gameplay: great
writing: i didn't dislike it... can't say how good it is cuz i don't pay attention to overall writing quality
but... the art is just a bit off imo. specifically:
writing: i didn't dislike it... can't say how good it is cuz i don't pay attention to overall writing quality
but... the art is just a bit off imo. specifically:
- pregnancy: barely visible with most of the clothing options. a big part of this is probably belly shape, i think it's also to do with the shadows/highlights which seem to be somehow darker (lighter for the highlights) when not pregnant. also not sure if the crease should still be there when pregnant... i guess tl;dr it looks like it barely sticks out
- cleavage: now... tbh i wouldn't know but i feel like either the shadows should be darker or the hard line shouldn't be there
- hair... she looks like she has no forehead or something. weirdly enough i don't feel like this is an issue with most of the other girls
- pregnancy chance:100% is quite confusing (it means she's pregnant)
- shame can go negative. not sure if this is intended
- cat ears come in only one color so it might not fit well with hair color
- money and followers increase exponentially so you can get to absolutely ridiculous numbers later on. not really an issue, just kinda funny
- -> and <- instead of → and ← look a bit weird but again no big deal