I said it before and I repeat myself. this guy needs to sit down and write a cohesive story, otherwise this is going to implode in his hands.
He is just improvising scenarios, moving from place to place, it a way it makes no sense and also breaks the story. This maskerade club makes absolutely no fucking sense for a woman who doesnt know what a "spicy selfie" was 2 days ago. But at the same time this woman was doing hot wife stuff and drugs, but then she became a conservative mother who hadnt drink in decades, but then she goes to an orgy club...
Come on! Make it coherent. I dont know who Susan is, you are all over the place. Start with small corruption, small situations, end up with drugs and orgies. This all and nothing destroys the MC and the novel with it, she seems to have no personality at all, just an empty vessel moved around.
Stop and write a cohesive story, stop doing a salad of fetiches all over the place with no coherent storyline at all.