VN Ren'Py Mystic Isle [v0.1.2] [Dontonbori Technologies]

[zarqupang]

i di see where you are comeing from but on a lesser side there are nymphos who just crave sex.

 

[Dotonbori Technologies]

art is really nice, but dialogs are below mediocre. There is basically no buildup. I mean first scnene "show me your boobs I need to regenerate" "oh well I have shown my boobs to uglier guys"

Stuff like this really kills it for me, especially in the beginning there should be some reluctance, maybe even disgust (particularly after he "regenerated"^^) not just moving on as if it's the most normal thing in the world.

Thank you for your feedback. Saki is a character who does not mind to do these things, she is not shy about it, and enjoys it. Enjoying sex and being used is what she likes, so she is not disgusted by it.

 

[LewdKitty87]

I really like the art style and the female protagonist angle is intriguing. Excellent work, dev!

 

[Dotonbori Technologies]

I really like the art style and the female protagonist angle is intriguing. Excellent work, dev!

Thank you very much, I appreciate that a fellow developers takes the time to comment on my game. I wish you the best of luck with the further development of your own game!

 

[Dotonbori Technologies]

Working on a stat allocation screen. When you start the game, you can set these stats. It will make certain things easier!

 

[Dotonbori Technologies]

New scene incoming!



Oh, and Saki has a nice new outfit.


What do you think?