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Arrdvark

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Saf-Tea It is amazing how well you've researched the psychological aspects, even if they are exaggerated for the sake of the story. However, I did find a mistake.

During the quiz, the first question is about "Maslow's hierarchy of needs". For the answer, you had the details correct (food, water, clothing, etc.), but the character stated the answer as "psychological" when it should be "physiological".
 
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Saf-Tea

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Saf-Tea It is amazing how well you've researched the psychological aspects, even if they are exaggerated for the sake of the story. However, I did find a mistake.

During the quiz, the first question is about "Maslow's hierarchy of needs". For the answer, you had the details correct (food, water, clothing, etc.), but the character stated the answer as "psychological" when it should be "physiological".
Hey Arrdvark, ya some people caught this, it's one of my most annoying slip ups. Every time I was proof reading through it, my brain was saying physiological haha. It has been corrected on my end and will be fixed in the next update.
 

Aadbc

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Finally found the time to finish the update. Just amazing. Exceeded my already high expectations of the game. Question: once Naomi is tamed, will the MC bring her back to school to interact with the world?
 
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Saf-Tea

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Finally found the time to finish the update. Just amazing. Exceeded my already high expectations of the game. Question: once Naomi is tamed, will the MC bring her back to school to interact with the world?
Glad you enjoyed it! As for your question, you'll have to wait and see ;)
 
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Hanzpeter1774idnwn

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so i have an idea. I like the game its something diffrent then most and its fun to play. Maybe you could create like a twitter account or something. it would be an easy way to let people know about new updates and small little things without having to look through the comments of this thread. i also doubt that people would care if you arent really active. just a post like once a month or something that is like a little progress update
 
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Aadbc

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I know you are not in it for the money but hear me out.

Of course it comes to personal taste, but for me this game is better than all the game I'm paying for and I want to support it.

And more importantly, you don't have to pocket the money if you don't want to/need it. Instead, you can spend it on the game such as voice acting for characters,which will be a dream come true.
 
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Saf-Tea

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so i have an idea. I like the game its something diffrent then most and its fun to play. Maybe you could create like a twitter account or something. it would be an easy way to let people know about new updates and small little things without having to look through the comments of this thread. i also doubt that people would care if you arent really active. just a post like once a month or something that is like a little progress update
Hmm, I've noticed a couple people asking me to make a discord or a twitter. Im not much of a social media person but I'll have to think on it.

While I ponder that, just as an FYI I do post bi-weekly on my itch.io page with dev log updates, in case you want to see my progress and general thoughts on the novel!
 

kmaro

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I actually had to look that acronym up but yes absolutely there will be some ass to mouth action.
Great!

I don't know if you played these games but they can inspire about "ass to mouth" action with girl's enslavement:
Defending Lydia Collier - Steph way is rly cool here (BDSM,ATM,DATM and other kinkies with good dialogies)
ATM Adventures - it's all about ATM, but mb too crazy for u, especially after middle of the game)

I'll be looking forward to you exploring these genres!
 
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Amourning

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Damn, but this game is good. The only frustrating part is getting cut off so subjectively soon - can't wait for the next acts!
 
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Saf-Tea

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Great!

I don't know if you played these games but they can inspire about "ass to mouth" action with girl's enslavement:
Defending Lydia Collier - Steph way is rly cool here (BDSM,ATM,DATM and other kinkies with good dialogies)
ATM Adventures - it's all about ATM, but mb to crazy for u, especially after middle of the game)

I'll be looking forward to you exploring these genres!
Classics! These have been on my reading backlog for a while, I'll have to move them up the list.
 
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mok135

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The game is great! The writing is very competent and actually interesting to read. The main girl looks fantastic and I like her personality - she is a bit bitchy, but is naive enough that it is not annoying. It is easy to sympathize with her current plight despite her previous actions. Don't have much to say about the main character, but it is not really important for this kind of game - the main girl should be the focus. I am beyond happy that there is already plenty of anal content so early in the game. Can't wait more of it in the future!
 
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