Well, it's cyberpunk (not the game, the genre) so I'm all up in that caboose.
The setting is interesting, visuals and feeling fit great. Choice of music is definitely a strong point and adds to the atmosphere a lot.
The girls are all attractive and likeable.
MC doesn't seem to be a total douche-nozzle, which is always greatly appreciated, although we don't know much about him yet.
It feels a bit rushed though. Like a guy who just had the most momentous day of his life, but only has two minutes to tell you about it. Take a bit of time to make us feel the scope and gravitas of the situation, it would add a lot of immersion. They just found a frickin' stargate for pete's sake, but everyone goes about it like it's just another thursday.
A couple of typos and misused words, nothing that can't be easily fixed.
Textures are a bit rough at times, the dick texture in the Spider scene comes to mind.
The biggest weakness of the game though are the animations. They look like a lenticular card. If you don't have the skill (yet) or the time to create good ones, don't put them in. They drag down the overall quality level from quite good to barely passable.