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which? family or twins?Seems he lives next door to the folks in The Awakening...
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That's the part that reminds me the most about Mythic Manor, the MC is clearly a mysterious, unknown type of whatever-these-get-called, and has a vague aura that attracts women to him and allows them to share him around with little to no drama.
Also we learn that Hedi, the lawyer Hanks assistant, is one third of a set of triplets, and that her sister Charli is sweet, and Tootsie is a "crazy bitch."
Edit: also it's real fucking dumb Hank is like, before your parents put you in an orphanage they set up a big trust fund with me to manage until you turn 18, while I do know who they are, I'm not going to tell you, also they're dead. So why not tell him Hank, they're fucking dead, what would it matter if he knew. Are they the parents from Chasing Sunsets and Eric is secretly a bridging half-sibling to its MMC and FMC? we demand answers CNG
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Well... it's bad. I felt like I was playing a worse version of SA.
Same MC, but Frank had understandable inhibitions about relationships because the LIs were his daughters. Here, a girl blatantly comes on to the MC, and he says she's like a sister to him — but in his head, he's thinking she's hot. And that same conversation repeats over and over again.
Same harem, but in SA it was somewhat justified. Here it's just shoved down your throat because... magic(?). Pathetic.
Same animations — they were all in SA. Here, the LI just has a tail and red skin.
Same MC, but Frank had understandable inhibitions about relationships because the LIs were his daughters. Here, a girl blatantly comes on to the MC, and he says she's like a sister to him — but in his head, he's thinking she's hot. And that same conversation repeats over and over again.
Same harem, but in SA it was somewhat justified. Here it's just shoved down your throat because... magic(?). Pathetic.
Same animations — they were all in SA. Here, the LI just has a tail and red skin.
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Then don't choose that version of the VN. Does knowing that the renders exist bother you that much if you don't have to see them? Literally the second choice you make.
Right, isn't it? But here at least you can opt out. I often wander when I look at the updates on the forum if some good graphics, and stories for some games I'm missing just because I don't like this type of kink. The option to disable futa is not advertised for most of the games. Here the tag is not present yet, but this game I wouldn't skip just because of the other game of CNG.
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not bad, bit bland start, bit odd chars. delphine's pants are like 2nd skin.
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Not a bad beginning. If all of the sex scenes are like the one that ended the intro, then this is going to be one smokin' AVN on that front.
Since I'm an older, wiser, contemplative, intellectually superior individual with a functioning conscience and a preference for relationships versus "hit 'em all and worry about things later" type, I don't mind the mental and verbal back and forth. Anyone with the attributes I listed will do much the same. I think a big problem folks have with CNG and the thought process dialogue is that what takes a half second or less in your head takes a couple or three to read, and all of that adds up. They just want to get to the sex, so they should use the "skip unseen text" function and just quit their bitching.
Pretty cool premise, and for a moment I thought we had some crossover dancers, but I think it was my mind playing tricks.
In this, and the other VN, sometimes the "canon" route makes me scratch my head. Why would "canon" be calling Sera a devil, when calling her beautiful, results in you getting your clothes back, instead of being left in the park naked, and endearing yourself to her? Maybe being naked sets up a conflict or funny scene, and that's fine, but it seems counterintuitive. That's the one thing on the WT I had a problem with, so I have a few iterations, a couple of which leave you clothed at the end of the chapter.
As for other things, I may have failed to capture some early ones, but here are some typo/grammar items I noted in case any CNG folks happen to be around, or if someone wants to share on the discord.
Again, maybe not have captured some earlier ones, but this was everything I saw from the point of the first posted, on. With my route choices, I should have gotten all dialogue from that point.
Since I'm an older, wiser, contemplative, intellectually superior individual with a functioning conscience and a preference for relationships versus "hit 'em all and worry about things later" type, I don't mind the mental and verbal back and forth. Anyone with the attributes I listed will do much the same. I think a big problem folks have with CNG and the thought process dialogue is that what takes a half second or less in your head takes a couple or three to read, and all of that adds up. They just want to get to the sex, so they should use the "skip unseen text" function and just quit their bitching.
Pretty cool premise, and for a moment I thought we had some crossover dancers, but I think it was my mind playing tricks.
In this, and the other VN, sometimes the "canon" route makes me scratch my head. Why would "canon" be calling Sera a devil, when calling her beautiful, results in you getting your clothes back, instead of being left in the park naked, and endearing yourself to her? Maybe being naked sets up a conflict or funny scene, and that's fine, but it seems counterintuitive. That's the one thing on the WT I had a problem with, so I have a few iterations, a couple of which leave you clothed at the end of the chapter.
As for other things, I may have failed to capture some early ones, but here are some typo/grammar items I noted in case any CNG folks happen to be around, or if someone wants to share on the discord.
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Ok thanks for answering, one question Heidi is the blonde with the bun and with that the question is: Isn't she the same one that appears in the other game when they go to see the lawyer the MC and Abby?
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It's Hedi, not Heidi, and there is a Hedi in SA that I believe is the lawyer's assistant. I don't think I have a save anywhere near that scene to confirm, but she is defined in the script. Seeing her and the name of the attorney, I thought they were the same person as well.
There are.
Thanks for letting me know.
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Yes, and you see the family and friends meeting at the beginning of the game, and it also means Frank and Abby's lawyer is your lawyer, and pretty sure they visited that coffee shop once or twice (or it's in another game, not sure about that part) and the Judge and family are in the coffee shop too.
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So, the MC of SA is going to fuck the blonde and also this MC, well according to the options if you choose the cabin, in SA, she will be there or am I wrong?
I'm not meaning to run this game down, but trying to be funny about nitpicks I have, they're like 30% serious. I gripe because I do like what I've played of this and Single Again and try to keep my criticism constructive, though I can't speak for how anyone interprets the gripes.
I want to reiterate again that Eric is dumber than Frank. I hate his dumb haircut and I hate that he has a chat portrait and that it's the back of his head every time. Same sex animations reused in what seems to be 99% of games that use DAZ3D, which I understand, every dev either purchasing or pirating the same animation library. (ok this wasn't really constructive) maybe Moonbox has it right to eschew animations.
Not just Ellie's pants, you can see Eric's fucking 8-pack and cum gutters through his polo.
I figured when CNG was going to make this to stay on the safe side of patreon's content rules that we'd still get a harem of found/faux family women, but I didn't expect them to hew so close to the "bones" of Single Again's narrative styling. I think my strongest critique that comes from a negative impression is the comparison I made earlier that this feels like a mashup of Mythic Manor and Single Again, and I ain't seeing no Esther, and I doubt that Hecate in the previews is going to cut that particular kink mustard.
Not entirely fair to go at this small debut so hard maybe, but this is a VN out of necessity to maintain a presence on the largest crowdfunding site and it feels like it?
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Edit 3: the name of his cafe is gross
I want to reiterate again that Eric is dumber than Frank. I hate his dumb haircut and I hate that he has a chat portrait and that it's the back of his head every time. Same sex animations reused in what seems to be 99% of games that use DAZ3D, which I understand, every dev either purchasing or pirating the same animation library. (ok this wasn't really constructive) maybe Moonbox has it right to eschew animations.
Not just Ellie's pants, you can see Eric's fucking 8-pack and cum gutters through his polo.
I figured when CNG was going to make this to stay on the safe side of patreon's content rules that we'd still get a harem of found/faux family women, but I didn't expect them to hew so close to the "bones" of Single Again's narrative styling. I think my strongest critique that comes from a negative impression is the comparison I made earlier that this feels like a mashup of Mythic Manor and Single Again, and I ain't seeing no Esther, and I doubt that Hecate in the previews is going to cut that particular kink mustard.
Not entirely fair to go at this small debut so hard maybe, but this is a VN out of necessity to maintain a presence on the largest crowdfunding site and it feels like it?
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According to the official walkthroughs of SA, the cabin vacation choice will make Hedi a bangable option for Frank.
Edit 3: the name of his cafe is gross
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Although I like SA a bit, honestly things and content are very forced, the truth is if there was an option to reject Abby, I would take it without thinking, also It's that no matter how much you reject Beth, in the end when they end up in the sauna with Becca, she admits that Frank and Beth have slept together. Also Becca's obsession with her Lil is sick and according to her she's not a lesbian, ha! just like Abby is really annoying and together the obsession between them is annoying and according to them they are not lesbians and want cock, Those bitches just want a walking dildo when they're tired of eating carpets, lol.
I could go on like this, but let's move on to this MD game, so Hedi is going to be the bitch who swings between MC
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Yeaaaaa ... I had that thought too. Maybe this is forewarning for people who want to avoid banging her? She presumably will be an option, not forced, and maybe even will tell us she's not interested in "being with one person" before anything happens, and this gives players an early look if they play ... but yea, I had that thought.
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Honestly it's a waste, maybe instead of Hedi in SA, they should choose the Violet-haired girl, but the waitress at the bar or the little clothes saleswoman, even the redhead from the gym, I forgot their names