from, Allie specifically chose a new 'friend' to bring home and spend the summer break with, having sex with every day....who just happens to look similar to her long lost lover in Ethos.

I also found it interesting just how quickly Adam proposed to Leeta and Tamiqa to be his consorts/wives. I mean, sure I guess the more the merrier, but considering it was the first time he spent any real time with them, he already wanted to elevate Demi's lovers into consort status just so we can avoid any problematic ntr since she insisted they accompany her back from Ethos into Earthrealm.
 
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BigTTiger

Member
May 27, 2021
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The reason I can't bring myself to give a shit about the Holly thing is for the reason i've covered before, it's happened too many times in this game.

Holly has probably the only realistic situation that could hit home to people and should have me feeling sorry for her but all I could think was "fucking seriously". 6 times. 6 times we've had to save a woman in trouble, 7 if you want to get technical and throw Holly's sister in too.

What makes it worse, and the reason I stopped giving a shit about the women in trouble, is once again the Mc was made to look dumb as fuck.

He hears the threat on the phone, knows she's in trouble and for the 4th time did absolutely nothing and let someone suffer.

Why 4th?

Allow me to fill in the blanks.

Convict escapes that MC and Karen put behind bars. He knows she's in danger, knows the police are worried and yet does nothing to keep her safe just lets her carry on.

MC notices something on the roof the day Demi was kidnapped, he thinks to himself "i'm going to check it out" .... right at that moment he's offered a fuck so rather than check out the fucking danger he decides sex is a better option.

Let us also not forget that while both Karen and Demi were kidnapped the Mc did nothing and carried on fucking his harem. It only lasted a few days with Karen but it lasted 7 FUCKING MONTHS with Demi.

Then his cousin escapes a life of being pimped out and abused. The cousins abuser turns up and tells the Mc he's going to take her back. The Mc knows she's in danger and knows the guy is looking for her so what does the MC do to keep her safe?

ABSOLUTELY FUCKING NOTHING.

He lets her walk around town on her own so she gets kidnapped.

Now we have Holly being threatened and abused. MC hears the threat, knows she's in trouble and what does he do ....... gets up and walks away.

He wasn't directly involved in Morna and Xanthe being in the shit but the constant damsel in distress bullshit has got old.

So no, I can't bring myself to give a shit about Holly because it's been done to death and i'm bored of that particular plot point.

So much lore that can be covered in 2 realms and a massive war going on and this is the storyline the dev keeps running back to.

The worse part is we know it's not the end because we know Parthena and Red Queen are going to get taken, the writing is on the wall at this point and this is the only story the dev knows.

I apologise for the rants but it's fucking infuriating that there is so much going on in the game that can be covered but the dev ignores everything fucking interesting to have yet another women needing to be rescued by an MC that can't keep his women safe.

No wonder his clan was wiped out, he's fucking useless.
Maybe the dev has a kidnapping fetish since this game seems to be more centered around women being kidnapped than the actual story, I do realize that you have to have some kind of filler in these games to compliment the main story and set up plot points but at this point it seems all we're playing is kidnap simulator alongside the actual game idk just my 2 cents good game just repetitive with all the kidnapping shit.
 

Adnan1995

Newbie
Sep 12, 2022
17
1
I have been stuck in these I can't not going to lorri path please when I touch lorri text they coming cherri path please can you help me how to fix that
 
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-CookieMonster666-

Message Maven
Nov 20, 2018
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I have been stuck in these I can't not going to lorri path please when I touch lorri text they coming cherri path please can you help me how to do
Since you say "touch" I assume you're on an Android, right? If so, it's possible the touch regions are somehow off a bit. Did you try touching the "Who should I call" text (or around there) to see if it selects the Lorri option? You might also need to reach out to the66 for help, since he did the unofficial port.
I have question have cheepshot discord any server so I can add send me link of this
That might be available only to patrons. I'm not positive, but since it's not on the OP here I assume so.
 

Adnan1995

Newbie
Sep 12, 2022
17
1
Since you say "touch" I assume you're on an Android, right? If so, it's possible the touch regions are somehow off a bit. Did you try touching the "Who should I call" text (or around there) to see if it selects the Lorri option? You might also need to reach out to the66 for help, since he did the unofficial port.

That might be available only to patrons. I'm not positive, but since it's not on the OP here I assume so.
I have been stuck in these I can't not going to lorri path please when I choose to call to lorri they coming cherri path please can you help me how to fix that. Game is my Ordinary Extraordinary Life Screenshot_20220912-173450_My Ordinary Extraordinary Life.jpg Screenshot_20220912-173503_My Ordinary Extraordinary Life.jpg
 

-CookieMonster666-

Message Maven
Nov 20, 2018
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I have been stuck in these I can't not going to lorri path please when I choose to call to lorri they coming cherri path please can you help me how to fix that. Game is my Ordinary Extraordinary Life View attachment 2040265 View attachment 2040266
Arrows are completely unhelpful. I understood exactly what option you were trying to choose. Now, instead of just posting a screenshot and adding arrows, can you answer the questions I asked?
 
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