Jantio1999

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I like the story and understand some of what is happening within the different threads, but I still think that it could be pared down some. I still like it and will keep up, but there does need to be some slimming down.
It could be done in 1 episode,

- parents get killed
- he grows up, find girl
- finds more girls
- kills killer of his parents
- becomes king

End of story...

Unfortunately, this is a series. And series are filled with fillers, some boring, some interesting. But dragged out over a longer time...

That's life... Everything seems to take forever...
 

CSLysander

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It could be done in 1 episode,

- parents get killed
- he grows up, find girl
- finds more girls
- kills killer of his parents
- becomes king

End of story...

Unfortunately, this is a series. And series are filled with fillers, some boring, some interesting. But dragged out over a longer time...

That's life... Everything seems to take forever...
I have no issues with filler, but this has a need for editing. If someone was doing that, it would be a little tighter, while still having side stories. Right now, it is like me when I talk, a lot of rambling and needs to move on at times.
 
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Jantio1999

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I have no issues with filler, but this has a need for editing. If someone was doing that, it would be a little tighter, while still having side stories. Right now, it is like me when I talk, a lot of rambling and needs to move on at times.
Yeh not sure if dev is alone. I just finished the game 2sides, the story writing is really good. But the graphics are a bit simplified. This game has more love for the graphics. Of course the story telling might be a bit let down then. Still I have seen a lot worse...

Probably dev didn't first create the story before doing the graphics. Having a specialist for story, and other for the graphics is also not a bad idea...

I suggest asking him if you can help. Or take the text files:


Improve the text, and send dev....

My personal experience is, it's always a compromise and a fight with time.
 

e6mill

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Yeh not sure if dev is alone. I just finished the game 2sides, the story writing is really good. But the graphics are a bit simplified. This game has more love for the graphics. Of course the story telling might be a bit let down then. Still I have seen a lot worse...
Not my fave choice of subject matter, and IIRC a KN besides. That dev's other one (Almost Dead) is alright tho.
 

Jantio1999

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Side stories are ok, but only if they start and finish within 20% of an update.
Yeh you're totally right, this are 3 temples or so,minimum of 5 episodes where he doesn't see Eliza. It's a bit long... I hope he comes back totally stronger...

But still it's frustrating, every episode you wait for the 'side' story to finish, but it doesn't...
 

OnlyWorthyDevsMakeMoney

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Yeh you're totally right, this are 3 temples or so,minimum of 5 episodes where he doesn't see Eliza. It's a bit long... I hope he comes back totally stronger...

But still it's frustrating, every episode you wait for the 'side' story to finish, but it doesn't...
That's why I will wait for at least a year before resuming. At least the dev is pretty consistent with the development time, so hopefully by next year we will have at least 10 updates more than now.
 
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Jantio1999

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That's why I will wait for at least a year before resuming. At least the dev is pretty consistent with the development time, so hopefully by next year we will have at least 10 updates more than now.
It's not that bad but 10 updates would be nice too...

Unfortunately, what F should I do with the free time now....?
 

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For me it wasn't the fact Eliza was the first girl I actually like Alice more at first. More had to do with I just really enjoy the lovey dovey moments , the comedy and wholesome moments basically everything brought a smile to my face. While the only other Li that comes close to her for me is the princess she has almost the same effect.

I do agree with you I care more about the story in this one than anything else , it always leaves me wanting more most of the time. ( tho I have yet to touch chapter 5 yet)
 
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BuuPlays is one of the few Dev's that have a perfect formula of game. He has great character's , great story, great settings, great lore and he puts out updates on a regular bases. I'm sure i can think of more but this Dev deserves all the support they can get.(y):)
 

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You are right, still hoping for a threesome with those 2. He already sleeps in the middle with both of them naked.

I just don't feel it, he fucks around all the woman, and the woman don't interact with each other. That feels unnatural. But then it's a harem game, and not some polygonic fuck fest...
 
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Skidables

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What ABOUT Alice? :unsure:
Eh, if we were around longer for childhood, Alice would be more popular. It was basically a one-off scene, and then when we met her again, it was already too late for some, since MC was around Eliza for a while. Some got attached to her at that time, not me; it just did not feel natural. Well, none of the relationships feel natural to me.
 

Skidables

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You are right, still hoping for a threesome with those 2. He already sleeps in the middle with both of them naked.

I just don't feel it, he fucks around all the woman, and the woman don't interact with each other. That feels unnatural. But then it's a harem game, and not some polygonic fuck fest...
This is actually one of the unique ways I have seen in a harem game tbh, instead of meeting and all being okay with it, some do not even want to discuss it. It does somewhat make the story awkward, though.
 
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