Dr.TSoni
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Great update, really looking forward for more.
Luciana's scene was okay, but honestly, I wish it was better. For starters, the animation was quite weird, very choppy and just nowhere as fluid as the other animations in the game (Milena playing with herself on the chair while watching the Arena stream as an example).
As far as the execution of the scene itself, this is how I would've liked it, divided in 3 "phases":
Phase 1 - I would've loved to fuck Luciana in the full nelson position, holding her legs up in the air and having her penetrated pussy right in front of Javi sitting in the cuckchair, with him getting a full view of her face and cunt while Luci's being impaled on my cock. She cums buckets and ends up squirting bigtime - and most of her fluids end up in Javi's face;
Phase 2 - Then, after she had already cummed (and hopefully squirted on Javi's face), I'd "throw" her on the carpet and have her finish me off with her mouth, and getting a massive sloppy facial as a result. She is touching herself while doing it, and her fluids drip onto the carpet dirtying it more than just semen as a result of the sloppy facial;
Phase 3 - Then, because the MC is a fucking harem AVN protag with stamina for days, I'd go for a round two with Luci, this time doggystyle just like how the game has it. Except that in this version, her face being close to Javi would also be dripping with semen while she's holding on to the chair and is taking her pleasure, unable to hold it in .
All that with smooth animations and angles that emphasize the eroticism of the situation.
If we're doing netori with a girl who is in a relationship with a fucking loser such as Javi (which makes my opinion of the girl herself go down on account of her standards and her putting out to such a guy), then might as well go all out.
With all that said, I really liked the update and am looking forward for more. I also would really like to see Aquila be a part of this "expedition" that is being formed. Just might be that her talents would be very suited for it.
Luciana's scene was okay, but honestly, I wish it was better. For starters, the animation was quite weird, very choppy and just nowhere as fluid as the other animations in the game (Milena playing with herself on the chair while watching the Arena stream as an example).
As far as the execution of the scene itself, this is how I would've liked it, divided in 3 "phases":
Phase 1 - I would've loved to fuck Luciana in the full nelson position, holding her legs up in the air and having her penetrated pussy right in front of Javi sitting in the cuckchair, with him getting a full view of her face and cunt while Luci's being impaled on my cock. She cums buckets and ends up squirting bigtime - and most of her fluids end up in Javi's face;
Phase 2 - Then, after she had already cummed (and hopefully squirted on Javi's face), I'd "throw" her on the carpet and have her finish me off with her mouth, and getting a massive sloppy facial as a result. She is touching herself while doing it, and her fluids drip onto the carpet dirtying it more than just semen as a result of the sloppy facial;
Phase 3 - Then, because the MC is a fucking harem AVN protag with stamina for days, I'd go for a round two with Luci, this time doggystyle just like how the game has it. Except that in this version, her face being close to Javi would also be dripping with semen while she's holding on to the chair and is taking her pleasure, unable to hold it in .
All that with smooth animations and angles that emphasize the eroticism of the situation.
If we're doing netori with a girl who is in a relationship with a fucking loser such as Javi (which makes my opinion of the girl herself go down on account of her standards and her putting out to such a guy), then might as well go all out.
With all that said, I really liked the update and am looking forward for more. I also would really like to see Aquila be a part of this "expedition" that is being formed. Just might be that her talents would be very suited for it.
I mean really don't get the Faustina hate either, she's a big arrogant but I put that more down to culture then her as an individual given her overall policies, and yeah there's our personal beef but I can put it aside given both a) the cost of revenge really isn't worth it at this point and b) I'd like to hold out and see how she makes it up to me 
Err you should read Luci's codex, she's got a clear personality disorder and it explains why she's with an idiot like Javi pretty convincingly
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Luci got bullied into it by the sister of that lunatic - the doctor who is a controlling nimpho bullying and manipulating the young ones in the royal family
- she is a true henchmaiden of the queen.
- she is a true henchmaiden of the queen.
The guy manages to coast on the pitty back of his sister while the doctor just refuses to admit to his utter failure and could not bring herself to commit the gambling addict to the holding cells of her labs before the lawn sharks or debt collectors begin hurting her, Luci and everyone else they would find in their path.
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Sennistrasz
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She's literally the Roman Empress, I'm not sure why she shouldn't be the most arrogant person alive.I mean really don't get the Faustina hate either, she's a big arrogant but I put that more down to culture then her as an individual given her overall policies, and yeah there's our personal beef but I can put it aside given both a) the cost of revenge really isn't worth it at this point and b) I'd like to hold out and see how she makes it up to me
Wow, 1st thks man for the package but I also wanted to know, is that universal choice descritpor a thing like URM?
If so, could you share a link to the thread, I could search for it but I'd rly appreciate it if you could spare me this effort.
THX
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What a nice little gem this is, story is interesting and the love interests are hot af.
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MrBenny
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Hi...and yes it's sort of like URM. But it's limited in features, as well it's use is that it just displays the info right on your screen (URM has a box that the user has to physically expand to review it's contents). As well URM is more for editing and searching further for more details in a Ren'Py script.
I normally use both mods together (where there isn't a wt mod), as UCD doesn't always work for some story choices...but URM does. Usually URM is good to work along side most wt mods, as it can find their mistakes. (missed or wrong points, seeing and bypassing requirement check requirements, etc.)
Here is the link...Universal Choice Descriptor mod.
Also, another good mod to have a copy of is the Universal Music Mod (Player). Which I use when titles don't have any music or sounds to them...as this full feature music player can play any MP3 or music file while the user is reading through a Ren'Py AVN title.
Regards.
Tomy75
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I'm with you on both points:
1 - Cicero wanted MC to give the documents to Stavros because he is also clearly the one who sent Josef to visit Dante in order to prepare a revolution against Faustina. The documents would give them an attack strategy thanks to the map of the underground tunnels.
2 - Yep, Safiya will not admit it in front of the MC but she's clearly in love since the time they shared in the cell.
Learning that the dock-girl is in fact Adaeze was also a big surprise that nobody mentioned here. MC met her in the arena (her very first BJ, remember?). I don't think she likes Cicero much, maybe he's blackmailing her because he needs her incredible power. She could be a future ally of great value to the MC.
OWSam000
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The transformation girl aka dock girl is the girl in arena who gave BJ to MC? I can't really recognize her.
Garen
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High kino coming off of Episode 4 meeting room scene with the perfect music choice. I'm really enjoying the story now.
The first couple episodes were a snoozefest due to the script being too verbose with high-flown vocabulary but I'm glad I got through them. The worldbuilding is fantastic. Love when devs put in that extra oomph (the details about the Civil War).
The pacing is great since prison and the characters feel real and likable. Even that git Enzo has his moments.
The first couple episodes were a snoozefest due to the script being too verbose with high-flown vocabulary but I'm glad I got through them. The worldbuilding is fantastic. Love when devs put in that extra oomph (the details about the Civil War).
The pacing is great since prison and the characters feel real and likable. Even that git Enzo has his moments.
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I agree that there is high value in having Adaeze in thrall to the possibly Cerberal Cicero, with MC allyship in her future. But are we CERTAIN that dock-girl is "in fact" Adaeze? Shape shifters can change skins to suit, and how can we be sure that this isn't just another ploy to fool MC? And after such a nice debut BJ, increasing trust? Just sayin...
louisamay
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Agree on all points, EXCEPT! WTF is/was the beautiful and whipsmart Lucie doing with such an irredeemably horrible dude like Javi?? I understand her codexed "self-esteem" issues, but come on. I'm sorry, but making Javi so ugly, greedy, selfish, manipulative, AND an addict to boot just makes her seem retarded. Couldn't he at least be cute? More to work with there, IMHO. I mean even Ollie the Ferryman was at least a little cute. It would have made that hotly written dom scene when MC makes Javi watch bearable -- personally, knowing he was there, and especially when she was in his face, was a turn-off for me, even though my insides knew this was a hot scene. To be clear, this peeve did NOT move the dial for me away from 5-starness, it was just "well, that's too bad.." The game is still superior to 99.5% of its competitors.
Just wanted to add, like many others already have, that Faustina is the best girl in this game.
Followed by Safiya. The rest are fodder.
Followed by Safiya. The rest are fodder.
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