VN Ren'Py Abandoned Neuvau [v1.06.01] [Asmodeus_]

[Loon74]

Second, on the humiliation part, I personally don't equate femdom with humiliation. For me it's just a sub-genre of femdom, even thought that's a popular thing with femdom in porn. For me femdom is about the feminine taking an active role and the masculine taking a passive role (men releasing control in sexual scenarios and women being in charge) and that's the main premise of the game. There is a possibility for humiliation to be included later, but there's no plan for that in the first 12 chapters. The clear thing is that even if it's included, it would be something optional that the MC could avoid.

This approach here had me download and have a look, I'm liking what I've seen so far. A rather more sensual approach from the get go definitely piques my interest so I shall wait to see future developments.

I don't know if it was your intention but at least two of the club trio simply *feel* more mature which is something I definitely appreciate. A lot of others I've seen just seem to focus on same sort of renders and behaviour so age is mentioned as part of story board etc but there's no impression of it actually given.

 

[Asmodeus_]

textbox removed , text shadows added

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extract attached file into mainfolder , overwrite if asked

Hah! I was going to make that change for the next update! So, thank you for that!

 

[Asmodeus_]

looks like there´s something wrong at the script Asmodeus_

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Yeah, you’re right, I must’ve missed something here! Thank you!

 

[sidsan]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script_ch4.rpy", line 205, in <module>
  File "game/script.rpy", line 49, in updateRelationship
NameError: Undefined Character. charName=Tina

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 382, in script call
  File "script_ch4.rpyc", line 205, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 928, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2245, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script_ch4.rpy", line 205, in <module>
  File "game/script.rpy", line 49, in updateRelationship
NameError: Undefined Character. charName=Tina

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Neuvau 1.04
Sun Mar 27 00:08:14 2022

I'm using old saved Asmodeus_

 

[Boehser Onkel]

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/script_ch4.rpy", line 205, in <module>
  File "game/script.rpy", line 49, in updateRelationship
NameError: Undefined Character. charName=Tina

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "script.rpyc", line 382, in script call
  File "script_ch4.rpyc", line 205, in script
  File "renpy/ast.py", line 928, in execute
    renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
  File "renpy/python.py", line 2245, in py_exec_bytecode
    exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/script_ch4.rpy", line 205, in <module>
  File "game/script.rpy", line 49, in updateRelationship
NameError: Undefined Character. charName=Tina

Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.11.2266
Neuvau 1.04
Sun Mar 27 00:08:14 2022

I'm using old saved Asmodeus_

 

[Boehser Onkel]

0x52_URM cheats (WIP)

mc stats /relationship stats // chapter variables (careful with editing this)



choices detection/outcome



extract attached file to *\game folder
!always save before edit!

open mod with alt+m
click the little open folder icon right upper
load a .urm file

how to use : Link

Rename (nearly) everyone,watch this tut -->

You must be registered to see the links

create your own "gallery" (label search) how to --> Link



i recommend always to play the game one time without cheats to understand gamemechanics

mod should work with future updates

this mod does not modify any game files

!use at own risk! - dont complain to dev´s /modder about broken saves/gamestates
(look for a updated 0x52_urm.rpa file every month or 2 at Link, thanks to 0x52
if you like the URM Mod consider support 0x52 -->

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)

 

[Asmodeus_]

0x52_URM cheats (WIP)

mc stats /relationship stats // chapter variables (careful with editing this)

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choices detection/outcome

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extract attached file to *\game folder
!always save before edit!

open mod with alt+m
click the little open folder icon right upper
load a .urm file

how to use : Link

Rename (nearly) everyone,watch this tut -->

You must be registered to see the links

create your own "gallery" (label search) how to --> Link



i recommend always to play the game one time without cheats to understand gamemechanics

mod should work with future updates

this mod does not modify any game files

!use at own risk! - dont complain to dev´s /modder about broken saves/gamestates
(look for a updated 0x52_urm.rpa file every month or 2 at Link, thanks to 0x52
if you like the URM Mod consider support 0x52 -->

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

)

 

[Boehser Onkel]

question:

is it either rika or skyla , or a both "on the field" with andrea for the mc?

 

[Asmodeus_]

This approach here had me download and have a look, I'm liking what I've seen so far. A rather more sensual approach from the get go definitely piques my interest so I shall wait to see future developments.

I don't know if it was your intention but at least two of the club trio simply *feel* more mature which is something I definitely appreciate. A lot of others I've seen just seem to focus on same sort of renders and behaviour so age is mentioned as part of story board etc but there's no impression of it actually given.

I know which two you're referring to, and it is intentional, but I don't want to say more and spoil the fun

And I'm glad you appreciate it and it means a lot to me as a writer!

I'm trying hard to convey a lot of information about the background of the characters through their behaviors and speech. As I've mentioned in a previous post in this thread, for each 10 lines of text there are other 50 lines of background that are being hinted or subtly given. It's subtly given so it doesn't hit you on the face, but for those careful readers they'll get the message!

Also, I want to add to your comment that I hate all these games that introduce characters giving their full background like there's some kind of FBI record of surveillance: "Here's Coco, she's 22, working as a waitress, in her free time she plays tennis, she likes spaghetti and has two friends Momo and Nono. She's also right handed, but wipes with the left."

This is like the most cliché way to introduce characters. And after that introduction, the characters usually doesn't act they way they should. Don't get me wrong, if it's a meet-and-fuck kind of game, then it doesn't matter. But if it's a story based game and you want me to invest in the characters, they need to have some depth. Anyway, I'll stop ranting now

 

[Asmodeus_]

question:

is it either rika or skyla , or a both "on the field" with andrea for the mc?

If you're asking for the future releases, I don't want to spoil it for everyone. So I'll answer in spoiler tags.

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[Boehser Onkel]

If you're asking for the future releases, I don't want to spoil it for everyone. So I'll answer in spoiler tags.

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and for now i picked sweet

 

[Asmodeus_]

Asmodeus_
I found a small mistake...
If you go the dom route + avoiding all girls/situations and the MC is in the shower, he says:
"I recalled the sensations of her ass on my cock."
That doesn't happen if you avoid/decline her request so he can't recall that sensation.

Nice update, keep it up.

I found that bugger!
Thank you for sharing, and thank you for your kind words!

 

[Asmodeus_]

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and for now i picked sweet

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[Asmodeus_]

looks like there´s something wrong at the script Asmodeus_

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Thank you for sharing this. I've checked this part and there are two checks here.

The first is going with "dominance >= 3" and the second one is with "dominance >= 5".
That's why the "required_dominance += 2"

It's not the most elegant code, but it's correct

 

[Loon74]

Well, let's just say that the choice of attire and poses for the renders go a long way towards that, as does the tone of the dialogue. Now that I know to look for more sub text I'll be doing so more and taking my time!

Also I can completely appreciate your very mild rant as somewhat of an avid reader (I've been a little busy this week, only 6 books so far) one of the biggest negatives for me is too much directly presented information. It all needs context, details are usually there but slipped in to conversation or implied rather than directly stated which gives a more natural, organic flow to a scene. If it's all handed out without context it makes things feel more stilted and much harder to read, especially when you parse a lot of information in one go as it ruins the rhythm. It's something of a pet peeve, as you may have gathered

 

[Asmodeus_]

Well, let's just say that the choice of attire and poses for the renders go a long way towards that, as does the tone of the dialogue. Now that I know to look for more sub text I'll be doing so more and taking my time!

Also I can completely appreciate your very mild rant as somewhat of an avid reader (I've been a little busy this week, only 6 books so far) one of the biggest negatives for me is too much directly presented information. It all needs context, details are usually there but slipped in to conversation or implied rather than directly stated which gives a more natural, organic flow to a scene. If it's all handed out without context it makes things feel more stilted and much harder to read, especially when you parse a lot of information in one go as it ruins the rhythm. It's something of a pet peeve, as you may have gathered

I can always appreciate this quality! And thank you for sharing this!

The most useful advice for writers that want to become more proficient is the "show, and not tell". And that means if for example a character is rude, don't tell the reader "he was rude". Instead write a dialog where you SHOW that he's rude, and the reader will deduce that. That makes the script more organic to the reader. But that's easier said than done

 

[2382dudubes]

Looks like cannot continue 1.03 saves in 1.04, got multiple exception errors (NameError: Undefined Character. charName=...) Not a big deal since it was fast to replay, but could become annoying if it takes longer to get back to where we left off.

As a suggestion I recommend including a replay function in the scene guide for unlocked scenes (or name it gallery), so I don't have to have at least 3 save-routes of every attribute stored at all times, it becomes a bit cumbersome, too.

As for the new content, I didn't like it but that's personal preference (I like neither watching urination nor sniffing pants), the couch talk was fine, and masturbation is w/e.

 

[Mrdown]

Reads - About the femdom tag:
Well shhheeeeiitt, sign me up

 

[Asmodeus_]

Looks like cannot continue 1.03 saves in 1.04, got multiple exception errors (NameError: Undefined Character. charName=...) Not a big deal since it was fast to replay, but could become annoying if it takes longer to get back to where we left off.

As a suggestion I recommend including a replay function in the scene guide for unlocked scenes (or name it gallery), so I don't have to have at least 3 save-routes of every attribute stored at all times, it becomes a bit cumbersome, too.

As for the new content, I didn't like it but that's personal preference (I like neither watching urination nor sniffing pants), the couch talk was fine, and masturbation is w/e.

Thank you for sharing that!

Yeah, new variables and a new system made previous saves useless! I think I finally got it right, so going forward it won't continue like that.

And indeed, I plan to add a replay function in the future. If everything goes well, it will be introduced in the next one.

 

[J1215]

I like Leanne(!) and Rika !
It will be great if the main character (MC) has a femdom-relationship-(routes) with Leanne(!) and Rika !

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