- Feb 16, 2023
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That ending....
Glad I'm just a pirate - if I'd been paying for this, I'd not just be disappointed, I'd be incensed. Most of the harem was a repeat of the separate ending scenes (though they were all presented as "different" scenes in the gallery), and most scenes were short and not nearly as good as scenes from early on and through the middle of the VN - finale scenes in most VNs I've done were often some of the best. These were just phoned in. The fact that the neighbor MILF didn't get in on the harem action, and leaving Lillian out (except for the summation dialogue) was exceedingly disappointing.
And writing that got worse towards the end was absolutely "junior high boy" in the final two releases. Can't remember whose scene it was, but if they'd said "my pleasure" one more time....
Just a real waste of effort after what started as somewhat promising. They didn't even give an ending to the "dream" element.
Pity.
Glad I'm just a pirate - if I'd been paying for this, I'd not just be disappointed, I'd be incensed. Most of the harem was a repeat of the separate ending scenes (though they were all presented as "different" scenes in the gallery), and most scenes were short and not nearly as good as scenes from early on and through the middle of the VN - finale scenes in most VNs I've done were often some of the best. These were just phoned in. The fact that the neighbor MILF didn't get in on the harem action, and leaving Lillian out (except for the summation dialogue) was exceedingly disappointing.
And writing that got worse towards the end was absolutely "junior high boy" in the final two releases. Can't remember whose scene it was, but if they'd said "my pleasure" one more time....
Just a real waste of effort after what started as somewhat promising. They didn't even give an ending to the "dream" element.
Pity.