Ren'Py Abandoned Mystic Ville [Ch.3] [FruityChoco Studio]

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Mint-ER#

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FruityChoco Studio said:
Hey, thank you for the feedback! :giggle:

I'm planning on adding more choices in the future but how do I explain it... hm... it's like we're not "done" with the prologue yet, so really can't do much with the branches yet. I'd definitely consider conversation variations though, but for more serious paths / story branches, probably would be starting from chapter 5 where the "prologue" really ends and everything has just really started.

So basically, we're still in the prologue... a 4 chapter long prologue that is... (I'm so sorry... :censored:)
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Luckily your artwork is sexy as FUCK so you will naturally be given a lot of leeway. You can always edit down your text later if you need to do so. But we all know deep down its always better make the chapter good enough and feature complete, before you start worrying about trying to make it perfect or what we are going to think about it.

I admit Rachels creamy, sticky, saggy tits worked wonders and did a LOT to make up for the long dialogue scenes leading up to that smut.

Ill be looking for your next update!
 
FlamesOfVengeance

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The art looks godly but I'm not sure if I'm vibing with the visual novel approach as well as the chapter releases :unsure: I haven't tried the game yet but I usually prefer to have more freedom in a game where I can decide myself what I do and when I do it. Still, just because of the art I might give it a go at some point.
 
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AmIaRobot

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Wow, this game is the most visually stunning VN I've ever seen.
Beautiful UI, character design, and even animations for effects.
So much love has been put into it.

The writing is... not necessarily bad, but realllly dragged out. Especially the character building part.
There are a lot of banter (not all) that are very generic/cliche that doesn't really build up the character.
I found myself smashing down spacebar with both hands after awhile...
Probably the weakest point of the game.

Sound effects are... lacking, but that's minor.

I actually just played a game that is opposite of this game, which is called "Master Rune".
That game had EXCEPTIONAL writing, but mediocre art and UI.

I can only dream what would happen if you combine the art of this game and writing of that game...
 
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Deboksi

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I will never understand the mindset of going butt naked on someone, spreading pussy lips not feeling shit. Then having an accidental teeth smashing kiss and getting embarassed over it. Or having steaming hot sex withouth flinching, but getting lobster faced over "called by name withouth honorifics".
I know its a cultural thing but c'mon, i dont live in a place where sex is lax either.
No way in hell this is still a thing in Japan.
Thats why i dont touch anime even with a 6ft pole.
Every time i see "lewd magazine under the bed" troupe i cringe and close the damn thing.
I type "porn", 3 billion result show up.

Having said that even with the suffocating amounts of "parody" writing, i enjoyed my time. Game keeps you intrigued, even if you wanna skip some dialogue and occasionally make you facepalm.

Keep up the good work lad, I really enjoyed depressing ,yet too real parts where he speaks about his mom, his old life etc. More of that please.
 
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Sandstorm 99

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I don't know what's the problem with the writing so far?
I myself enjoyed reading it and didn't find anything wrong (yah it's a bit long but it's amusing to read from start to finish).
Not sure but I think People who are coming for a quick wank are the ones dissatisfied here.
 
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Leks Darkmind

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FruityChoco Studio said:
Chapter 3 is out everyone!
Thread is updated!
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so. let me start with things that you can fix easily.
no exit game button in game menu.
main menu animation is not skippable.
now to content.
i used fast skip for a minute. and i'm still in prologue. your game premise fits 1 sentence, how did you came to decision to drag it for hours?
so, nope, you didn't cut irrelevant and boring parts out nearly enough.
 
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FruityChoco Studio

FruityChoco Studio

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Leks Darkmind said:
so. let me start with things that you can fix easily.
no exit game button in game menu.
main menu animation is not skippable.
now to content.
i used fast skip for a minute. and i'm still in prologue. your game premise fits 1 sentence, how did you came to decision to drag it for hours?
so, nope, you didn't cut irrelevant and boring parts out nearly enough.
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Thanks for the critique.
- Exit game button, I totally forgot about that, I never play Ren'Py games in full-screen myself, so I usually just press the X button on the window, on Android I just go to home and close the app like I usually close apps. But... I'll add it.
- Not skippable animations, I'll look into it, if I can't skip it then I'll just revert it to the old design.
- Prologue, Well, back to the text editor it is, I'll do a run-over.
 
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Eagle1900

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hi, I wanted to know if by downloading chapter 3 now, is it also inclusive of the previous chapters?
Or where can I find them?
Thank you and good day.(y)
 
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