There are some things that really stick out visually, like the sad puppy facial expression that is used excessively and the MC's parents looking exactly the same and wearing the same clothes 10 years apart. It's not a simple fix, as it will basically require the dev to get better at DAZ, but there is something else you could remedy.
It's incredibly silly that MC's parents are perpetually referenced as Mama and Papa, even by the adult MC and the narration. You could give them a name... and let this grown ass hard boiled MC refer to them as Mother/Father instead of Mama/Papa.
It's incredibly silly that MC's parents are perpetually referenced as Mama and Papa, even by the adult MC and the narration. You could give them a name... and let this grown ass hard boiled MC refer to them as Mother/Father instead of Mama/Papa.
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well only thing that sucked in the dark path was that Selena was still alive when MC left the stables, and the stables had far to less fire in it ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Gotta agree with a previous poster. The Dark Path with Selena should have been to choose to kill her (or both). Makes no sense to leave her alive and then leave town for her to just go finish the job on Eliza as payback against the MC.
The Light Path seems a bit too forgiving at times, almost would have preferred the Light Path to just ignore them completely after listening in on their conversation or something and then have a Selena interaction at a later date if you were going to follow her romance path. Confronting them only to end up walking away almost as friends again seems weird with what happened.
The Light Path seems a bit too forgiving at times, almost would have preferred the Light Path to just ignore them completely after listening in on their conversation or something and then have a Selena interaction at a later date if you were going to follow her romance path. Confronting them only to end up walking away almost as friends again seems weird with what happened.
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I´m a little confused. A couple of pages ago i read that "in the future" there´s going to be a harem path? Eliza mentioned that she´s never going to share the MC though. So.... is she changing her mind later on or did i already fck up somewhere?
In the last update you can select 'harem path', what it will do? No idea yet.
I even don't see much difference between light and dark path yet...
Future will tell...
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- Feb 5, 2020
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Dark Path is so damn fun. It may lead to a bad ending, but the dopamine hit after every Dark Path choice will be worth it.
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As much as I enjoy being an absolute menace. Killing Selena would have made way more sense. Could've just let the sister go and live happily ever after. Oh well, my bloodthirst was quenched, hopefully, we can finish the job at a later time.
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eh. I´m personally not a fan of the Selena dark path choice. Killing her sister just because Eliza was hurt? Like.... eyebeam through the spine would have done the trick. But killing an innocent person? Sheesh....
Well who does he want to hurt? Selena? Or het sister, selena is hurt now, her sister didn't even notice...
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That's why it's the dark path and not the slightly mean but only on Tuesdays path.
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Big sis, you know that bad guys are edgy, mean, dark haired, slightly to completely creepy but deep inside there's an untouched marshmallow with rainbows and love that the right girl can roast on the campfire of her heart.
...at least that's what I saw on the #booktok
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As a never dark path ever player, all these people not wanting to hurt innocents on the dark path are confusing to me.
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But Eliza has claimed that gooey marshmallowy goodness.
I don't know how much sweetness the Nephy has to share so the more people we splat the more love we have for Eliza and anyone else that has boobs.
This is the first choice that goes above slightly mean, though. There's no progression to it. You can even pick all the light choices up to this point and still get the option to all of a sudden kill an innocent person.
There isn't really a dark path. The MC's not a bad guy outside of the few instances of dark choices. The edgy anime protagonist demeanor is the darkest thing about him really. I wonder what all the good people he surrounds himself with would think about him being a coldblooded murderer, but I don't think it'll actually make a difference.
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People don't understand the dark path, the MC is pure evil with his enemies on this path, there is no middle ground here
I would suggest there is points system, so many places where you can say more or less harem, or more or less light/dark