Might as well make this a kinetic novel, since there's no real choices. You just click "view available jobs" and take the next one. You don't fight any of the bandits in turn-based combat or anything. You can't refuse any of the women. You can't turn things around and dominate Erza. At this point, the clicking only slows things down. It's so pointless to even have these "options." The closest thing to an actual choice is when you can "chat to guild members," you can choose to see that scene first, or take the next job first. And both bandit groups have women, and you have lust magic, but you're forced to use it on the dudes?
Easy way to massively improve this already: in the first encounter, rather than having the player automatically say he'll handle the guys on the right, give the player the choice, and if we pick left, the female bandits get horny and we fuck them.
Give us actual choices, or this is basically a 0/10 VN... I'll give it a 1/10 actually, just because the character models are decent and the scenes are, too... but the point of a VN rather than a KN is CHOICES. So I can't give it more than that. Though, it's probably like an 8/10 KN if you just remove the pointless clicking and label it kinetic, instead.