You aren't wrong, generally writing a story for a game it's always better to have a set plan to begin with so you know the way you are going. As this is my first game, I made the mistake of coming up with the story as I go, which made it a very unsmooth story that jumps around instead of being related.
I'm trying to prepare stories before I start working on the game so it's more fluid, so hopefully it's better in future updates but I totally understand what you are saying, and I'm a beginner so that's the only excuse I can offer for why it's like this.
Hey! Firstly, this is one of the Renpy games I honestly enjoy. I'm not huge on footjobs however, everything else is great! and you have surprised me with the yuri femdom and I just love it. (For obvious reasons).
Also, don't beat yourself up on how you write your story. There are two types of writers, "Pantsers" and "plotters." Since I consider my self more of a writer than a game dev, I'm a "pantser" writer who goes with the flow and writes. If you are like that, nothing wrong with it, you just end up editing more lol.
Anyways, great job so far! I want to ask was I supposed to download the 0.3 that is 400mb or the 200 something? I downloaded the less MG one and there was a strange bug with the girl from reincarnation slime (forgot her name). I'm not sure if there was supposed to be a scene there or not and repeating it or clicking on getting dominated keeps you in the same room but the text changes.
Maybe someone will catch the same bug sadly I cant replay it at the moment but when I do I will try to explain it better.
I hope that makes sense? Anyways, from a guy with a foot fetish (yeah it's weird I'm not huge on footjobs). Keep it up and good luck =D
