VN Ren'Py New Horizon [v0.2.1] [KawaiiSukebe]

[bacchus69]

I just finished, and my first impression is, wow... the author likes to write too much. The quality and content of the writing are good, but it's way too much. It affects the pacing. The MC and his LIs speak more in one scene than any of us do in a month. Plus, it's formal speaking, which makes it hard to read for a prolonged period.

Another point. Can somebody please inform the MC that he is the protagonist of an erotic novel and act like one?

To each their own but the writing in this game is its biggest selling point for me. Too many writers like to bloviate with hackneyed dialogue that adds little to the story other than to prolong it. Here, the writing actually significantly contributes to making the characters have emotional depth which makes the sex scenes even better.