I think I'm finally giving up on this. It's just... not how a photo NTS story should be done.
Frankly, it's exhausting to read back-to-back-to-back nonstop text chains of what *just happened.*
There are literally countless opportunities to show instead of tell, and they're *never* taken: Ashley peeping on Laura fucking someone in her house and giving you updates, Tara sneaking into the bathroom to snap pics of what Laura is doing, cameras in the house etc etc
When you're at a bar with all the main characters, and your story has everyone texting each other when they're sitting NEXT TO EACH OTHER instead of just talking, you fucked up, imo.
It's a shame, because I love the themes, and the girls are all hella cute, but this game is just exhausting... and the pics just aren't that interesting enough to carry. Feels like there's been no real progression in months.
Frankly, it's exhausting to read back-to-back-to-back nonstop text chains of what *just happened.*
There are literally countless opportunities to show instead of tell, and they're *never* taken: Ashley peeping on Laura fucking someone in her house and giving you updates, Tara sneaking into the bathroom to snap pics of what Laura is doing, cameras in the house etc etc
When you're at a bar with all the main characters, and your story has everyone texting each other when they're sitting NEXT TO EACH OTHER instead of just talking, you fucked up, imo.
It's a shame, because I love the themes, and the girls are all hella cute, but this game is just exhausting... and the pics just aren't that interesting enough to carry. Feels like there's been no real progression in months.