Wow that was...bad. The characters didn't look all that great, and the dude needs a proof-reader for his script. Games like these...the occasional typo is fine, but this kind of constant broken English is just distracting.
Also, all those "flash of white" and "movement but not really movement" transitions have to go. Aside from that, maybe the game will be totally different and this was just a demo, but the story moved way too quick. The mother on her knees ready to suck your cock in 2 minutes. Always better to have a bit of seduction. To see her reserve slipping.