VN Ren'Py Naomi: Breaking the Queen Bee [Act 2 P1] [Saf-Tea]

[Saf-Tea]

Wrote a dev log post about the bug, found here

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Let me if the bug makes the novel unreadable for anyone and I'll push out a hot fix.

 

[Tony Halls]

This game really is shaping up to be the next best corruption game out there

 

[Saf-Tea]

Saf-Tea Do you plan to continue the story in the same universe after finishing Naomi — something like five acts of Naomi, then season 2 ‘Lexi’ with another five acts, etc.? Or maybe something happening during Naomi, where the Teacher takes over the whole school, but that wouldn't end his story — because if he takes over the school, then why not the whole city...? Or will you just move on to something else entirely? I know this question might be a bit premature, and maybe you haven’t even thought about it yet (or don’t want to spoil anything), but in my opinion, the game has real potential (interesting story and characters, polished animations, and unique fetishes).

Great question. All I can say for now is that Naomi will be a self-contained story. Whether I pursue a sequel, spin-off, or something else entirely, it's still too early to say.

 

[doccop63]

Gallery Unlocker

Description: This will unlock all the scenes for the gallery.

Installation: Unpack the "gallery_unlock.zip" and place the file "gallery_unlock.rpy" in your "Game" folder.

Uninstall: Since this mod does not replace any game files, to uninstall, simply remove "gallery_unlock.rpy" and "gallery_unlock.rpyc" from your "Game" folder.

Note:

Download:

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Pixeldrain

My laptop says that it's suspicious. It's never said that before. It has alerted me that a dl was infected and quit but never this.

 

[Dodzh]

My laptop says that it's suspicious. It's never said that before. It has alerted me that a dl was infected and quit but never this.

is a simple zip file with an rpy file in it; the rpy has only two lines of code. not sure why your laptop is giving you a problem

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[wwgwa]

Saf-Tea I found a small funny oversight

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[Saf-Tea]

Saf-Tea I found a small funny oversight

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She quick reloaded.

Nice catch, I'll re-render that. I need to rope you guys into beta testers to catch these small things haha

 

[Dodzh]

She quick reloaded.

Nice catch, I'll re-render that. I need rope you guys into beta testers to catch these small things haha

unlimited ammo glitch

 

[DrmedKane]

Wow, absolutely insane Second act so far!! Love the petplay theme. Would love to have the option for him to transform her into a dog if at all planned or possible.

These next 4-6 months are going to be long. Thank you for doing this!

 

[jacky73489]

Great game! look forward to the Act 3!

 

[SomeDudeInABasement]

You can really see this is extremely well researched and I kinda somewhat think that Saf-Tea and Bottomless Pit are the same person irl.

The psychology aspects are all real concepts exaggerated for fiction.


My main critique: I really really hate narration in AVN's. Of any kind. And flashbacks.

Though to be fair. The Flashback in this game really worked extremely well because it shows Naomi is pretending.

For Narration I find it irritating because in a medium like a AVN it is unnecessary because you HAVE the visual part. You can show don't tell.
Its different for literal novels where descriptions of actions and entities are necessary.


I don't want to write a review yet because we are so early in the story. But so far5/5.

 

[Rozhok]

I wonder if there are going to be other characters added to the dungeon in the future, could be interesting.

ha! nice one

 

[Saf-Tea]

You can really see this is extremely well researched and I kinda somewhat think that Saf-Tea and Bottomless Pit are the same person irl.

The psychology aspects are all real concepts exaggerated for fiction.


My main critique: I really really hate narration in AVN's. Of any kind. And flashbacks.

Though to be fair. The Flashback in this game really worked extremely well because it shows Naomi is pretending.

For Narration I find it irritating because in a medium like a AVN it is unnecessary because you HAVE the visual part. You can show don't tell.
Its different for literal novels where descriptions of actions and entities are necessary.


I don't want to write a review yet because we are so early in the story. But so far5/5.

I appreciate hearing the feedback! I hear what you are saying on the narration and I generally agree with you. Without trying to spoil anything, the narration is purposeful to the plot, which if I do my job right, will make sense once the story is complete. Would love to hear if your opinion changes after Act 5

Also, who knows, have you ever seen me and Bottomless Pit in the same room?

 

[RockkoHunt]

good game
need more humiliation scene

 

[RockkoHunt]

when is the new update coming ?

 

[Saf-Tea]

when is the new update coming ?

This last update took 4 months and was a pretty chunky one. My goal is 4-6 months between releases but quality comes first! Also, depends on real life stuff (family, work,etc).

 

[projenkostarlic]

Looking forward to the next one!

 

[SomeDudeInABasement]

I appreciate hearing the feedback! I hear what you are saying on the narration and I generally agree with you. Without trying to spoil anything, the narration is purposeful to the plot, which if I do my job right, will make sense once the story is complete. Would love to hear if your opinion changes after Act 5

Also, who knows, have you ever seen me and Bottomless Pit in the same room?

I have never seen you period.Maybe this game is secretly a autobiography and you are a hot chick with twin tails or a psychology teacher that has two hot slave submissives? ;D

 

[hanaisbestgirl]

Excellent update! Thanks for the specific optional fetish content.

 

[RockkoHunt]

i really hope this game have more petplay scene