All the replies here are joking, but here is some serious - albeit opinionated - criticism for the author (if he reads this topic, that is): the MC is ugly. Obviously. But too ugly. To the point where it is jarring, uncanny, where it throws the viewer off, distracts from the main focus which are the (very good looking) women - this is a porn game targeted towards male audiences, after all.
The ugly bastard troupe is quite common, and one with many enjoyers. But it is best when the guy looks worse than your average person, that creepy pervert vibe, maybe fat, mouthbreathing, middle-aged, hairy... not like he is a 3rd degree burn victim who had his face reconstructed by a clandestine thai doctor who thought he wanted a facial harmonization instead.
If your goal is to simply make a game whose content you enjoy yourself, all the power to you! But if you want to attract more people and appeal to a broader audience, you should keep this criticism in mind. As I said, the women look great. Renders aren't perfect, but it is a tricky art to master and since this is your first game, it'll get better over time as you practice more.
Just my three cents. I want to enjoy this, but the MC is way too off-putting.