Well, this is my kind of NTR, but my main, sort of complain with this VN, and I hope the dev sees my comment, is that the dev didn't developed the relationship between the MC and his girlfriend like at all, except some backstory, there's no present day development. I mean, within the first 15 min of gameplay, we meet the antagonist and, look, I'm not some relationship guru or a psychologist, but being an NTR game there should've been more focus on the rel between the MC and his girlfriend, before introducing the antagonist. Overall the game\VN is really good, I hope it gets finished and I hope the dev makes similar projects.
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You clearly don't understand.
My answer can address it the same way as your as I stated already the question was not obvious. I never said I always understand more than others, but in this case I know that I understand more than you.
You see... same words can have different meaning to different people. Lets take for example a word DOG: one person will imagine Bulldog, but another person will imagine Chihuahua - and guess what? both will be CORRECT!
Now I don't like that I praised your opinion (by telling I sign with it and giving a Like) but you in return just kicked my opinion, so I will revoke my like as thank you. You should be focusing on good side, but insisted on bad. Take a breath.
Apparently the person with question gave both of us a LIKE, meaning useful to him. LIKE matters!
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This is a huge problem.
It works fine for games like SAO NTR online, due to the fact that it's using pre-existing characters. But for a completely fresh new game you need to spend time developing the relationship for any NTR to have ample emotional weight. It's writing 101.
If the dev doesn't even care about the relationship between the main characters, why should we the readers?
The dev needs to read more Japanese NTR content. This will at least let him have the basics down before trying his hand in creating a game. You can literally just copy the story structure of some of the other thousands of NTR games out there, instead of going your own way.
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Thats how a first release should be done and not like all the 0.0.1 demos with 5 minutes of content.
For you perhaps. I'm fine with it, and judging by the game having 32 (positive) reviews and 51 patreons within less than 10 days of first release (an amazing pace), the majority don't find this a "huge" problem at all.
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It's good and great qualities making people like it doesn't mean it couldn't be better.
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We've all seen couple bonding scenes. They're pretty vanilla and are really time wasters in a game like this. People want to get to the meat of the story. I really don't think it adds to the level of corruption as much as one might think.
The Dev put up the relationship scale on the GF tracker to establish a baseline and the measure of the story rests in how fast and how much the antagonist surpasses that.
Players nowadays don't want to use their imagination for anything...they want the Dev to explain in every single detail as possible why the MC FMC or antagonist did something or their reasons to doing what they did.
Hell, i don't know how the couples relationship was before the start of the game but i like to think that maybe they were childhood friends then high school sweethearts. They were on and off during their first years of college then decided that their best interests reside on being together. Use your imagination ladies and gentlemen!
Hell, i don't know how the couples relationship was before the start of the game but i like to think that maybe they were childhood friends then high school sweethearts. They were on and off during their first years of college then decided that their best interests reside on being together. Use your imagination ladies and gentlemen!
Totally disagree. It's far more impactful when you see a girl sucking a strange dick after spending hours with the boyfriend.
In fact, I'd argue people who don't want the time spent on relationship setup are less ntr or cheating enthusiasts and more just enjoyers of general voyeurism, they like watching sex acts, nothing wrong with that, I'm certainly in that camp at times.
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There's some credence to what you say. There is a jolt when that happens. The thing is that, in a project like this, It would take forever to get the reader to truly buy into the first relationship enough for that jolt to occur, otherwise, it's just a gal going from one cock to the next.
In Family Friends and Strangers the MC sees his mother getting handled by the cops on the street and at the cop shop, and you get that jolt even though you just met all the characters. I'm of the mind that we all understand traditional relationships and when they've been violated easily enough without needing all the buildup.
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OK, few things after playing through current version...
One, the visuals are great. No complaints there.
Two, the pacing in general is well done.
Three, the gameplay seems a bit lacking? There doesn't seem to be any way to cause a branching path, or a delay in the corruption. Feels like we're being railroaded into kinetic novel territory.
I'm not complaining, just not sure if this is going to be addressed later.
It's a great ride, though.
Edit: Oh, it is a kinetic novel. Carry on, then.
One, the visuals are great. No complaints there.
Two, the pacing in general is well done.
Three, the gameplay seems a bit lacking? There doesn't seem to be any way to cause a branching path, or a delay in the corruption. Feels like we're being railroaded into kinetic novel territory.
I'm not complaining, just not sure if this is going to be addressed later.
It's a great ride, though.
Edit: Oh, it is a kinetic novel. Carry on, then.
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Completely disagree with everything you said. 99% of people making porn games don't have the writing chops to make "hours" of bonding scenes compelling. I've seen genuinely good-written games try it, and it's just tedious, if I wanted to boot up a game to read hours and hours of cheesy, generic, trope-y romance scenes I'd play something vanilla. A few punchy scenes setting the stage, and then further reinforcing it as the game progresses via thoughts/dialogue/body language, as well as scenes in between the sexy stuff is perfectly sufficient.
Also, love being told what I am and like by someone on the internet who's never even spoken to me. "People who don't want to read five hours of poorly written relationship dialogue aren't actually into cheating." is one hell of a bad take.
The perfect game for my tastes, thank you very much. But i have a problem, game crashes very often in the lab and can't go further
I'm not normally a fan of kinetic novels, but I liked this quite a bit. The visuals are good, the story flow seems good. One of my issues with a lot of kinetic novels is that I have to click through a thousand lines of conversation one sentence at a time. The pacing here is pretty good.
I agree with some that it would be nice to be able to influence things a bit. Even if it's slight variation in dialog, it would be nice. Is that something you plan on adding? I will likely follow this either way, but it would be cool to see some form of choice. Not asking for significant branching, this doesn't seem that kind of story, but maybe some small stuff, altered dialog, maybe slightly different expressions or posture in some of the dialog scenes.
I agree with some that it would be nice to be able to influence things a bit. Even if it's slight variation in dialog, it would be nice. Is that something you plan on adding? I will likely follow this either way, but it would be cool to see some form of choice. Not asking for significant branching, this doesn't seem that kind of story, but maybe some small stuff, altered dialog, maybe slightly different expressions or posture in some of the dialog scenes.
It would be funny that MC get some heart attacks or be able to see his level of lust (corruption) or level of anxiety