Nice art, extra points for making veiny tits. English is good with few mistakes but you could ask someone to correct it.
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@Dotonbori Technologies About your game mystic isle, it looks fine but one question, what if Saki after teleported to mystic isles will end up naked and remain that way and instead of a knight its a naked female warrior who saved her, and they will do lesbian sex in fact maybe the premise should have naked women with no clothing and naked creature so that it will be a visual novel with only naked women and naked creatures making it a nudist sex game and its bisexual. And another thing, you should make naked saki the one i attached to have no glasses and be barefoot when she is naked.
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Thank you for your comment. Are they spelling/grammar mistakes, or typos? English is not my main language.
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New character: the Witch. What do you think?
Looking great! Hopefully she'll have some fun with Saki and a double headed dildo lol
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Don't worry, I have some content in my head for them. It might include tentacles...
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Don't worry my friends, we are still actively working on the game. I hope to release the next big update this month, finishing up the prologue. And after that, sandbox elements will be implemented! I hope you're looking forward to this.
"Yes, do tell me more about yourself."
"Yes, do tell me more about yourself."
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Dotonbori Technologies I know how challenging it is to keep up with a significant release schedule. Are you looking for help? I like the art direction and the premise. In other words, it would be nice to see you succeed.
I'm probably going to wait till this has been worked on for a while longer before I download and try. the available artwork looks good though
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Thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the game.I really love this art style
Thank you! You can help me by providing feedback, so that I can make this game even better. Examples are bugs, or grammatical errors. In terms of team members, I am fine. I have a programmer and artist on my team, so that is good enough for now.
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Thank you very much!
I hope you enjoyed the game.
Thanks!
Dotonbori Technologies I can edit and grammar check. As you gain in size, I recommend a page dedicated to this...
art is really nice, but dialogs are below mediocre. There is basically no buildup. I mean first scnene "show me your boobs I need to regenerate" "oh well I have shown my boobs to uglier guys"
Stuff like this really kills it for me, especially in the beginning there should be some reluctance, maybe even disgust (particularly after he "regenerated"^^) not just moving on as if it's the most normal thing in the world.
Stuff like this really kills it for me, especially in the beginning there should be some reluctance, maybe even disgust (particularly after he "regenerated"^^) not just moving on as if it's the most normal thing in the world.